Comments received on poems by Accidental Poet
Illusions Of Pain
myself and me said:
The pain is deep, but with support and love, we will stand.
Thank you.
August 17th, 2017 23:08
myself and me said:
The pain is deep, but with support and love, we will stand.
Thank you.
August 17th, 2017 23:08
Illusions Of Pain
malubotelho said:
You lean on me and I’ll lean on you
We’ll help each other stand tall and true
Let’s all hold hands
One big circle of love that understands
You are so right. What we are doing with our writing is reaching for others for some conection so we can extend our thoughts, our pain and also love. We are declaring that we are humans. Awesome writing.
August 17th, 2017 14:46
malubotelho said:
You lean on me and I’ll lean on you
We’ll help each other stand tall and true
Let’s all hold hands
One big circle of love that understands
You are so right. What we are doing with our writing is reaching for others for some conection so we can extend our thoughts, our pain and also love. We are declaring that we are humans. Awesome writing.
August 17th, 2017 14:46
Illusions Of Pain
Louis Gibbs said:
No one can know what lies behind the masks we wear, as your fine poem portrays so well, AP. Kudos on this one!
August 17th, 2017 08:13
Louis Gibbs said:
No one can know what lies behind the masks we wear, as your fine poem portrays so well, AP. Kudos on this one!
August 17th, 2017 08:13
Illusions Of Pain
Nicholas Browning said:
This is nicely said. Cool philosophy and ideals. Thanks for this.
August 17th, 2017 07:08
Nicholas Browning said:
This is nicely said. Cool philosophy and ideals. Thanks for this.
August 17th, 2017 07:08
Illusions Of Pain
burning-embers said:
Excellent thought and to a large extent isn\'t that just what we do for each other here in mps. Hold each others hand when pain is pouring out of our laptop screens. Sympathise and bolster, care and advise. Screen generated hugs and yes it\'s okay to weep. This place is special like that, and we are special people us poets with our own individual needs.
August 17th, 2017 04:49
burning-embers said:
Excellent thought and to a large extent isn\'t that just what we do for each other here in mps. Hold each others hand when pain is pouring out of our laptop screens. Sympathise and bolster, care and advise. Screen generated hugs and yes it\'s okay to weep. This place is special like that, and we are special people us poets with our own individual needs.
August 17th, 2017 04:49
My poetic Side
burning-embers said:
A thoroughly good idea to write about this place and a really good and enjoyable write it is too. A great deal of it chimes with me and probably for all others of a few years maturity who are here too.
August 17th, 2017 04:33
burning-embers said:
A thoroughly good idea to write about this place and a really good and enjoyable write it is too. A great deal of it chimes with me and probably for all others of a few years maturity who are here too.
August 17th, 2017 04:33
My poetic Side
private poet said:
Great poem! I identified with much of your thoughts. Keep your poetic side alive. It is a great muse through which to channel your thoughts.
August 17th, 2017 04:26
private poet said:
Great poem! I identified with much of your thoughts. Keep your poetic side alive. It is a great muse through which to channel your thoughts.
August 17th, 2017 04:26
Illusions Of Pain
FredPeyer said:
AP, this is a great poem with an incredible message. Thank you!
August 17th, 2017 04:03
FredPeyer said:
AP, this is a great poem with an incredible message. Thank you!
August 17th, 2017 04:03
Hiding In The Rain
Heather T said:
How very elemental, this soul bath. Paints a raw and beautiful scene. Both camouflage and cleansing.
August 16th, 2017 23:06
Heather T said:
How very elemental, this soul bath. Paints a raw and beautiful scene. Both camouflage and cleansing.
August 16th, 2017 23:06
Hiding In The Rain
myself and me said:
\"Hiding in the rain\",
A scene just jump into my mind
A lady holding an umbrella standing next to you, silently...
Then, using your imagination.
Now I know what to do if next time I want to cry. Watch weather forecast first.
Brilliant.
August 16th, 2017 21:10
myself and me said:
\"Hiding in the rain\",
A scene just jump into my mind
A lady holding an umbrella standing next to you, silently...
Then, using your imagination.
Now I know what to do if next time I want to cry. Watch weather forecast first.
Brilliant.
August 16th, 2017 21:10
Hiding In The Rain
malubotelho said:
The way you describe the recess we all need sometimes to recompose is so perfect. Beautiful array of words.
August 16th, 2017 10:03
malubotelho said:
The way you describe the recess we all need sometimes to recompose is so perfect. Beautiful array of words.
August 16th, 2017 10:03
Hiding In The Rain
Louis Gibbs said:
A well described process we all go through, AP! Some of our best work emerges from it, doesn\'t it.
