Comments received on poems by Accidental Poet
Plan B
dusk arising said:
Ah yes that cunningly contrived second plan.... but will they let you get away with it...... everything else has been perfection.... plan b is plan b for a reason..... is it safe?
You could always dig a tunnel instead you know.
September 18th, 2017 13:15
dusk arising said:
Ah yes that cunningly contrived second plan.... but will they let you get away with it...... everything else has been perfection.... plan b is plan b for a reason..... is it safe?
You could always dig a tunnel instead you know.
September 18th, 2017 13:15
Plan B
malubotelho said:
Excellent writing AP. It sucks whe we have all planned and poof! Everything goes air. Gone
September 18th, 2017 13:09
malubotelho said:
Excellent writing AP. It sucks whe we have all planned and poof! Everything goes air. Gone
September 18th, 2017 13:09
Plan B
FredPeyer said:
AP, I actually did lol when I came to the end of your poem. It is so true, and I just have to make this a favorite!
Hey, did anybody see that note? The one that says \'Plan B\'?
September 18th, 2017 12:53
FredPeyer said:
AP, I actually did lol when I came to the end of your poem. It is so true, and I just have to make this a favorite!
Hey, did anybody see that note? The one that says \'Plan B\'?
September 18th, 2017 12:53
Plan B
orchidee said:
Don\'t have a fan then - the electric sort! But you have plenty of fans - the people sort! hehe.
September 18th, 2017 08:24
orchidee said:
Don\'t have a fan then - the electric sort! But you have plenty of fans - the people sort! hehe.
September 18th, 2017 08:24
Plan B
Goldfinch60 said:
It often happens in life, we can see the light at the end of the tunnel and then the roof caves in. Good write.
September 18th, 2017 07:52
Goldfinch60 said:
It often happens in life, we can see the light at the end of the tunnel and then the roof caves in. Good write.
September 18th, 2017 07:52
Plan B
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - those clever last lines had me smiling my friend - plans indeed do go awry sometimes. Good read.
September 18th, 2017 05:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - those clever last lines had me smiling my friend - plans indeed do go awry sometimes. Good read.
September 18th, 2017 05:12
A Traditional Man
dusk arising said:
Nice one sir! But will 10 year old girls buy it on vinyl? Aww we wont be seeing u on TV anytime soon then. More\'s the shame.
September 17th, 2017 17:08
dusk arising said:
Nice one sir! But will 10 year old girls buy it on vinyl? Aww we wont be seeing u on TV anytime soon then. More\'s the shame.
September 17th, 2017 17:08
A Traditional Man
FredPeyer said:
I really think you should present these lyrics to Bruce Springsteen!!!!
Great writing, great subject.
September 17th, 2017 15:28
FredPeyer said:
I really think you should present these lyrics to Bruce Springsteen!!!!
Great writing, great subject.
September 17th, 2017 15:28
A Traditional Man
rrodriguez said:
I really enjoyed your poem. I would love to hear being played on YouTube. Great job!
September 17th, 2017 07:55
rrodriguez said:
I really enjoyed your poem. I would love to hear being played on YouTube. Great job!
September 17th, 2017 07:55
A Traditional Man
orchidee said:
A fine write AP. I could have a go at setting it to a tune (or got one already?). Mind you, it would probably be a hymn tune. I only know about 3 non-hymn tunes! lol
September 17th, 2017 07:08
orchidee said:
A fine write AP. I could have a go at setting it to a tune (or got one already?). Mind you, it would probably be a hymn tune. I only know about 3 non-hymn tunes! lol
September 17th, 2017 07:08
A Traditional Man
WL Schuett said:
Is there music that goes with this song , I could read with some rhythm but wonder what you were thinking in terms of rhythm, good work AP
September 17th, 2017 06:59
WL Schuett said:
Is there music that goes with this song , I could read with some rhythm but wonder what you were thinking in terms of rhythm, good work AP
September 17th, 2017 06:59
Saturday Mornings
myself and me said:
Saturday morning is the most relax morning of the week. A lot of fun memories. Thank you.
September 16th, 2017 18:32
myself and me said:
Saturday morning is the most relax morning of the week. A lot of fun memories. Thank you.
September 16th, 2017 18:32
Saturday Mornings
Fay Slimm. said:
Keeping it simple is the answer and memories then are worth the making - - - a magical read .
September 16th, 2017 11:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Keeping it simple is the answer and memories then are worth the making - - - a magical read .
September 16th, 2017 11:07
Saturday Mornings
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful nostalgic write, those days were so innocent and full of wonder.
September 16th, 2017 10:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful nostalgic write, those days were so innocent and full of wonder.
