Comments received on poems by Accidental Poet
Learn To Understand
lasergraph said:
Sometimes we just have to take a chance and let people in.
September 15th, 2017 10:32
lasergraph said:
Sometimes we just have to take a chance and let people in.
September 15th, 2017 10:32
Learn To Understand
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that open hand may show the way to a better life, grab it with both of your hands.
September 15th, 2017 08:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that open hand may show the way to a better life, grab it with both of your hands.
September 15th, 2017 08:10
Learn To Understand
myself and me said:
\"Reach deep down
Into my bag of tricks
I’ll pull out a smile
We’ll see how long it sticks\"
Yes, we play tricks to ourselves and to others to pretend we are fine, to hide what inside.
\"I’ll live in solitude
Safe within myself\"
This really gets my never, painful.
Very well expressed.
September 15th, 2017 08:05
myself and me said:
\"Reach deep down
Into my bag of tricks
I’ll pull out a smile
We’ll see how long it sticks\"
Yes, we play tricks to ourselves and to others to pretend we are fine, to hide what inside.
\"I’ll live in solitude
Safe within myself\"
This really gets my never, painful.
Very well expressed.
September 15th, 2017 08:05
Learn To Understand
Surucipe said:
Very relatable, enjoyed and resonated with this! Thanks for sharing this piece.
S
September 15th, 2017 05:19
Surucipe said:
Very relatable, enjoyed and resonated with this! Thanks for sharing this piece.
S
September 15th, 2017 05:19
Learn To Understand
orchidee said:
Good write AP. Yet if some can\'t be bothered to understand us, why should we bother to understand them?!
September 15th, 2017 03:49
orchidee said:
Good write AP. Yet if some can\'t be bothered to understand us, why should we bother to understand them?!
September 15th, 2017 03:49
Learn To Understand
Michael Edwards said:
Yes we must reach out if we want to progress - I do like this AP
September 15th, 2017 03:25
Michael Edwards said:
Yes we must reach out if we want to progress - I do like this AP
September 15th, 2017 03:25
Of Rhyme and Reason
malubotelho said:
Santita is right. Your poems are so full of feelings. It is like it flows naturally from your pen without much efort like it is really easy for you to write those beauties. Very nice.
September 14th, 2017 23:38
malubotelho said:
Santita is right. Your poems are so full of feelings. It is like it flows naturally from your pen without much efort like it is really easy for you to write those beauties. Very nice.
September 14th, 2017 23:38
Of Rhyme and Reason
WL Schuett said:
Wonderful poem celebrating the arts , great poem
September 14th, 2017 19:23
WL Schuett said:
Wonderful poem celebrating the arts , great poem
September 14th, 2017 19:23
Of Rhyme and Reason
myself and me said:
\"Emotions locked inside will lead to useless stress
Open the doors to mind and heart
Let the passions within express your own beautiful art\"
Beautiful art always comes from heart, such as this one.
Wonderful indeed.
September 14th, 2017 14:27
myself and me said:
\"Emotions locked inside will lead to useless stress
Open the doors to mind and heart
Let the passions within express your own beautiful art\"
Beautiful art always comes from heart, such as this one.
Wonderful indeed.
September 14th, 2017 14:27
Of Rhyme and Reason
FredPeyer said:
AP, what I see here is a master at the top of his game!
September 14th, 2017 14:11
FredPeyer said:
AP, what I see here is a master at the top of his game!
September 14th, 2017 14:11
Of Rhyme and Reason
Christina8 said:
Definitely good advice. Great poem. A great read! Wonderful!
September 14th, 2017 13:35
Christina8 said:
Definitely good advice. Great poem. A great read! Wonderful!
September 14th, 2017 13:35
Of Rhyme and Reason
Sepala Weliwitigoda said:
Good advice. Beautifully expressed.
September 14th, 2017 12:37
Sepala Weliwitigoda said:
Good advice. Beautifully expressed.
September 14th, 2017 12:37
Of Rhyme and Reason
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all try to put our emotions on the page as you have done with this poem.
September 14th, 2017 08:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all try to put our emotions on the page as you have done with this poem.
