Comments received on poems by Candlewitch



Burning Times
dusk arising said:

I\'m sorry Cat. I got so wound up in the subject of your piece that i forgot to say how beautifully it flows as it becomes more evident the terrible stories contained within.
\'Frenzied they demanded fresh flesh\'... terrible mind picture you create. Erm... you haven\'t been eating any of that meat i left for Eddy have you?

July 28th, 2018 13:15

Burning Times
JasmineUK said:

King James,
Who gave us a bible,
Took more than an interest,
In witch script libel,
He would snatch young women,
For his tortures and obsession,
Deep in castle vaults,
In the years to his accession.

July 28th, 2018 12:51

Burning Times
dusk arising said:

I\'m told that in certain \'casts\' in India a widow is often the victim of an accidental fire started by her chemical oven now that it is officially illegal to kill her.
There are still all sorts of terrible injustices taking lace allover the world. How lucky we are to live in western civilisation and be of a certain class/race.

July 28th, 2018 12:51

Burning Times
JasmineUK said:

Throughout Anglian lands,
The New Model Army,
Was making its stands,
And with puritanical zeal,
The Witchfinder General,
Would seek his misogynous appeal.

July 28th, 2018 12:25

midnight on the old Bliss Farm (for dusk arising) by: e. styx
Goldfinch60 said:

May that ghostly form now stay away,
and not come back another day.
the young are pure with lives ahead,
leave them alone, tucked up in bed.

Good dark write eddy.

July 26th, 2018 01:38

midnight on the old Bliss Farm (for dusk arising) by: e. styx
JasmineUK said:

Seventeen is in toddler time, Council flat, on vodka and lime,
Fifteen is following her miss-lead,
Up the duff after a night on speed,
Thirteen is hooked making porn,
Sexchat star for the keyboard forn.

The acned bogey men fornicate, behind the old bike shed,
on the Bliss Farm estate!

July 25th, 2018 15:39

midnight on the old Bliss Farm (for dusk arising) by: e. styx
Joe Dawson said:

Young ladies dream and young men wish, is that a ghost - I think it is! Novel in the extreme, an overture of wickedness to come. Deeper than deep. Joe

July 25th, 2018 15:30

midnight on the old Bliss Farm (for dusk arising) by: e. styx
Heartwriter said:

Cat you do these spooky ones so dang good! Loved it.

July 25th, 2018 13:15

midnight on the old Bliss Farm (for dusk arising) by: e. styx
dusk arising said:

What ghostly form in the blood moon mist
Stole a virgin heart from old man Bliss
How she writhed and cried though her body ached
But now breathless lays, his passion slaked
And biding time, mindful and slow
Just two years grace for fifteen to grow
Luscious beauty ripe from the bud
He\'ll sate his thirst \'pon virgin blood

Well it\'s all in a days work for a creature of the night.

July 25th, 2018 11:00

black dog (by: eddy styx)
Fay Slimm. said:

Your dark side in poetry is powerful when given free reign and this black-dog imagery is no exception my friend - - a haunt of a read.

July 25th, 2018 01:49

black dog (by: eddy styx)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write from your dark side eddy, even you have a darker side.
Tell Orchi that I can get some biscuits for the dog.

July 25th, 2018 00:54

black dog (by: eddy styx)
Michael Edwards said:

Read this several times - it gets better and better with each read - super work es.

July 24th, 2018 23:37

black dog (by: eddy styx)
orchidee said:

I\'m more scared of a black cat crossing my path. Is that luck? I dunno. I don\'t believe in \'luck!\' lol
Give that dog some biscuits! heehee.

July 24th, 2018 13:27

black dog (by: eddy styx)
dusk arising said:

Look Eddie mate, if you\'re going to get into a low state of mind like this i can see i\'m going to have to allow you out at night occasionally. Dont forget to wear those nice galoshes i bought you.
There\'s a new family moved into the old Bliss\' farm since he passed on. I hear they have three teenage daughters.

