Comments received on poems by Candlewitch
half-light (by: eddy styx)
Azura Nightsong said:
Very interesting as always, any poems involving night time always enthrall me, perhaps because of the nights call. Hmm that gives me a good idea....
Anyhow, wonderful write as always,
Sincerely, Azuranna
August 7th, 2017 14:30
Azura Nightsong said:
Very interesting as always, any poems involving night time always enthrall me, perhaps because of the nights call. Hmm that gives me a good idea....
Anyhow, wonderful write as always,
Sincerely, Azuranna
August 7th, 2017 14:30
half-light (by: eddy styx)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks EDDY ~ You are NAUGHTY but I like you ! This is very sensuous Poem and I have a good (or should that be BAD ?) imagination ~ so i perceive exactly what EDDY\'s answer (and action !) will be ~ The lady will be unable to resist ~Because it\'s EDDY ! Love you CAT for posting this ~ delicious ! BRIAN XOX
August 7th, 2017 12:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks EDDY ~ You are NAUGHTY but I like you ! This is very sensuous Poem and I have a good (or should that be BAD ?) imagination ~ so i perceive exactly what EDDY\'s answer (and action !) will be ~ The lady will be unable to resist ~Because it\'s EDDY ! Love you CAT for posting this ~ delicious ! BRIAN XOX
August 7th, 2017 12:52
the witness
malubotelho said:
Reading this I can see how luck I was and still am with my family. It might be why I have that soft side with me. I\'m sorry for you Cat. No one deserves to have an unloving mother but I know a lot of the pain is transfered generation to generation through family mistreating.
August 7th, 2017 11:30
malubotelho said:
Reading this I can see how luck I was and still am with my family. It might be why I have that soft side with me. I\'m sorry for you Cat. No one deserves to have an unloving mother but I know a lot of the pain is transfered generation to generation through family mistreating.
August 7th, 2017 11:30
half-light (by: eddy styx)
Heather T said:
Chilling piece on half-light intentions, eddy. Shuddery work!
August 7th, 2017 11:26
Heather T said:
Chilling piece on half-light intentions, eddy. Shuddery work!
August 7th, 2017 11:26
the witness
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a powerful write and so very sad. Much respect to you in being able to write about it.
August 7th, 2017 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a powerful write and so very sad. Much respect to you in being able to write about it.
August 7th, 2017 01:20
the witness
FredPeyer said:
Cat, this is so powerful and emotional. I admire you for putting these words on paper and hope that the act of writing it out will be at least a tiny little bit of help for you.
As a parent, I have no words for what happened to you, it is so far out of the norm, it is inconceivable.
August 6th, 2017 15:18
FredPeyer said:
Cat, this is so powerful and emotional. I admire you for putting these words on paper and hope that the act of writing it out will be at least a tiny little bit of help for you.
As a parent, I have no words for what happened to you, it is so far out of the norm, it is inconceivable.
August 6th, 2017 15:18
the witness
Fay Slimm. said:
So tragic your account of family dysfunction dear Cat this verse had its power no doubt from those terrible times- - coping must birth inner strength which your writing has shown. - Big Cornish hugs for sharing sich childhood my friend.
August 6th, 2017 14:42
Fay Slimm. said:
So tragic your account of family dysfunction dear Cat this verse had its power no doubt from those terrible times- - coping must birth inner strength which your writing has shown. - Big Cornish hugs for sharing sich childhood my friend.
August 6th, 2017 14:42
the witness
Michael Edwards said:
What a horrid story - I really feel for you - pleased you are able to write about it so well.
August 6th, 2017 14:15
Michael Edwards said:
What a horrid story - I really feel for you - pleased you are able to write about it so well.
August 6th, 2017 14:15
the witness
Azura Nightsong said:
Very interesting and powerful poem. I am sorry for what happened. Some people.... I just don\'t understand it.
August 6th, 2017 10:28
Azura Nightsong said:
Very interesting and powerful poem. I am sorry for what happened. Some people.... I just don\'t understand it.
August 6th, 2017 10:28
the witness
WriteBeLight said:
Sorry for this experience Candlewitch. Horrible! I am glad you could write about it. You did a great job putting it to paper!
August 6th, 2017 10:11
WriteBeLight said:
Sorry for this experience Candlewitch. Horrible! I am glad you could write about it. You did a great job putting it to paper!
August 6th, 2017 10:11
the witness
orchidee said:
Hmm, I find it a bit unusual after this, that your MALE alter ego comes out of the \'cupboard\' now and again, when a FEMALE had done such dreadful things in your family.
August 6th, 2017 09:39
orchidee said:
Hmm, I find it a bit unusual after this, that your MALE alter ego comes out of the \'cupboard\' now and again, when a FEMALE had done such dreadful things in your family.
August 6th, 2017 09:39
the witness
Louis Gibbs said:
It is so true ... as a child growing up in a dysfunctional family you don\'t know that it isn\'t the norm. This strong poem hits home, Cat. Well done!
August 6th, 2017 09:37
Louis Gibbs said:
It is so true ... as a child growing up in a dysfunctional family you don\'t know that it isn\'t the norm. This strong poem hits home, Cat. Well done!
