Comments received on poems by Candlewitch



senryu trio: love
Michael Edwards said:

Fine work Cat - don\'t see poetry forms often enough here on MPS.

July 14th, 2018 10:04

Jack\'s Rules (by: eddy styx)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Eddy, I will have to warn the ladies that I know that Eddy is back in the streets at night.

July 12th, 2018 01:51

Jack\'s Rules (by: eddy styx)
Heartwriter said:

It was really good and spooky!

July 11th, 2018 16:06

Jack\'s Rules (by: eddy styx)
dusk arising said:

Is Eddy over his bout of influenza or wotever it was kept him off MPS.
It looks like he used the away time to recoup and gain strength judging by the sins he\'s now carrying.
Personally i\'m staying outta the shadows. But were i a woman or whore, i wouldnt venture out of doors.
scarey

July 11th, 2018 15:44

Jack\'s Rules (by: eddy styx)
orchidee said:

Oohh, why didn\'t he just have a nice of cocoa and a nice sleep, instead of going about killing people?!
Erm, that\'s took the edge of the theme. No, Orchi, you missed the plot! lol.

July 11th, 2018 13:47

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Laura🌻 said:

My dear Cat,

Firstly, happy belated anniversary! So sorry I missed this posting!
Secondly, my compliments on this beautifully written poem!
It’s the greatest gift when we finally find
our soulmate!

Lots of love to the both of you!

Hugs 🤗
~Laur~

July 10th, 2018 15:44

the arrogant prince
yellowrose said:

fantastic poem..and i love the ending .. him turning into a FROG ... a truly enjoyable read :-)

July 9th, 2018 02:00

the arrogant prince
Michael Edwards said:

Great - gave me a smile.

July 9th, 2018 01:07

the arrogant prince
Accidental Poet said:

A masterful write my friend. But ofcourse, just another walk in the park for thee. BRILLIANT!

July 8th, 2018 20:29

the arrogant prince
dusk arising said:

Big smile on my face. Nicely light hearted write from you today which is very entertaining and funny. Thats not easy to do, so Well Done! to you.

ribbit

July 8th, 2018 18:59

the arrogant prince
Laura🌻 said:


My dear Cat,

An excellent write which I
enjoyed reading!

That prince was so full of
himself and forgot that...
Arrogance is ignorance and
the death of success!

Hugs 🤗
~Laura~

July 8th, 2018 17:27

the arrogant prince
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you for a fine laugh late in my day. Glorious.

July 8th, 2018 15:10

the arrogant prince
Heartwriter said:

Oh Candlewitch I loved this! Especially the twist at the end. Great write.

July 8th, 2018 13:32

the arrogant prince
kevin browne said:

I like this, and I\'m glad I\'m not that Prince. I have other ways of treating a fair lady well. lovely poem though. good work.

July 8th, 2018 11:19

Anger Loosed
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, it is such a shame that siblings can be like this. Maybe one day she will come round and be nice.

July 1st, 2018 23:56

Anger Loosed
onepauly said:

hi candlewitch\' ,
interesting story inside the poem.

many people are instigaters to fights. some cant live without it. just glimpse an eye on car crashes, accidents right? the people getting out of their cars, and a lot of times they use more then their fists. they must get real angry. im glad im just an observer.




July 1st, 2018 18:28

parallel of old souls
Heartwriter said:

I too am an early riser. Always have been. Interesting read.

July 1st, 2018 11:34

Anger Loosed
Frogspoetry said:

YOUR SISTER SOUNDS LIKE MY YOUNGER BROTHER.CAUSES TROUBLE JUST TO HAVE A LITTLE ENTERTAINMENT,IT DRIVES ME CRAZY.BUT THE LORD HAS GIVEN ME THE STRENGTH TO HANDLE IT.

July 1st, 2018 10:30

Anger Loosed
Heartwriter said:

Yep. I know folk like that. Fine write, nicely said.

July 1st, 2018 09:58

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Goldfinch60 said:

Many congratulations, it is our 37th wedding anniversary in November.
The two of you are as one and may you life as one go forward in love and joy.

June 28th, 2018 00:48

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SLR said:

I had to fight a lot of battles on my own, until I got married, so I love the second verse/stanza. We always have each other\'s backs. And we know we can count on the other one, always. Happy anniversary!! Great heartfelt write!

June 27th, 2018 16:05

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Fay Slimm. said:

What a wonderfully romantic assurance to give a much-loved husband on your 37th anniversary Cat - heartfelt congratulations and am sure this poem will be one to treasure - - a beautiful read.

June 27th, 2018 11:37

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Heartwriter said:

Two of one kind through all of time and beyond. Great bond and Clever write. Enjoyed. Happy anniversary to y\'all.

June 27th, 2018 11:21

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Poetic Dan said:

Heart and soul this was beautiful

June 27th, 2018 11:19

Billy Joel
skyebellasario said:

Wonderful write!

June 25th, 2018 05:50

Billy Joel
Christina8 said:

Great piece, thanks for sharing with us!

June 24th, 2018 14:42

Billy Joel
dusk arising said:

\"Some love is just a lie of the heart, the cold remains of what began with a passionate start\".
Billy, a great lyricist, musician and performer. Was one of my favourites, i must dig out recordings of 80\'s and re-live those feelings.
Such great stuff he wrote for Christy, yes she was the uptown girl he sang about. The one who walked on the beach beside that old hotel.
Lyrical inspirational man.
Great tribute, pleasure to read.

June 24th, 2018 12:48

parallel of old souls
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, 3 a.m. is the time when the things I was trying to remember during the day come into my mind.

June 24th, 2018 01:32

parallel of old souls
dusk arising said:

oooh wow! powerful stuff! This is quite magnificent.
Three a.m. brings out something in those of us unaccustomed to being awake at that hour. I think you truly captured some of its magic in your words.

June 23rd, 2018 16:06

Vow Of The Highlander (repost) by: eddy styx
ZIGGY said:

Just read this again omg such power within your words hope we never have an argument as I would have no chance of winning it 😂,,, I just realized that I never had to offer critique on your words as its always perfect 👌,,,,,, zigs

June 18th, 2018 12:13

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