Comments received on poems by Candlewitch



Dream Castles
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Those wonderful childhood memories are priceless.

July 9th, 2017 01:21

Dream Castles
FredPeyer said:

Reading this great poem transported me back to rural Switzerland where during the summer vacation we kids spent the whole day in the forest playing everything from Cowboys and Indians to Pirates and Knights. All without seeing any adults the whole day. Our parents didn\'t even know where we were.
Great poem, beautifully written as always!

July 8th, 2017 19:28

Dream Castles
Augustus said:

Love it. The \"oceans of grass\" I find particularly appealing for as a child a field or patch of grass seems so large and in retrospect as an adult, we see it as much smaller. I miss the fantasy play of childhood you so aptly describe.

July 8th, 2017 18:50

About You...
Godisreal said:

Yes just beautiful i love the way you write..

July 8th, 2017 15:13

Circle Game
Godisreal said:

It\'s deep..i can relate

July 8th, 2017 15:12

Virgin (first poem) by eddy styx
Godisreal said:

I like it

July 8th, 2017 15:09

Dream Castles
Godisreal said:

Made me smile

July 8th, 2017 15:08

Dream Castles
orchidee said:

Good write C.

July 8th, 2017 10:57

Dream Castles
burning-embers said:

Reminded me of my reflections of our childhood when i lost my older brother, my \'captain\', a few years back. Your construct invites your reader to paint their own vivid pictures.

July 8th, 2017 09:17

Dream Castles
Heather T said:

Sweet, nostalgic piece. Children today have missed some of that joy.

July 8th, 2017 08:59

Dream Castles
Louis Gibbs said:

The words \"unashamed\" and \"desires\" makes me wonder just what kind of games were going on there? Fine poem, Candlewitch!

July 8th, 2017 08:50

Virgin (first poem) by eddy styx
valene said:

well my friend, this is short, not so sweet, well said and I think eddy is not someone to mess with although \'the bitch within\' could give him a run for his money and/or \'evil\' who takes pleasure in going after whoever she feels like....LOL! hum...then there\'s chaos...i\'ll introduce you to her in a pm!

July 7th, 2017 21:37

Virgin (first poem) by eddy styx
Augustus said:

Hauntingly delicious.

July 7th, 2017 17:42

Virgin (first poem) by eddy styx
FredPeyer said:

Have to read more from eddy to be sure, but for now I like Cat better!

July 7th, 2017 15:36

Virgin (first poem) by eddy styx
orchidee said:

oohhh, I don\'t fancy meeting Eddy. Does he bite people?! heehee.

July 7th, 2017 10:50

Virgin (first poem) by eddy styx
Louis Gibbs said:

I\'d like to have coffee with you someday, if Eddy stays home. Appreciated your poem, Candlewitch.

July 7th, 2017 10:09

Tap~Dancer On A Midnight Keyboard
Goldfinch60 said:

Keep your words dancing Cat as these ones do - Eat you heart out Fred Astaire.

July 7th, 2017 00:38

Tap~Dancer On A Midnight Keyboard
Michael Edwards said:

Brill stuff Cat

July 6th, 2017 13:02

Tap~Dancer On A Midnight Keyboard
Candlewitch said:

dear DS/KS,

your comments are always well thoughtout and kind. a cowboy/prince with much wisdom. and I appreciate you, as do many!

*hugs, Cat

July 6th, 2017 11:52

Liberator: (a dark poem) by eddy styx
lostgirl24 said:

Ooo, this one\'s really good! Very dark, very mysterious, I love it!

July 6th, 2017 11:10

Liberator: (a dark poem) by eddy styx
whisperingquill said:

Creeptastically written delving into necromancy divinely really nice poetess

July 6th, 2017 11:03

Tap~Dancer On A Midnight Keyboard
malubotelho said:

I liked this poem. Very fun to read. I\'m like that too. When everything seems to be falling apart I always say; get up and dance 💃 and almost all the time I begin to laugh.
What is life if not Gods comedy? Let\'s play then.

July 6th, 2017 10:52

Tap~Dancer On A Midnight Keyboard
burning-embers said:

Fun Candlewitch rap tap tappin.
Your S.O.S. caught me nappin.
I\'m a cheeky, chappy need a good slapping.
Now i\'m rappin bout ya tappin as i get a good slappin.
Are ya sappin all the tapping while we sat here ratatattin.
Or mappin hand clappin cos we cookin au gratin.
ooppss i got carried away again..... i liked it fun piece gal


July 6th, 2017 10:39

Tap~Dancer On A Midnight Keyboard
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

July 6th, 2017 10:37

Tap~Dancer On A Midnight Keyboard
Nicholas Browning said:

This brought a smile to my face. Use of creative repetition was marvelous.

July 6th, 2017 10:09

Circle Game
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write about an increasingly insidious problem.

July 6th, 2017 01:23

Liberator: (a dark poem) by eddy styx
Stephen.Sapaugh said:

Very dark and disturbing. Very macabre of you. You have a lot of things going for you in this poem. Your imagery is beautiful, and disturbing. The meter, and rhyme scheme is nice. I would love to see this expanded maybe with other poems of how this situation came up. What a character you have created here. Very good job. The small problem with it is the punctuation on lines like just there
at the base of your throat
where the pulse
beats like butterfly wings

Maybe re read it and see if you feel a comma belongs there? I think it might find a good home after pulse? Just to break it up a little?

I personally like macabre so I give this a 9/10. Great write.

July 5th, 2017 13:58

Circle Game
orchidee said:

Gives me the shivers, having heard a few of these experiences. Not that I\'m a professional counsellor or anything like that.
I reckon something in the mind starts off this cycle.
On a lighter note of black humour: \'Oohhh, did you know - suicide and self-harm are very bad for your health\'!
And \'Who is Miss Sue E. Side? I shouldn\'t like to meet her\'!

July 5th, 2017 13:05

Circle Game
AmandaJade said:

such an upsetting topic but so wonderfully written. Definitely brought me back to times in my past, thank you so much for this write.

July 5th, 2017 11:29

Sweet Velvet : senryu string
Renzi said:

You got the flow.. what a beautiful flow 💓

July 5th, 2017 03:42



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