Comments received on poems by Candlewitch



Run...(by: eddy styx)
orchidee said:

Oohh he\'s in a mood! heehee.

July 31st, 2017 12:41

Run...(by: eddy styx)
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

July 31st, 2017 12:03

Run...(by: eddy styx)
Azura Nightsong said:

*when you debate how to compliment a poem about murder without sounding like a psychopath*
Nice write! :)

July 31st, 2017 11:59

String Of Pain
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write, the repetition works so well. I do hope that the flaw in that pearl can be mended or exchanged for an unblemished pearl on that \'string of pain\'.

July 31st, 2017 00:49

String Of Pain
WL Schuett said:

Awesome !

July 30th, 2017 19:30

Deep (by:eddy styx)
valene said:

eddy, this is definitely an \'I need a cold shower\' poem! It\'s so powerfully written I can feel the intensity of this sexual encounter. you do come across as selfish bastard, who takes what he wants when he wants it! no offense intended.... :)

July 30th, 2017 16:20

Moon Spinner
valene said:

Your images are perfectly created with your choice of wording! I find myself at times mesmerized by the sky as sunset sets in. It\'s amazing how beautiful, peaceful and serene that time of day can be! The saying \'stop and smell the roses\' should be joined by \'stop and view the sunset!\' :)

July 30th, 2017 16:10

Soul Dancing
valene said:

Well my friend, you\'ve penned another poem I can totally relate to! Methinks you know why I say that so i shan\'t go into details. it\'s a beautiful write, Cat!
:)!

July 30th, 2017 16:04

String Of Pain
valene said:

Hello Cat, I read your poem in the email u sent and gave you my thoughts in my reply. Long story short, another well conceived, from the heart write! :)

July 30th, 2017 16:01

String Of Pain
Michael Edwards said:

Another good write - like the way the \'theme\' keeps repeating .

July 30th, 2017 14:09

String Of Pain
whisperingquill said:

Remarkably crafted I love the repeating theme this strums the golden strings of Elysian harps. Excellent 🌹

July 30th, 2017 13:02

String Of Pain
Heather T said:

Cat Cat Cat...you have such a gift. I read your personal pains, knowing that we are all these flawed little pears strung painfully, yet creating the beauty of a necklace. Those pearls are created through much irritation and strife. Love your voice here.

July 30th, 2017 12:06

String Of Pain
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhhhhhh CAT ~ your poem is filled ~ not only with the Agony of LOVE but also the ECSTASY ~ No Gain without Pain. I have experienced LOVE in a dew soaked (and rain soaked) meadow and also al-fresco in deep damp snow. Caught a cold (both times) but in retrospect (I enjoy warm beds now) I have never regretted those damp impulsive and impetuous trysts ! Love all your Poems and You ! BRIAN XX

July 30th, 2017 10:40

String Of Pain
orchidee said:

Sounds more like Eddie\'s life?! A fine write Cat.

July 30th, 2017 08:42

Deep (by:eddy styx)
FredPeyer said:

And that is how he stole her soul!
Beautiful writing, was completely drawn into it.

July 29th, 2017 14:55

Deep (by:eddy styx)
Michael Edwards said:

Wow - some piece - love the enigma of this rather (well for me at least) mysterious write.

July 29th, 2017 12:31

Deep (by:eddy styx)
Godisreal said:

I love how you write

July 29th, 2017 12:26

Deep (by:eddy styx)
orchidee said:

Oohh now he\'s come out of his cupboard, or basement, and is hungry. Ccoooeee Eddie, having a bad hair day?! heehee.

July 29th, 2017 11:07

Deep (by:eddy styx)
Louis Gibbs said:

A hot one indeed, eddy! Very graphically presented poem ... thanks for sharing, Cat.

July 29th, 2017 10:10

Deep (by:eddy styx)
Its Raskolnikov said:

Very descriptive, I love it.

July 29th, 2017 09:56

Soul Dancing
Heather T said:

Gosh. Just...yeah. Spellbound in your words.

July 29th, 2017 00:32

Soul Dancing
Goldfinch60 said:

\"I believe\" that this is a good write.

July 29th, 2017 00:25

Soul Dancing
Azura Nightsong said:

This is so beautiful! The formatting gave it an extra sparkle too!

July 28th, 2017 20:54

Soul Dancing
Christina8 said:

Absolutely beautiful descriptions! It\'s truly a wonderful write! --Christina

July 28th, 2017 19:42

Soul Dancing
Fay Slimm. said:

Full of your warm tender heart these words flow down the page with love at their core. A lovely read Cat.

July 28th, 2017 16:14

Soul Dancing
FredPeyer said:

Well Cat, and I \"believe\" in you.... at least as far as writing is concerned! :-)
Beautiful poem.

July 28th, 2017 15:23

Soul Dancing
Michael Edwards said:

Started to read and couldn\'t stop - it just flows.

July 28th, 2017 11:59

Soul Dancing
orchidee said:

Good write C.

July 28th, 2017 11:03

Soul Dancing
Louis Gibbs said:

Oh, this is simply beautiful, Cat! What a marvelous expression of deep felt love. Thank you for this one.

July 28th, 2017 10:41

Sanctuary (by: eddy styx)
valene said:

eddy, my tortured soul friend. your choice of words is always impressive to me. along with that thought is your willingness to share your darkest emotions in an open and honest way....something most people can\'t and/or are unwilling to do cos they see it as a sign of weakness. your imagery here is strong and compelling. I love your opening line cos body language does many times speak louder, and express emotions much more so than actual words. I\'ve seen the saguaro cactus when riding on the desert many moons ago and it is an impressive plant, which by using it in your last line makes the line stand out as the perfect ending.
nice going once again eddy!
p.s. have i ever mentioned that for a \"murderous male alter ego\" you are one hell of a poet....which i find rather ironic...in a good way of course :)

July 27th, 2017 21:11



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