Comments received on poems by Candlewitch



half-light (by: eddy styx)
Azura Nightsong said:

Very interesting as always, any poems involving night time always enthrall me, perhaps because of the nights call. Hmm that gives me a good idea....
Anyhow, wonderful write as always,
Sincerely, Azuranna

August 7th, 2017 14:30

half-light (by: eddy styx)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks EDDY ~ You are NAUGHTY but I like you ! This is very sensuous Poem and I have a good (or should that be BAD ?) imagination ~ so i perceive exactly what EDDY\'s answer (and action !) will be ~ The lady will be unable to resist ~Because it\'s EDDY ! Love you CAT for posting this ~ delicious ! BRIAN XOX

August 7th, 2017 12:52

half-light (by: eddy styx)
WriteBeLight said:

Creepy :) The silent shoe.....

August 7th, 2017 11:47

the witness
malubotelho said:

Reading this I can see how luck I was and still am with my family. It might be why I have that soft side with me. I\'m sorry for you Cat. No one deserves to have an unloving mother but I know a lot of the pain is transfered generation to generation through family mistreating.

August 7th, 2017 11:30

half-light (by: eddy styx)
Heather T said:

Chilling piece on half-light intentions, eddy. Shuddery work!

August 7th, 2017 11:26

the witness
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a powerful write and so very sad. Much respect to you in being able to write about it.

August 7th, 2017 01:20

the witness
FredPeyer said:

Cat, this is so powerful and emotional. I admire you for putting these words on paper and hope that the act of writing it out will be at least a tiny little bit of help for you.
As a parent, I have no words for what happened to you, it is so far out of the norm, it is inconceivable.

August 6th, 2017 15:18

the witness
Fay Slimm. said:

So tragic your account of family dysfunction dear Cat this verse had its power no doubt from those terrible times- - coping must birth inner strength which your writing has shown. - Big Cornish hugs for sharing sich childhood my friend.

August 6th, 2017 14:42

the witness
Michael Edwards said:

What a horrid story - I really feel for you - pleased you are able to write about it so well.

August 6th, 2017 14:15

the witness
Azura Nightsong said:

Very interesting and powerful poem. I am sorry for what happened. Some people.... I just don\'t understand it.

August 6th, 2017 10:28

the witness
WriteBeLight said:

Sorry for this experience Candlewitch. Horrible! I am glad you could write about it. You did a great job putting it to paper!

August 6th, 2017 10:11

the witness
orchidee said:

Hmm, I find it a bit unusual after this, that your MALE alter ego comes out of the \'cupboard\' now and again, when a FEMALE had done such dreadful things in your family.

August 6th, 2017 09:39

the witness
Louis Gibbs said:

It is so true ... as a child growing up in a dysfunctional family you don\'t know that it isn\'t the norm. This strong poem hits home, Cat. Well done!

August 6th, 2017 09:37

the witness
burning-embers said:

Thought provoking strong work my friend. Yes who indeed is the killer, in this now accepted crime against humanity - the parent, the paid executioner, the government or society. We condone this. We must accept and share the guilt for every murder.

August 6th, 2017 09:00

Soul Dancing
Night Owl said:

Love the rhythm of this- Took me back in time... Lovely!

August 6th, 2017 04:17

In Her Bed by:(eddy styx)
FredPeyer said:

eddie, you conjured up the mother of a nightmare here. Imagining that somebody or something like eddie could be lying right beside me, smelling my fear, runs goosebumps down my arms.

August 5th, 2017 13:15

Beauty?
burning-embers said:

Superb writing candlewitch. Reminds me of.... best not say. However, all you lovely ladies out there, theres a little bit of this, or parts of it, in you all. Allure i thinks its called. And i am but a piece of scrap metal attracted to its magnetism.

August 5th, 2017 11:38

In Her Bed by:(eddy styx)
malubotelho said:

I can take the challenge. You go beneath many layers to write this dark poetry. I know we all have that dark side but to bring it out as clearly as you do is not easy. My dark side is more mistic than realistic like yours. I see what I can get.

August 5th, 2017 09:31

Wolf...
Night Owl said:

I don\'t know who this is being new, but I keep hearing in my head > Yes indeed! Yes indeed! Yes indeed!
Great read Candlewitch!

August 5th, 2017 09:15

In The Reeds (by: eddy styx)
Night Owl said:

Gorgeous words and visuals...like your beautiful silver hair, it\'s rich with texture and flow~ I\'m loving the play of shadow and light...

August 5th, 2017 09:04

In Her Bed by:(eddy styx)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good dark write.

August 5th, 2017 08:56

In Her Bed by:(eddy styx)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS CAT ~ You have a wonderful imagination ~ but beware we all have a bit of EDDY STYX in us ~ love the last line \"the aroma of her fear\" Hugs & TLC ~ BRIAN XOX Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B.

August 5th, 2017 08:48

In Her Bed by:(eddy styx)
Louis Gibbs said:

He\'s a boogey man for sure! Well expressed, Cat!

August 5th, 2017 08:37

Beauty?
Goldfinch60 said:

Are any of us what we seem. We all put on different masks in differing situations. Good write Cat.

August 5th, 2017 00:11

Beauty?
Bibbeck said:

Lovely write Candlewitch; I enjoyed it. She does sound beautiful, but in the eyes of which beholder.

August 4th, 2017 14:04

Beauty?
FredPeyer said:

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and sometimes gold turns into a lump of coal. Really like your poem, Cat!

August 4th, 2017 13:56

Beauty?
Fay Slimm. said:

You captured such falseness with impressive rhyme Cat -these sort of beauties leave much to be desired

August 4th, 2017 12:44

Beauty?
WriteBeLight said:

Well done!

August 4th, 2017 12:29

Beauty?
Michael Edwards said:

Sadly there are women like this - err - and men.

August 4th, 2017 11:37

Beauty?
orchidee said:

Good write Cat.

August 4th, 2017 11:19



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