Comments received on poems by Candlewitch



Transition by: eddy styx
Heather T said:

Eddy, did you know that besides nectar, butterflies are attracted to tears, sweat, blood, and rotting corpses? Fascinating glimpse into your skewed romance. Love it!

August 14th, 2017 21:19

Transition by: eddy styx
FredPeyer said:

Butterflies are meant to be free, not trapped in a jar. So put away your net Eddy and go sulk in a corner.
Very delicate writing for a dark guy.

August 14th, 2017 20:57

Transition by: eddy styx
malubotelho said:

It is sure a beautiful thing to whatch a woman change from an innocent girl during the day to a hot seductress at night but then there comes Eddy to murder her or at least to keep her incaged. I\'m still scared 😳. Beautiful writing. I think Eddy was quite romantic here. 😂😂😂

August 14th, 2017 12:29

Transition by: eddy styx
Louis Gibbs said:

The transition you reference is an amazing thing to behold, indeed ... \"moth to butterfly\" captures it so well. Great poem, Eddy!

August 14th, 2017 11:13

Transition by: eddy styx
Michael Edwards said:

Like dark chocolate - dark but good. Nice work Eddy.

August 14th, 2017 10:51

Lover\'s Wasteland
malubotelho said:

You know how to write and you can write beautifully on any subject. I love the methafors you use here and it is a great story. Sorry for your ex but this is what happens all the time. One great mistake to get mixed about sex and love. Lust is not love and does not last. The true love has nothing to do with sex. I\'ve came to learn about this very late in life. Thanks Cat for this writing.

August 14th, 2017 07:28

Lover\'s Wasteland
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write Kat, a portrtait of a misguided person.

August 14th, 2017 01:28

Lover\'s Wasteland
Heather T said:

Unfortunate, people that love best in metaphor. I knew from title and author that I would nod my head. Awesome spill of his loss and your future love story! *huggles*

August 13th, 2017 21:36

Lover\'s Wasteland
burning-embers said:

i think this is a picture so many men have in their heads too. its good reading and should be taught to every young man in life studies. maybe then there would be less divorce. excellent

August 13th, 2017 21:32

Lover\'s Wasteland
Fay Slimm. said:

Such a pathos coming from these lines of visions carried for only the thought of her inside his head.Hugs for the strength you showed Cat.

August 13th, 2017 13:37

Lover\'s Wasteland
orchidee said:

A fine write Cat.

August 13th, 2017 10:14

Lover\'s Wasteland
Azura Nightsong said:

What a beautiful poem, and it portrays its meaning well.
Sincerely, Azuranna

August 13th, 2017 10:11

Lover\'s Wasteland
Accidental Poet said:

The lesson you learned was well directed upon refusing to take him back. Maybe he learned a lesson of loss, maybe. Great write Cat.

August 13th, 2017 07:58

Lover\'s Wasteland
Louis Gibbs said:

He sounds like a pretty lonely dude. You portray him well, Cat!

August 13th, 2017 07:34

Famine Of The Soul (by:eddy styx)
Goldfinch60 said:

Another good dark write eddy.

August 13th, 2017 02:04

Famine Of The Soul (by:eddy styx)
malubotelho said:

Very impressive writing.

August 12th, 2017 23:48

Famine Of The Soul (by:eddy styx)
Azura Nightsong said:

Beautifully dark, the corruption of all. Awesome write, I love dark poetry! (Perhaps it\'s the teenage angst but whatever)

August 12th, 2017 18:52

Famine Of The Soul (by:eddy styx)
Fay Slimm. said:

A dark reminder that hunger wins in a world given to self - - great read.

August 12th, 2017 17:23

Famine Of The Soul (by:eddy styx)
FredPeyer said:

After this, even though it is very, very good, I want to go back to Cat!

August 12th, 2017 12:32

Famine Of The Soul (by:eddy styx)
Louis Gibbs said:

Another dark beauty ,Cat! Congratulations on capturing the dark side so well.

August 12th, 2017 11:59

Famine Of The Soul (by:eddy styx)
orchidee said:

Is Eddie infesting like fleas?! heehee. A fine dark write.

August 12th, 2017 10:00

Chimes
Night Owl said:

Your title just drew me in-- excellent! Your craft with words takes me to another time and place...

August 12th, 2017 08:36

Famine Of The Soul (by:eddy styx)
Night Owl said:

Oh made my shoulders arch up-- the dark tension-- Good write!

August 12th, 2017 08:28

Beauty?
Night Owl said:

That\'s gooood!

August 12th, 2017 03:26

Chimes
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderfully emotive write.

August 12th, 2017 00:21

Chimes
FredPeyer said:

I am sure every one of us would love to be engraved on somebody\'s book of life. Great poem, Cat!

August 11th, 2017 21:50

Chimes
malubotelho said:

Beautiful congregation of words. A pleasure to read.

August 11th, 2017 15:39

Chimes
Michael Edwards said:

Steven is a lucky guy. Love this poem - forgive me but I prefer your work to Eddies - well just a tad anyway.

August 11th, 2017 14:38

Chimes
orchidee said:

Ohhh, and I thought you wrote it for me! heehee. swoon! (same name though!).

August 11th, 2017 13:40

Chimes
WriteBeLight said:

I can feel the love you have for him Cat. Very lovely.

August 11th, 2017 12:42



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