July 24th, 2018 11:32

black dog (by: eddy styx)
Heartwriter said:

When I was younger I use to have a reoccurring dream of a mean black dog. One year we were letting off fire works and this big black dog showed up and ate some lit firecrackers. No joke. Now, black dogs and cats are my favorite. We\'ve had several black cats. Each one named Niblet. I raised the first one when he was abandoned by his momma. He still had his little belly button cord. After he died years later, we had another named after him. There has been 3 all together.

July 24th, 2018 10:25

black dog (by: eddy styx)
Heartwriter said:

Wow. Candlewitch you sure know how to write dark poetry as well as the tender ones too! I always enjoy both sides if you.

July 24th, 2018 10:19

dangerous play (challenge by: Unsub) by: eddy styx
Goldfinch60 said:

Challenge fulfilled with these wonderful senryu eddy,

July 23rd, 2018 00:42

dangerous play (challenge by: Unsub) by: eddy styx
Laura🌻 said:

Eddy,

You’re always ready for a challenge...
especially from the one and only...
UNSUB!
Your mighty bloody pen met his challenge with a vengeance!
A delightful read!

Hugs 🤗
~Laura~


July 22nd, 2018 20:53

dangerous play (challenge by: Unsub) by: eddy styx
dusk arising said:

You have me gasping for breath.
Eddy, i\'ve left you a pair of galoshes outside your door if you must go out these damp nights. By the way, I apologise for those blood trails leading up to your landing. Chef must be storing raw meat in his spare room up here. I\'\'l have a word with him.

July 22nd, 2018 13:13

dangerous play (challenge by: Unsub) by: eddy styx
dusk arising said:

You have me gasping for breath.
Eddy, i\'ve left you a pair of galoshes outside your door if you must go out these damp nights. By the way, I apologise for those blood trails leading up to your landing. Chef must be storing raw meat in his spare room up here. I\'\'l have a word with him.

July 22nd, 2018 13:10

Eliese (by: eddy styx)
Goldfinch60 said:

There was me thinking you had gone all romantic eddy and then you go and bite her. Good fun write.

July 22nd, 2018 00:43

Eliese (by: eddy styx)
dusk arising said:

Eddie i was outside your door last night looking for your shoes to polish. Thats three nights this month theres been no shoes but theyre there in the morning when i deliver everyone elses nicely polished.
I\'m not complaining, I can deal with the blood splatter in trodden in entrail matter on the soles but can we do something about this timing thing. I know youre upto mischief but cant you go barefoot?
They\'ll never hear u coming u know.

July 21st, 2018 13:50

Eliese (by: eddy styx)
Heartwriter said:

Lol! Very attention getting write as you always do! Enjoyed it.

July 21st, 2018 12:26

Eliese (by: eddy styx)
Laura🌻 said:

Eddy,

A delicious write that I totally savored!
Yum yum!

Hugs 🤗
~Laura~


July 21st, 2018 11:48

senryu trio: love
lasergraph said:

The glorious uniting. great work.

July 19th, 2018 15:34

senryu trio: love
Goldfinch60 said:

Good senryus Cat.

July 15th, 2018 01:38

senryu trio: love
onepauly said:

beautifully put.

July 14th, 2018 22:37

senryu trio: love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS CAT ~ SENRYU are great form just 17 syllables (5 7 5) short & sweet ! The KEY elements of Love ~ Eyes ~ Kisses ~ Hearts are all neatly encapsulated in your ELEGANT TRIO ~ Thanks for sharing ! Please check my Poem on TIME ~ Thanks BRIAN !

July 14th, 2018 16:32

senryu trio: love
Heartwriter said:

A beauty of a read Cat. Well done!

July 14th, 2018 14:45

senryu trio: love
dusk arising said:

Generally i dont like \'regimented\' or syllable counted work but your work here is an exception.
Why? because yours has feeling, it\'s not JUST clever..

July 14th, 2018 11:49

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