Comments received on poems by Candlewitch



and so they meet...
Goldfinch60 said:

A truly loving write - but?

August 9th, 2018 00:36

and so they meet...
Crystal Hope said:

your description was so well done!

August 8th, 2018 17:21

and so they meet...
Michael Edwards said:

More to this than meets the eye - an enigmatic write dear Cat

August 8th, 2018 14:23

and so they meet...
dusk arising said:

There is darkness here. Your lovely lady is blind to all but her love which has drawn her into this night.
Will the power of her love turn his will?
Enthralling power in this writing.

August 8th, 2018 10:37

and so they meet...
Laura🌻 said:

My dear Cat,

A beautiful poem oozing with love!
I was especially drawn to the words...

“across the reflecting ponds
she dashed
past the water fronds”

The vision your poem evokes is almost unbearable (in the most loving sense)!

Loved it!

Hugs 🤗 🤗
~Laura~



August 8th, 2018 10:25

and so they meet...
Heartwriter said:

Once again a master piece of a write. Well done!

August 8th, 2018 09:46

In The Spreading Warmth
Goldfinch60 said:

May that spreading warmth continue to eternity.

August 6th, 2018 00:26

In The Spreading Warmth
dusk arising said:

Excelled yourself today dear lady. What fine loving sentiment comes over through your chosen words.

August 5th, 2018 19:21

In The Spreading Warmth
Jon Nakapalau said:

Very nice - a calm feeling.

August 5th, 2018 19:09

In The Spreading Warmth
Heartwriter said:

Beautiful! You are a fine poet.

August 5th, 2018 17:04

In The Spreading Warmth
Michael Edwards said:

Sweet

August 5th, 2018 16:23

In The Spreading Warmth
Laura🌻 said:

Cat,

I love this beautiful write for your special husband and friend, Steve...
“to embrace the ending
of the fading day
in the spreading warmth...”

Such special words oozing with love!


Hugs 🤗

~Laura~



August 5th, 2018 16:05

\"Tarpaulin\" by: eddy styx
orchidee said:

Ooh, I\'d rather write with a pen or pencil than blood! I\'m a snowflake. lol.

August 5th, 2018 01:30

\"Tarpaulin\" by: eddy styx
Goldfinch60 said:

Long may you continue to \"bleed words upon the page\" like thes wonderful ones that you have bled here.

August 5th, 2018 00:24

\"Tarpaulin\" by: eddy styx
Laura🌻 said:

Eddy,

You’re at your best!
You’ve ingeniously
set the stage with a
macabre series of
delectable words!

Outstanding!

~Laura~


August 4th, 2018 14:01

\"Tarpaulin\" by: eddy styx
Heartwriter said:

....and what a Jewel it is!!!!

August 4th, 2018 13:28

\"Conspirators\" for Paul Wellstone
Joe Dawson said:

You write extremely well - for a moment I thought you wrote of another murder - just as brutal, just as unfair. Joe

August 2nd, 2018 09:29

\"Conspirators\" for Paul Wellstone
dusk arising said:

A fine story like poem of tribute and revelation.
Really like the way this flows, it\'s concise and gripping. I too had no idea of who the fellow was. It seems he is yet another unjustly killed individual who\'s tale has been seldom told.

August 2nd, 2018 06:46

\"Conspirators\" for Paul Wellstone
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, do not know of this but I am sure that this type of thing has happened many times by many governments in the world.

August 2nd, 2018 00:33

\"Conspirators\" for Paul Wellstone
Heartwriter said:

Wow.I never knew this. Great enlightment Cat. Great write.

August 1st, 2018 17:37

sips of little death (by: eddy styx)
onepauly said:

I don\'t know what to put down.
im a virgin ha! ha!

July 30th, 2018 00:52

sips of little death (by: eddy styx)
Goldfinch60 said:

If they only take they deserve to their death win their eyes eddy.

July 30th, 2018 00:40

sips of little death (by: eddy styx)
Heartwriter said:

Boy you sure give Eddy some hot breath. Lol. Spooky.

July 29th, 2018 20:49

sips of little death (by: eddy styx)
dusk arising said:

Oh Eddy, the praying mantis in you is apparent here as you play with your food. Does your hunger sometimes find you tired of the pre-feast appetisers or are such nuptials a necessity - stimulating your appetite?

July 29th, 2018 14:25

sips of little death (by: eddy styx)
Joe Dawson said:

Always taking, never giving: I am not surprised what with wormwood on the lips and the satisfaction of aniseed on the palate - a goblet of such refreshment and one would not have a care in the world. A fascinating read. Enjoyed it very much. Joe

July 29th, 2018 13:58

Burning Times
Goldfinch60 said:

So many excuses in the past (and present) to remove people from their rightfully owned land. Good write Cat.

\"Double, double toil and trouble;
Fire burn and caldron bubble.
Fillet of a fenny snake,
In the caldron boil and bake;
Eye of newt and toe of frog,
Wool of bat and tongue of dog,
Adder\'s fork and blind-worm\'s sting,
Lizard\'s leg and howlet\'s wing,
For a charm of powerful trouble,
Like a hell-broth boil and bubble.

Double, double toil and trouble;
Fire burn and caldron bubble.
Cool it with a baboon\'s blood,
Then the charm is firm and good.\"

July 29th, 2018 01:07

Burning Times
Michael Edwards said:

A thought provoking write of the ignorance of past generations - thanks for sharing Cat.

July 29th, 2018 00:50

Burning Times
Heartwriter said:

I totally agree Cat. Wise write if ever I saw one! Thanks for sharing.

July 28th, 2018 16:01

Burning Times
Joe Dawson said:

A most excellent and meaningful write. I live within a few miles of Pendle Hill Lancashire famous for the Pendle Witches, good woman who it was claimed sold their souls to the devil which of course was untrue. A very relevant work and a timely reminder of the ill brought to the doors of so many innocent people. Joe

July 28th, 2018 15:25

Burning Times
dusk arising said:

I\'m sorry Cat. I got so wound up in the subject of your piece that i forgot to say how beautifully it flows as it becomes more evident the terrible stories contained within.
\'Frenzied they demanded fresh flesh\'... terrible mind picture you create. Erm... you haven\'t been eating any of that meat i left for Eddy have you?

July 28th, 2018 14:19

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