September 14th, 2017 08:36
Holding Pen
malubotelho said:
Very nice writing. What a big family you have. You are a father to all those children? Nice way of thinking and being responsible for your writing.
September 13th, 2017 23:27
malubotelho said:
Very nice writing. What a big family you have. You are a father to all those children? Nice way of thinking and being responsible for your writing.
September 13th, 2017 23:27
Holding Pen
WL Schuett said:
Nice AP You\'ve seemed to have hit the creative process right on the head with this poem
September 13th, 2017 21:03
WL Schuett said:
Nice AP You\'ve seemed to have hit the creative process right on the head with this poem
September 13th, 2017 21:03
Holding Pen
myself and me said:
It seems you have fixed the PC problem.
Have you ever counted how many children had come out of your holding pen.
A metaphor well done.
September 13th, 2017 19:28
myself and me said:
It seems you have fixed the PC problem.
Have you ever counted how many children had come out of your holding pen.
A metaphor well done.
September 13th, 2017 19:28
Holding Pen
John Prophet said:
Great piece on the process of art creation! Well done.
September 13th, 2017 19:23
John Prophet said:
Great piece on the process of art creation! Well done.
September 13th, 2017 19:23
Heavenly Dreamland
myself and me said:
One day, we will re-union with our loved ones again.
a very touching writing.
September 10th, 2017 11:35
myself and me said:
One day, we will re-union with our loved ones again.
a very touching writing.
September 10th, 2017 11:35
Heavenly Dreamland
WL Schuett said:
Lovely heartfelt AP a Mothers love is like nothing else
September 10th, 2017 08:05
WL Schuett said:
Lovely heartfelt AP a Mothers love is like nothing else
September 10th, 2017 08:05
Heavenly Dreamland
dusk arising said:
A love many will never have known sadly. Envious. Nice writing.
September 10th, 2017 06:51
dusk arising said:
A love many will never have known sadly. Envious. Nice writing.
September 10th, 2017 06:51
Life in the Rearview Mirror 101
dusk arising said:
Great to read. Looking back on your life experiences with the kind eyes wisdom has given you.
I find it\'s still a challenge to let go of the negative things in my recent past but i have the wisdom to know i must and the love of life to help me. I really like your words \"and life is a journey not a destination\" so true. How many times have we journeyed before, how many more times will we, what then??? It\'s just enormous once you start thinking it through.
September 10th, 2017 06:23
dusk arising said:
Great to read. Looking back on your life experiences with the kind eyes wisdom has given you.
I find it\'s still a challenge to let go of the negative things in my recent past but i have the wisdom to know i must and the love of life to help me. I really like your words \"and life is a journey not a destination\" so true. How many times have we journeyed before, how many more times will we, what then??? It\'s just enormous once you start thinking it through.
September 10th, 2017 06:23
Heavenly Dreamland
Michael Edwards said:
Such a sensitive write - enjoyed it greatly.
September 10th, 2017 04:43
Michael Edwards said:
Such a sensitive write - enjoyed it greatly.
September 10th, 2017 04:43
Heavenly Dreamland
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhh AP ~ a perfect description of the \"Joys of Dreamland\" Thanks fro caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check ROSES and my latest FUSION \"Where would you like to live ?\" Thanks B
September 10th, 2017 04:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhh AP ~ a perfect description of the \"Joys of Dreamland\" Thanks fro caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check ROSES and my latest FUSION \"Where would you like to live ?\" Thanks B
September 10th, 2017 04:19
Life in the Rearview Mirror 101
myself and me said:
\"And life is a journey
Not a destination
The battles that raged within
Justification for hesitation\"
All the experiences we have in this journey, no matter good or bad, regrets or success, they are all part of the beautiful view of the past.
Love this poem.
September 9th, 2017 18:38
myself and me said:
\"And life is a journey
Not a destination
The battles that raged within
Justification for hesitation\"
All the experiences we have in this journey, no matter good or bad, regrets or success, they are all part of the beautiful view of the past.
Love this poem.
September 9th, 2017 18:38
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