August 16th, 2017 09:24
Louis Gibbs said:
A well described process we all go through, AP! Some of our best work emerges from it, doesn\'t it.
August 16th, 2017 09:24
Hiding In The Rain
orchidee said:
A fine write AP. Ya got an umbrella there?! heehee.
August 16th, 2017 08:27
orchidee said:
A fine write AP. Ya got an umbrella there?! heehee.
August 16th, 2017 08:27
Hiding In The Rain
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, we all need to hide sometimes.
August 16th, 2017 07:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, we all need to hide sometimes.
August 16th, 2017 07:47
Ten Feet From The Ledge
myself and me said:
I’ll still be here
Giving life my best
Respecting God given life
With flyin’ colors I’ll pass that test
Love your attitude about life. You sure will pass the test with a perfect score.
August 15th, 2017 21:05
myself and me said:
I’ll still be here
Giving life my best
Respecting God given life
With flyin’ colors I’ll pass that test
Love your attitude about life. You sure will pass the test with a perfect score.
August 15th, 2017 21:05
Ten Feet From The Ledge
Louis Gibbs said:
Each and every one of our lives are a precious gift, to be explored and fully lived, I appreciate your poem, AP!
August 15th, 2017 16:44
Louis Gibbs said:
Each and every one of our lives are a precious gift, to be explored and fully lived, I appreciate your poem, AP!
August 15th, 2017 16:44
Ten Feet From The Ledge
sue.evans said:
Love your positivity - shines through your words.
August 15th, 2017 16:33
sue.evans said:
Love your positivity - shines through your words.
August 15th, 2017 16:33
This Is Not Good-bye
Florina77 said:
This is beautiful...i could only imagine how blessed and lovely it would be to be looking down upon someone who has written so beautifully about me after my time on earth in the physical form has gone by. Love it!
August 15th, 2017 15:18
Florina77 said:
This is beautiful...i could only imagine how blessed and lovely it would be to be looking down upon someone who has written so beautifully about me after my time on earth in the physical form has gone by. Love it!
August 15th, 2017 15:18
Ten Feet From The Ledge
Alf W said:
Respecting God-given life has no comparison in my book, so I love you poem and how you live. Enjoy and be blessed in your life. Superb write!
August 15th, 2017 10:54
Alf W said:
Respecting God-given life has no comparison in my book, so I love you poem and how you live. Enjoy and be blessed in your life. Superb write!
August 15th, 2017 10:54
Ten Feet From The Ledge
orchidee said:
Good write. I was 10 feet from the ledge. But I was on the ground floor! I cheated! heehee. You\'re a wag, Orchi!
August 15th, 2017 08:35
orchidee said:
Good write. I was 10 feet from the ledge. But I was on the ground floor! I cheated! heehee. You\'re a wag, Orchi!
August 15th, 2017 08:35
Ten Feet From The Ledge
lasergraph said:
I loved it, I think you expressed what most of us feel.
August 15th, 2017 07:55
lasergraph said:
I loved it, I think you expressed what most of us feel.
August 15th, 2017 07:55
Ten Feet From The Ledge
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, we must all do our best in this life.
August 15th, 2017 03:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, we must all do our best in this life.
August 15th, 2017 03:46
Ten Feet From The Ledge
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AP ~ very wise Counsel ! In my experience all those who sail \"close to the edge\" (for the Fun & Hell of it) eventually fall over it and sink ~ often without trace ! Discretion is always the greater part of Valour ! Please check Anarchy ~ a Wordless Poem ~ Thanks BRIAN.
August 15th, 2017 03:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AP ~ very wise Counsel ! In my experience all those who sail \"close to the edge\" (for the Fun & Hell of it) eventually fall over it and sink ~ often without trace ! Discretion is always the greater part of Valour ! Please check Anarchy ~ a Wordless Poem ~ Thanks BRIAN.
August 15th, 2017 03:17
Stinkin’ Thinkin’
Gary Edward Geraci said:
An important message done in great meter and rhyme. It took returning to the faith tradition of my youth to transform tons of regrets and sin into small droplets to drop into an ocean eager to swallow them up for good. Liberating indeed o rid oneself of the stinkin\' thinkin\'.
August 14th, 2017 22:05
Gary Edward Geraci said:
An important message done in great meter and rhyme. It took returning to the faith tradition of my youth to transform tons of regrets and sin into small droplets to drop into an ocean eager to swallow them up for good. Liberating indeed o rid oneself of the stinkin\' thinkin\'.
August 14th, 2017 22:05
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