Comments received on poems by denxse



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Accidental Poet said:

An all too familiar scenario. But putting it down in words is therapeutic and a step in the right direction. Great writing.

July 30th, 2017 20:45

Modern Slaves of society
Gary Edward Geraci said:

I was \"Chanting\" along these same lines the other night ... you\'re right on by putting your pen to paper and taking a stand. Your appeal to the value of well formed children is none too soon. Keep them coming...

July 18th, 2017 06:33

Modern Slaves of society
onepauly said:

your poem makes me think about how the society dictates our freedom. are we free. free to the expected norm. law and order are not the same thing. one is law the other is order. which one do you prefer.

July 18th, 2017 00:43