Comments received on poems by Ivan



Sunsets Inside of Acid Rain Drops
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

July 27th, 2017 12:06

Sunsets Inside of Acid Rain Drops
Azura Nightsong said:

This kind of makes me think of two songs by Tool.
Third Eye and Rosetta Stoned.
Good write!

July 27th, 2017 08:57

Sunsets Inside of Acid Rain Drops
kevin browne said:

well you did wake up because you wrote this. I am with you all the way brother. my acid taking days finished in my late 20\'s at the end of 1990. I lived in Berlin at the time and my oh my wasn\'t everyone flying high just like you in this super write.

July 27th, 2017 05:53

Maybe Words of Wisdom
burning-embers said:

Almost like a re-write of the famous Desiderata by Max Ehrmann

July 27th, 2017 03:58

Maybe Words of Wisdom
kevin browne said:

I like it. it ha a nice smooth pace to it and capturing my mind right the way through. I had a great time reading this and didn\'t really want it to stop. give us more please poet.

July 26th, 2017 21:16