Comments received on poems by Candlewitch



Cheat (by: eddy styx)
Simple-Man87 said:

I absolutely love \"barbed wire glares.\"
Great line and great write. Thank you for sharing.

September 15th, 2017 11:35

Cheat (by: eddy styx)
lasergraph said:

Good your thoughts weren\'t penned up. Thanks for letting them out for us.

September 15th, 2017 10:51

Gardens Of Stone
Goldfinch60 said:

Very sad emotive but very good write Cat.

September 13th, 2017 01:06

Gardens Of Stone
Louis Gibbs said:

\"memories I buried in gardens of stone.\" Oh how this resonates with me! Well stated, Cat. I can appreciate this one.

September 12th, 2017 16:42

Gardens Of Stone
FredPeyer said:

So well written, Cat! Your writing somehow shines beauty into the sadness. Don\'t know if I expressed that correctly, don\'t really know how to say it.

September 12th, 2017 12:01

Gardens Of Stone
lasergraph said:

Quite a journey. We all rope off those parts that are forbidden to others. I enjoyed the journey.

September 12th, 2017 11:13

Gardens Of Stone
Michael Edwards said:

Great write Cat

September 12th, 2017 11:11

Gardens Of Stone
Fay Slimm. said:

Such a poignant and compelling read Cat - - love the unique subject and the rhyming is first class .

September 12th, 2017 10:19

Blind Choices
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, you must always keep going \'straight as an arrow\'.

September 11th, 2017 01:07

Blind Choices
dusk arising said:

Great thoughts expressed here. Yes you have to take a leap of faith when its really important. Give it everything, throw doubt to the wind. If you\'re right you win, if you\'re wrong then you know you did your very best to prevail.. Well expressed dilemma.

September 10th, 2017 16:16

Blind Choices
orchidee said:

Good write Cat.

September 10th, 2017 13:57

Blind Choices
poetboy5454 said:

Wonderful flow and rhythm detailing a problem many of us deal with, brilliant piece!

September 10th, 2017 12:25

Blind Choices
F.G. Franklin said:

An interesting read, I\'ve seen many an effort get obscured by unwarranted emotions or fears. You are so right that a leap of faith is sometimes required to overcome our hesitancy in such cases. But once we reach our objective we usually sit there asking ourselves what we were afraid of and why. Very thought provoking stuff. I enjoyed.

September 10th, 2017 12:01

Shade Of My Shadow (by: eddy styx)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Tick tock. The clock never stops. Tick tock.

September 5th, 2017 01:25

Shade Of My Shadow (by: eddy styx)
Frank Prem said:

Enjoyed much Cat. I don\'t know the reference to eddy styx though, I\'m afraid?

September 4th, 2017 17:57

Shade Of My Shadow (by: eddy styx)
Mugsdaddy said:

NICE. Clever, dark excellent work. Enjoyed it a lot.

September 4th, 2017 17:08

Shade Of My Shadow (by: eddy styx)
Michael Edwards said:

A bunch of time - great write Cat - err Eddy

September 4th, 2017 16:00

Shade Of My Shadow (by: eddy styx)
Accidental Poet said:

Time waits for no one, except eddy. ; )

September 4th, 2017 15:10

Shade Of My Shadow (by: eddy styx)
FredPeyer said:

Yes, time does it every time!!!
You got that right, eddy!

September 4th, 2017 14:32

Shade Of My Shadow (by: eddy styx)
Louis Gibbs said:

I love this brutal revelation of the eternal stalker ... time. Kudos, Cat/Eddy!

September 4th, 2017 14:08

Shade Of My Shadow (by: eddy styx)
sue.evans said:

Great use of language to create the mystery and shadow of your poem.

September 4th, 2017 13:58

Shade Of My Shadow (by: eddy styx)
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah the inevitable ticking away - a fabulous array of linguistic shades in in this rant against time. Great read Cat.

September 4th, 2017 13:47

Antiquity
Goldfinch60 said:

Time is an illusion that changes its speed all the while. Good write Cat.

September 3rd, 2017 01:00

Dark Invitation... by eddy styx
malubotelho said:

I was laughing hard here after reading DA comments. So funny 😂. It could be bacon instead of beacon. Sometimes I wonder if EDDY dies get upset sometimes. We know Eddy and instead of getting scared it is getting funny. Sorry Eddy. Thanks for the great poem and for the laughing.

September 2nd, 2017 21:25

Antiquity
malubotelho said:

Awesome writing Kat. Sometimes I like to try to put myself out of time. I don\'t use the alarm because I say; doesn\'t matter what time I walk up. Then about work I say; it is ok not to measure time. And sometimes I just stare at the clock to see the time passing. Maybe I\'m crazy. Anyone there does that?

September 2nd, 2017 20:38

Antiquity
Accidental Poet said:

So much can be said of time and what we do or don\'t do with it. I think time is something that beckons all poets to write of. Superb write Cat. ; )

September 2nd, 2017 17:38

Antiquity
BlueDays said:

I find time a funny thing. We run our lives by it and we measure everything with it. It\'s always too slow or too fast, there\'s never enough or there\'s way too much. \"Hurry up winter, where is the sun?!\" \"Ohhh I wish I didn\'t have work in the morning, I want to stay up all night!\" Something you find yourself desperately wanting to pass and in the same breath not wanting to move at all. I like routine but I also feel strangled by its constraints.
Hmm, this poem has made me think a lot. Thank you 😊

September 2nd, 2017 16:11

Antiquity
FredPeyer said:

\'ticking away measured lifetimes\'
Cat, your writing is awesome, don\'t know how else to say it.
Well, my clock is ticking too, so I better hurry up and write something before it is too late! :-)

September 2nd, 2017 13:39

Antiquity
dusk arising said:

\"Does anybody really know what time it is, does anybody really care, if so i cant imagine why, we alll have time enough to die\" lyrics from ChicagoTransitAuthority later to become Chicago. Time.... i had a go at writing about it a few poems back. i like your writing here because it deals in abstract way with time and the more you get your brain around this time thing then the more abstract and bizarre our understanding and interpretation of time becomes.

September 2nd, 2017 13:26

Antiquity
orchidee said:

A fine write Cat.

September 2nd, 2017 12:07



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