Comments received on poems by Candlewitch



Then Came The Night
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Cat.

August 21st, 2017 10:36

Then Came The Night
malubotelho said:

Such a beauty. You are a great poetess candle witch. So awesome. Sad and beautiful ending.

August 21st, 2017 10:29

The Passage (by:eddy styx)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write eddy, I do like the lines:

for the morning hours
had bled,
sunshine

this is a wonderful visualisation.

August 21st, 2017 01:13

The Passage (by:eddy styx)
Azura Nightsong said:

Awesome poem!

I myself can\'t wait for the eclipse, even though I don\'t have the proper eyewear to see it. Ah well.

Sincerely, Azuranna

August 20th, 2017 18:45

The Passage (by:eddy styx)
Michael Edwards said:

What a great write and that line \'the morning hours had bled sunshine\' - well I\'m envious - I wish it was mine - it\'s an \'A\' Grade Cat

August 20th, 2017 12:22

The Passage (by:eddy styx)
burning-embers said:

Grrr the predator. Not the sort of thing i would read to a child in my vincent price voice by candle light you understand.... but darned good fun. Nice writing

August 20th, 2017 11:42

The Passage (by:eddy styx)
orchidee said:

Cooeeee Eddie. Why am I calling him? He might bite me! lol.

August 20th, 2017 10:43

The Passage (by:eddy styx)
malubotelho said:

No need to say how good it is because you are a talent. Either Kat or Eddy.

August 20th, 2017 10:38

The Passage (by:eddy styx)
malubotelho said:

Your poem or Eddy Styx poem seems like the day here today. Begun nice and them it is dark, thundering and raining. The birds left and hide somewhere. No singing any happiness today. At least for now.

August 20th, 2017 10:37

The Passage (by:eddy styx)
Fay Slimm. said:

Oooooh - the build up to the scary black hound\'s appearance makes my hair lose its curl Cat - - - great atmosphere in this piece of dark poetry.

August 20th, 2017 09:44

Arid Heart
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true, watching the world at present can drain all our tears from our souls.

August 20th, 2017 00:45

Arid Heart
Michael Edwards said:

So well put Cat = Certainly as far as news of suffering is concerned we are becoming immune to it thanks to overload - a sad world.

August 19th, 2017 23:50

Arid Heart
Accidental Poet said:

A sign of the times. Excellent write Cat.

August 19th, 2017 22:33

Arid Heart
rrodriguez said:

Wow... So arid... Where can it find redpite and be open to the flow of love? Strong emotions indeed. Well expressed poem.

August 19th, 2017 21:26

Arid Heart
burning-embers said:

Remember watergate affair? That had me arrid. Odd thing about being arrid is how, when it appears, the water of life is soaked up and you take on your natural form again. Intriguing writing

August 19th, 2017 20:22

Implosion (by eddy styx)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write in spite of the pain. May your pain be eased.

August 18th, 2017 00:54

Implosion (by eddy styx)
FredPeyer said:

Never had one myself, but my wife had it, my sister in law has it....I feel for you and hope you can make it go away!
But if that is what it takes for you to write something as good as this poem, maybe you should grit your teeth, hang on a little longer, and keep on writing!

August 17th, 2017 17:44

Implosion (by eddy styx)
Michael Edwards said:

So sorry to hear of this Cat BUT it\'s given inspiration for a crackingly good write . Oops Put (c) after crackingly.

August 17th, 2017 13:56

Implosion (by eddy styx)
malubotelho said:

Sorry to hear the suffering. Nice writing though.

August 17th, 2017 13:39

Implosion (by eddy styx)
Louis Gibbs said:

So sorry for the pain you suffer, Cat! I know these types of headaches are no fun, to say the least. Well expressed in your poem!

August 17th, 2017 10:50

Implosion (by eddy styx)
Nicholas Browning said:

Migraines suck. Best wishes.

August 17th, 2017 10:19

On Paper (for Donald Trump)
poetboy5454 said:

You\'ve written about a topic that is very important to all of us and eventually should be brought up at a certain point if you do feel inclined to do so. This was a nice, fun poem, but I must say Trump is only part of a larger problem.

August 16th, 2017 20:12

On Paper (for Donald Trump)
Accidental Poet said:

I can appreciate your write here Cat. You\'ve voiced your opinion on something that you\'re very concerned about. I\'m not a real political person, but I do feel that the person elected president of my country is a disgrace and has no business being anywhere near the oval office. DUMP the TRUMP!

August 16th, 2017 19:53

On Paper (for Donald Trump)
Louis Gibbs said:

It saddens me to see this fine forum for poetry deteriorate into a platform for political views. Is nothing sacred? Do not poets serve a more important role in society than political bashing? Please don\'t drag down this forum that I love with such as this. Please!

August 16th, 2017 12:05

On Paper (for Donald Trump)
Michael Edwards said:

Viewed from the outside he certainly does your great country no favours.

August 16th, 2017 11:08

On Paper (for Donald Trump)
malubotelho said:

I run from my country sad about the corruption and the politics. Now I don\'t know where to run any more. Must stay and face the shame. Nice writing.

August 16th, 2017 10:54

On Paper (for Donald Trump)
FredPeyer said:

Love your poem, Cat. As far as I am concerned, he is not only unfit to rule, he is an embarrassment and danger.
(To all Trump supporters, this is my own personal opinion. Everybody is free to think and vote as he pleases!)

August 16th, 2017 10:44

Transition by: eddy styx
Azura Nightsong said:

Insanity is sometimes beautiful
Like all of your poems!
Nice work as always eddy!
Sincerely, Azuranna

August 15th, 2017 17:44

Transition by: eddy styx
Night Owl said:

Ohh love the image of the jar-- my mind is adding the sound fx to this one-- good stuff CW!

August 15th, 2017 06:25

Transition by: eddy styx
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, may that butterfly always fly freely in her world.

August 15th, 2017 00:26



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