September 16th, 2017 10:14
Saturday Mornings
WL Schuett said:
😎 AP this Saturday morn was a little brighter reading your reminiscences and making me think of my own . Thanks
September 16th, 2017 08:31
WL Schuett said:
😎 AP this Saturday morn was a little brighter reading your reminiscences and making me think of my own . Thanks
September 16th, 2017 08:31
Saturday Mornings
dusk arising said:
Oh what a treasure you\'ve unearthed here my friend. For we all have those fond memories. The way you\'ve written this is very warm and comfortable, makes it a joyful read, a pleasure to read.
September 16th, 2017 06:24
dusk arising said:
Oh what a treasure you\'ve unearthed here my friend. For we all have those fond memories. The way you\'ve written this is very warm and comfortable, makes it a joyful read, a pleasure to read.
September 16th, 2017 06:24
Saturday Mornings
FredPeyer said:
AP, this brings on memories of not only Saturday mornings, but whole summers of carefree play and fun. Thanks for triggering these memories!
September 16th, 2017 05:05
FredPeyer said:
AP, this brings on memories of not only Saturday mornings, but whole summers of carefree play and fun. Thanks for triggering these memories!
September 16th, 2017 05:05
Learn To Understand
malubotelho said:
Yes, I get it and I think that if we find things wrong with others chances are we have wrong things with us too. If they can not understand us maybe is because we are hiding inside us. Beautiful writing as always. I understand you and love the way you write.
September 15th, 2017 21:35
malubotelho said:
Yes, I get it and I think that if we find things wrong with others chances are we have wrong things with us too. If they can not understand us maybe is because we are hiding inside us. Beautiful writing as always. I understand you and love the way you write.
September 15th, 2017 21:35
Learn To Understand
poetboy123 said:
Seemed many of us wrote poems like this, brilliant piece!
September 15th, 2017 17:11
poetboy123 said:
Seemed many of us wrote poems like this, brilliant piece!
September 15th, 2017 17:11
Learn To Understand
WL Schuett said:
lots of nice imagery here very well posed I like it .... 😎
September 15th, 2017 11:17
WL Schuett said:
lots of nice imagery here very well posed I like it .... 😎
September 15th, 2017 11:17
Learn To Understand
lasergraph said:
Sometimes we just have to take a chance and let people in.
September 15th, 2017 10:32
lasergraph said:
Sometimes we just have to take a chance and let people in.
September 15th, 2017 10:32
Learn To Understand
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that open hand may show the way to a better life, grab it with both of your hands.
September 15th, 2017 08:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that open hand may show the way to a better life, grab it with both of your hands.
September 15th, 2017 08:10
Learn To Understand
myself and me said:
\"Reach deep down
Into my bag of tricks
I’ll pull out a smile
We’ll see how long it sticks\"
Yes, we play tricks to ourselves and to others to pretend we are fine, to hide what inside.
\"I’ll live in solitude
Safe within myself\"
This really gets my never, painful.
Very well expressed.
September 15th, 2017 08:05
myself and me said:
\"Reach deep down
Into my bag of tricks
I’ll pull out a smile
We’ll see how long it sticks\"
Yes, we play tricks to ourselves and to others to pretend we are fine, to hide what inside.
\"I’ll live in solitude
Safe within myself\"
This really gets my never, painful.
Very well expressed.
September 15th, 2017 08:05
Learn To Understand
Surucipe said:
Very relatable, enjoyed and resonated with this! Thanks for sharing this piece.
S
September 15th, 2017 05:19
Surucipe said:
Very relatable, enjoyed and resonated with this! Thanks for sharing this piece.
S
September 15th, 2017 05:19
Learn To Understand
orchidee said:
Good write AP. Yet if some can\'t be bothered to understand us, why should we bother to understand them?!
September 15th, 2017 03:49
orchidee said:
Good write AP. Yet if some can\'t be bothered to understand us, why should we bother to understand them?!
September 15th, 2017 03:49
Learn To Understand
Michael Edwards said:
Yes we must reach out if we want to progress - I do like this AP
September 15th, 2017 03:25
Michael Edwards said:
Yes we must reach out if we want to progress - I do like this AP
September 15th, 2017 03:25
Of Rhyme and Reason
malubotelho said:
Santita is right. Your poems are so full of feelings. It is like it flows naturally from your pen without much efort like it is really easy for you to write those beauties. Very nice.
September 14th, 2017 23:38
malubotelho said:
Santita is right. Your poems are so full of feelings. It is like it flows naturally from your pen without much efort like it is really easy for you to write those beauties. Very nice.
September 14th, 2017 23:38
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