Comments received on poems by Candlewitch



Sanctuary (by: eddy styx)
Louis Gibbs said:

Dark and deep, and well expressed insight into eddy\'s tortured soul. Kudos!

July 23rd, 2017 10:15

Sanctuary (by: eddy styx)
charlesbarrett said:

Very strong imagery. I enjoyed reading this. You have quite the way with words.

July 23rd, 2017 09:02

Sanctuary (by: eddy styx)
orchidee said:

Oohh sounds good! I\'m going there on me next holiday - ashes, torture, etc! Please excuse me, it\'s too much sherry I\'ve had. lol.

July 23rd, 2017 08:59

Sanctuary (by: eddy styx)
Fay Slimm. said:

Wow - - this read had me wincing with oozings of admiration for such linguistic art - - - moodlily dark yet a beautiful use of word.

July 23rd, 2017 08:57

Sanctuary (by: eddy styx)
Candlewitch said:

thanks Kat,

and good morning to you!

ever, eddy

July 23rd, 2017 08:26

nobody\'s child
Heather T said:

Superbly written lament of the grievous mishandling of what I\'m sure came into this world a perfect China doll. On a side note, I was a broken doll this past Halloween. Enjoyed you, Cat.

July 22nd, 2017 21:43

nobody\'s child
FredPeyer said:

A strong poem and great rhyming. Can\'t get much better than that!

July 22nd, 2017 15:08

nobody\'s child
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

\"i\'M NOBODY\'S CHILD ~ I\'m Nobody\'s Child ~ like a Ramblin\' Rose I\'m growin\' wild ! It happens HONEY and often we are helpless to help ! Sadly it mainly seems to happen to vulnerable Girls caught up in the temptation and seeming endless abuse of life. Loved the Poem but hated its real life reality ! ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN

July 22nd, 2017 15:08

nobody\'s child
malubotelho said:

It has the rhithem of a broken heart. Craving for tears.

July 22nd, 2017 12:29

nobody\'s child
orchidee said:

Good write Cat. Coeeeee Eddie - I mustn\'t wake him up! lol.

July 22nd, 2017 11:21

nobody\'s child
Louis Gibbs said:

Beautifully done poem, Cat! No fluff, just substance.

July 22nd, 2017 09:05

nobody\'s child
niallprideaux said:

Amazing write :) I live for descriptive details, thoroughly enjoyed this x

July 22nd, 2017 08:37

Blood On The Snow
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write.

July 22nd, 2017 00:47

Blood On The Snow
Tris Eaton said:

Wow this is an amazing poem. Very nice

July 21st, 2017 19:23

Blood On The Snow
Michael Edwards said:

Amaranthus used to be grown a lot here in the UK as a summer bedding plant - don\'t see it so often nowadays - a pity - its a showy plant. A powerful and intriguing write Cat.

July 21st, 2017 11:33

Blood On The Snow
orchidee said:

A fine write Cat. I thought Eddy had escaped, by the title! heehee.

July 21st, 2017 11:25

Blood On The Snow
Louis Gibbs said:

Oh, this is a beauty, Cat. A truly impressive piece. I liked it more each time I read it. Thank you!

July 21st, 2017 10:37

Impotence (by eddy styx)
FredPeyer said:

Extremely well written as usual, you touched on something I thought about too. This gender difference, the way a women is supposed to act, the way a man is supposed to act, is it society driven? Or natural? Does the man really have to be the hunter and the woman the huntee?

July 20th, 2017 18:37

Impotence (by eddy styx)
valene said:

Oh eddy you\'ve done it again! A very \'i need a cold shower type\' write! Nice have a male\'s version of how it might feel not to be able to \'perform\' that may occur from time to time. Most men don\'t have the gumption to admit there\'s a problem, even if only for a brief moment. I guess this is where us women have it over men....we can always fake it if need be. And it\'s a known fact that many women don\'t necessarily orgasm during actual intercourse. For you to be able to put yourself in a man\'s place and write this the way you have, almost makes me forget that it\'s really you, a member of the female persuasion who wrote it. I think you\'ve captured how a man would feel in this predicament perfectly and apparently I\'m not the only one who feels the same!
ok shower time....LOL! :)

July 20th, 2017 16:17

Impotence (by eddy styx)
malubotelho said:

I like what you say about eating her yes and have to confess that I\'ve felt the same desire but to eat read someone\'s brain to see the truth behind fake words. But I have the understanding that we should not scrutiny anybody mind. To do so would be very unrespectful. Our dad God would not like this. Thanks Eddy

July 20th, 2017 14:10

Impotence (by eddy styx)
orchidee said:

Oohh I dunno about understanding eddy. I didn\'t understand his poem here, due to the fact I got too \'hot\' and swooned before the end! Me sheltered life, you see. heehee.

July 20th, 2017 12:17

Impotence (by eddy styx)
Fay Slimm. said:

A beguilingly woven bouquet of imagery Cat - -- your talent never ceases to amaze.

July 20th, 2017 11:42

Impotence (by eddy styx)
Louis Gibbs said:

Doth thou bemoan the advantages she has over us by virtue of gender? We must deal with it, no choice, and count the few advantages of manhood ... like peeing standing up. A fine and uniquely expressed poem, Cat!

July 20th, 2017 11:31

Impotence (by eddy styx)
Michael Edwards said:

I would call it a tapestry of the written word in all its glory - superb Cat.

July 20th, 2017 11:00

Fragile Connections
Goldfinch60 said:

Like a phoenix these words rise into the beauty that is written. Thank you Cat.

July 20th, 2017 00:43

Fragile Connections
valene said:

Hey lady, you just keep on coming with these wonderfully composed pieces of poetry! Your opening I find easy to relate to cos of the many nights I\'m mesmerized by the night sky. I love your line, \'meanwhile, back on earth...\' it\'s the perfect lead into the 2nd verse. And ah yes, the idea of a campfire, i used to love sitting and watching the flames....and of course making s\'mores...LOL!!! Sounds like you even have a bit of the western spirit in you as well....loved the read!

OX, val

July 19th, 2017 21:59

Fragile Connections
Heather T said:

\"His truth was night lights in the harbor moorings\"
Girl...!!! This is gorgeous beyond imagination. Beautifully done.

July 19th, 2017 16:52

Fragile Connections
Michael Edwards said:

Time to tally the score - brilliant write. I was at a Japanese meditation garden yesterday - absolute magic - pure peace - pure bliss - your poem puts me in mind of it.

July 19th, 2017 12:37

Fragile Connections
Fay Slimm. said:

Depth increases with the continued read of this need to reflect and replenish - - inspiring poem Cat

July 19th, 2017 12:01

Fragile Connections
orchidee said:

A fine write C.

July 19th, 2017 11:39



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