Comments received on poems by Candlewitch



Tide Pools
Heather T said:

You stun here, Cat. This is one of your finest spills. I\'m keeping this to return to at my pleasure. Brava, poetess.

July 15th, 2017 11:39

Tide Pools
Fay Slimm. said:

This has to be one of your best postings dear Cat - I smelt those tide pools and was there with the salt of your jeweled dreaming - to be landlocked when filled with need for the ocean is tragic my friend. Brilliant ;piece.

July 15th, 2017 10:16

Tide Pools
burning-embers said:

Candlewitch, this is a beauty. Your opening verse had me worried though. There are finer things within your pulsing pump.

July 15th, 2017 09:54

Tide Pools
Michael Edwards said:

Just superb - going into my favourites

July 15th, 2017 09:42

Future Days
malubotelho said:

Your poem is a hot number one ever. I thought you were a great writer but this time you surpassed yourself from the only ones I\'ve read from you. You showed to be a hell of a woman and still so lovingly. Of course you had to write a love poem without being moosh. I love to write love poems but I have to be moosh. Thanks for sharing

July 14th, 2017 22:58

Vow Of The Highlander (eddy styx)
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

July 14th, 2017 18:38

Vow Of The Highlander (eddy styx)
FredPeyer said:

Cat,
after reading your comments I can understand where you (sorry eddy stix) is coming from. Beautifully written as always.
Attacking other writers on a forum like this is a huge NO NO. We are here to show what we can do and enjoy what others do. Period.

July 14th, 2017 18:02

Future Days
valene said:

well after having just read \'vow of the highlander,\' this was a nice lovely piece to bring my \'rage\' into check! you\'ve expressed how loving someone (Steve) as we age, becomes evening more meaningful over time. we can look back and see what brought us to the place. we\'re finally able to let go of the bad memories and focus on the loving and caring relationship that\'s the here and now!

July 14th, 2017 15:10

Vow Of The Highlander (eddy styx)
valene said:

ok my eddy my friend....this down and about as dark as dark can get! it\'s a brilliant piece! i can feel the anger oozing out and it had to be so gratifying to write! i hope this brian person who \'inspired\' it read it though if he has he\'ll probably not give you the satisfaction of saying so! to be honest i really relate cos your words are pretty much how i feel about the britch! it\'s beyond hate cos hate is too closely related to love. nay it\'s the strongest form of detest, despise, abhor, well you get my drift!!! glad i came on the site and read this! i feel somewhat gratified myself by your expressing what i\'ve felt for so long....LOL!!! OX
:)

July 14th, 2017 14:52

Vow Of The Highlander (eddy styx)
Louis Gibbs said:

This dude eddy is certainly not someone to mess with! Your poem is both powerful and well presented, Thank you for airing it with us, Cat.

July 14th, 2017 13:30

Vow Of The Highlander (eddy styx)
malubotelho said:

I will eat the beating heart of you, choke up the truth, spit it back at you and watch you be consumed by the poison of your ignorance. I love this part of you poem more than anything. So brilliant. I will save your poem so I can go back and reread it. Thank you

July 14th, 2017 13:10

Vow Of The Highlander (eddy styx)
orchidee said:

You will set \'eddy\' on that troll-like guy! There was one on a site I knew. He used to reply for a while to every poem in the vein of \'I don\'t care much for your poem\' or \'Not much in this poem worth reading\'.

July 14th, 2017 13:03

Vow Of The Highlander (eddy styx)
Nicholas Browning said:

Ah, precipice of death. Philosophy of mortality. Haha, I love it.

July 14th, 2017 12:25

Vow Of The Highlander (eddy styx)
Michael Edwards said:

A real read this one - enjoyed it.

July 14th, 2017 10:55

Vow Of The Highlander (eddy styx)
magenta1 said:

I visited the darkness and lived...Bravo

July 14th, 2017 10:16

Future Days
Renzi said:

Love love love it. A great lover of love. Fantastic write. And hey, lucky Steven x

July 14th, 2017 08:34

Future Days
Goldfinch60 said:

Good loving write. The right one for us is always out there.

July 14th, 2017 01:52

Future Days
Heather T said:

Mistress of all you surveyed! This is fanfreakingtastic. Almost regal. Applause!

July 13th, 2017 22:28

Future Days
Louis Gibbs said:

How fortunate to have found each other. And love at first sight ... must have been ordained! I\'m very happy for you, and appreciate this fine poem, Cat.

July 13th, 2017 15:32

Future Days
Fay Slimm. said:

Powerful words pulsating with linguistic expertise. Great read Cat

July 13th, 2017 15:18

Future Days
Nicholas Browning said:

Sounds like dedication and reminiscing to me. A beautiful, emotional filled work. Well done.

July 13th, 2017 15:17

Future Days
FredPeyer said:

Cat, while the whole poem is beautifully written (framing memories of my hunter days), it is the last two lines that grabbed me.

July 13th, 2017 13:41

Future Days
orchidee said:

You mean me? You know my name?! You had hanky-panky?! Swoon! heehee.

July 13th, 2017 12:25

Future Days
onepauly said:

romantically inspiring, all the way through.

July 13th, 2017 11:50

Cursed Or Blessed
Heather T said:

Oh Cat...righteous anger pouring down the page. You are my hero, brave one.

July 12th, 2017 19:29

Cursed Or Blessed
Adri said:

😶 speechless! That was amazing! Some can relate to that type of pain and being strong enough to pull out of it!

July 12th, 2017 16:17

Cursed Or Blessed
Augustus said:

Beautifully done. Kudos.

July 12th, 2017 15:42

Cursed Or Blessed
Louis Gibbs said:

A powerful poem about a terrible, destructive crime against the soul, a crime that is rampant in our world. As you point out, it is usually passed on, and is a terribly difficult chain to break. Thanks for shining this light on the subject, Candlewitch.

July 12th, 2017 13:36

Cursed Or Blessed
FredPeyer said:

Cat, you say you wrote this when you were 16? Shows that you were an accomplished poet at a very young age.
Yes, it is angry, but rightly so. No matter how long ago it was, sexual abuse should NEVER happen to a child.

July 12th, 2017 13:26

Cursed Or Blessed
Michael Edwards said:

I really feel for you - how can anyone abuse another in this way? Anyway I see its behind you and you have produced a super poem.

July 12th, 2017 11:16



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