August 6th, 2017 09:37
the witness
burning-embers said:
Thought provoking strong work my friend. Yes who indeed is the killer, in this now accepted crime against humanity - the parent, the paid executioner, the government or society. We condone this. We must accept and share the guilt for every murder.
August 6th, 2017 09:00
burning-embers said:
Thought provoking strong work my friend. Yes who indeed is the killer, in this now accepted crime against humanity - the parent, the paid executioner, the government or society. We condone this. We must accept and share the guilt for every murder.
August 6th, 2017 09:00
Soul Dancing
Night Owl said:
Love the rhythm of this- Took me back in time... Lovely!
August 6th, 2017 04:17
Night Owl said:
Love the rhythm of this- Took me back in time... Lovely!
August 6th, 2017 04:17
In Her Bed by:(eddy styx)
FredPeyer said:
eddie, you conjured up the mother of a nightmare here. Imagining that somebody or something like eddie could be lying right beside me, smelling my fear, runs goosebumps down my arms.
August 5th, 2017 13:15
FredPeyer said:
eddie, you conjured up the mother of a nightmare here. Imagining that somebody or something like eddie could be lying right beside me, smelling my fear, runs goosebumps down my arms.
August 5th, 2017 13:15
Beauty?
burning-embers said:
Superb writing candlewitch. Reminds me of.... best not say. However, all you lovely ladies out there, theres a little bit of this, or parts of it, in you all. Allure i thinks its called. And i am but a piece of scrap metal attracted to its magnetism.
August 5th, 2017 11:38
burning-embers said:
Superb writing candlewitch. Reminds me of.... best not say. However, all you lovely ladies out there, theres a little bit of this, or parts of it, in you all. Allure i thinks its called. And i am but a piece of scrap metal attracted to its magnetism.
August 5th, 2017 11:38
In Her Bed by:(eddy styx)
malubotelho said:
I can take the challenge. You go beneath many layers to write this dark poetry. I know we all have that dark side but to bring it out as clearly as you do is not easy. My dark side is more mistic than realistic like yours. I see what I can get.
August 5th, 2017 09:31
malubotelho said:
I can take the challenge. You go beneath many layers to write this dark poetry. I know we all have that dark side but to bring it out as clearly as you do is not easy. My dark side is more mistic than realistic like yours. I see what I can get.
August 5th, 2017 09:31
Wolf...
Night Owl said:
I don\'t know who this is being new, but I keep hearing in my head > Yes indeed! Yes indeed! Yes indeed!
Great read Candlewitch!
August 5th, 2017 09:15
Night Owl said:
I don\'t know who this is being new, but I keep hearing in my head > Yes indeed! Yes indeed! Yes indeed!
Great read Candlewitch!
August 5th, 2017 09:15
In The Reeds (by: eddy styx)
Night Owl said:
Gorgeous words and visuals...like your beautiful silver hair, it\'s rich with texture and flow~ I\'m loving the play of shadow and light...
August 5th, 2017 09:04
Night Owl said:
Gorgeous words and visuals...like your beautiful silver hair, it\'s rich with texture and flow~ I\'m loving the play of shadow and light...
August 5th, 2017 09:04
In Her Bed by:(eddy styx)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS CAT ~ You have a wonderful imagination ~ but beware we all have a bit of EDDY STYX in us ~ love the last line \"the aroma of her fear\" Hugs & TLC ~ BRIAN XOX Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B.
August 5th, 2017 08:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS CAT ~ You have a wonderful imagination ~ but beware we all have a bit of EDDY STYX in us ~ love the last line \"the aroma of her fear\" Hugs & TLC ~ BRIAN XOX Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B.
August 5th, 2017 08:48
In Her Bed by:(eddy styx)
Louis Gibbs said:
He\'s a boogey man for sure! Well expressed, Cat!
August 5th, 2017 08:37
Louis Gibbs said:
He\'s a boogey man for sure! Well expressed, Cat!
August 5th, 2017 08:37
Beauty?
Goldfinch60 said:
Are any of us what we seem. We all put on different masks in differing situations. Good write Cat.
August 5th, 2017 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Are any of us what we seem. We all put on different masks in differing situations. Good write Cat.
August 5th, 2017 00:11
Beauty?
Bibbeck said:
Lovely write Candlewitch; I enjoyed it. She does sound beautiful, but in the eyes of which beholder.
August 4th, 2017 14:04
Bibbeck said:
Lovely write Candlewitch; I enjoyed it. She does sound beautiful, but in the eyes of which beholder.
August 4th, 2017 14:04
Beauty?
FredPeyer said:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and sometimes gold turns into a lump of coal. Really like your poem, Cat!
August 4th, 2017 13:56
FredPeyer said:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and sometimes gold turns into a lump of coal. Really like your poem, Cat!
August 4th, 2017 13:56
Beauty?
Fay Slimm. said:
You captured such falseness with impressive rhyme Cat -these sort of beauties leave much to be desired
August 4th, 2017 12:44
Fay Slimm. said:
You captured such falseness with impressive rhyme Cat -these sort of beauties leave much to be desired
August 4th, 2017 12:44
Beauty?
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly there are women like this - err - and men.
August 4th, 2017 11:37
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly there are women like this - err - and men.
August 4th, 2017 11:37
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