Comments received on poems by Accidental Poet



All-Points Bulletin
Fay Slimm. said:

Wow you wrote this so real I am already peering out from my window in fear of this Bugsy maniac and I live in Cornwall U.K. - a great fun read.

October 1st, 2017 05:12

You Remind Me
Ravenssongbird said:

A very mesmerizing read 😊 You have captured the unique spark of attraction and beauty between innocent moments. Great piece!

September 30th, 2017 16:16

You Remind Me
FredPeyer said:

AP, your poem is great. It did draw me in right away. Sometimes a total stranger will have that effect on us, and you worded it beautifully.

September 30th, 2017 12:30

You Remind Me
WL Schuett said:

I found this intriguing but , it ends kinda sad ... good poem though

September 30th, 2017 08:49

You Remind Me
orchidee said:

A fine write AP. And would I know her?! lol.

September 30th, 2017 08:15

You Remind Me
Poetic Dan said:

You have been pardoned my friend. What a delightful read, I saw myself salsa dancing with eyes catching everywhere. Like shooting stars we going fast, til two stay and see if a new world they can come to create.

With your words so tender I hope this manifests

September 30th, 2017 07:34

You Remind Me
Fay Slimm. said:

Such an appeal in these honest words. Great read.

September 30th, 2017 05:12

Decorations of the Heart
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, those times in our lives are so important and so wonderful.

September 30th, 2017 00:46

Decorations of the Heart
FredPeyer said:

Beautifully written and very moving, AP! As we get older we seem to cherish these decorations more and more, maybe because one day they might be the only thing we have left.

September 29th, 2017 11:29

Decorations of the Heart
WL Schuett said:

Wonderful reflection , very good

September 29th, 2017 09:54

Decorations of the Heart
orchidee said:

Another fine write AP. It\'s said \'Everyone that is instructed unto the kingdom of heaven, is like one who brings out of his treasure (of his heart) things new and old\'. Like a treasure chest, the newest stuff is on the top, but precious old stuff underneath too.
Whether me singing is a treasure is a different matter! lol.

September 29th, 2017 08:34

Decorations of the Heart
malubotelho said:

The decorations of life. Beautiful them and you made it into a great writing. We all like to hang our own decorations and look at them from time to time. A special smile, the first sight of someone you loved. Those words that were said and only you could understand because they were meant just for you. We are always special to someone. Very nice writing AP

September 29th, 2017 08:12

Decorations of the Heart
Christina8 said:

This poem makes me feel nostalgic. I\'m glad I have someone in my life I can go through all these memories with. Thanks for this beautiful poem!

September 29th, 2017 06:49

Decorations of the Heart
Michael Edwards said:

An entire lifetime and still there so many things I would like to achieve - great work AP.

September 29th, 2017 03:50

Decorations of the Heart
UnspokenVoice92 said:

A glance at a lifetime of events.. makes me want to live twice.. Excellent.

September 29th, 2017 03:30

Past, Present and Future
malubotelho said:

One can make a great reflection from your writing. It comes from your experiences connected to your heart. Enjoyed reading.

September 28th, 2017 16:58

Past, Present and Future
lasergraph said:

Your three friends are cheating on you, they are my friends too. Your past is your teacher, where your mistakes are your lessons, your present is where you implement what you learned and your future is when you try the changes you learned from the other two.

September 28th, 2017 13:36

Past, Present and Future
Azura Nightsong said:

So much meaning, so little who understand. Very nice!

September 28th, 2017 13:26

Past, Present and Future
WL Schuett said:

Good thoughtful poem AP a life lesson I\'m sure

September 28th, 2017 09:23

Past, Present and Future
Goldfinch60 said:

We should never stop learning, moving forward is the only way we should go. Good write.

September 28th, 2017 08:15

Past, Present and Future
orchidee said:

Good write AP.

September 28th, 2017 07:26

Past, Present and Future
FredPeyer said:

AP, this is a deep one. Will have to think about it a while, probably going from present to future.

September 28th, 2017 03:39

Tread Lightly My Dear
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive write.

September 28th, 2017 00:26

Tread Lightly My Dear
Christina8 said:

I think this is a fabulous write and its a poem where I can feel your anguish over these honest words. Great poem AP!!

September 27th, 2017 16:27

Tread Lightly My Dear
Louis Gibbs said:

A \'not-to-be-ignored\' threat, so gently presented, AP! If I were her, I wouldn\'t test it. Very well written!

September 27th, 2017 14:18

Tread Lightly My Dear
FredPeyer said:

AP, you really know how to write. \'You ended my heart\'s obligation to you\' is as good as it gets!
And the last stanza is so full of tenderness despite the pain.
Kudos!

September 27th, 2017 11:43

Tread Lightly My Dear
WL Schuett said:

Poetry at a high level AP , well done

September 27th, 2017 09:12

Tread Lightly My Dear
Michael Edwards said:

Superbly written and crafted - great read.

September 27th, 2017 08:37

Tread Lightly My Dear
orchidee said:

A fine write AP. I gotta tread lightly on some of the poems on here, ya know. They\'ll make me swoon! heehee.

September 27th, 2017 08:15

Tread Lightly My Dear
Fay Slimm. said:

This tell it just how it is - - honest words spoken from the heart make the best message every time. Good read.

September 27th, 2017 06:51



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