Comments received on poems by Accidental Poet



# 500
Thomas W Case said:

Congrats. Very well done. Write on.

February 6th, 2024 12:14

For Lack There Of
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful thought yet it seems so far away. I have written on this several times and it seems that although we pride ourselves on our technological progress we have never had a social revolution to take us out of a world of hate, anger, and war. Well written with good meter and rhyme.

February 6th, 2024 08:23

Metaphors of change
Tom Dylan said:

So much crammed into those lines. Well done. Cheers, Tom.

February 6th, 2024 07:32

Metaphors of change
Neville said:



What else is a metaphor eh .. :)

February 5th, 2024 12:26

Metaphors of change
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

February 5th, 2024 10:23

Metaphors of change
sorenbarrett said:

Well put. There are so many in this world, everything is subject to change. Great observation and so well worded.

February 5th, 2024 09:56

Metaphors of change
Garth Rakumakoe said:

So much said, with so much spared. A mature ink this is, from you. Kudos to you, dear writer.

February 5th, 2024 06:36

Metaphors of change
Neville said:


This is seriously so cool sir AP .. N

February 5th, 2024 03:46

Metaphors of change
Goldfinch60 said:

So true and a good senryu AP.

Andy

February 5th, 2024 02:29

Your Most Beautiful Art
John Lee said:

Excellent! I love to just visit that place, and embrace the silence at times. To pray, to listen, or just let my heart breathe.

February 4th, 2024 23:10

As Easy as Breathing
Christina8 said:

Beautiful poem and wonderful tribute to Sharon on your guitar!

February 4th, 2024 16:09

Metaphors of change
Christina8 said:

A wonderful thought, the concept I\'\'m still figuring out....

February 4th, 2024 16:01

Metaphors of change
orchidee said:

Good write AP.
I dunno why KP complains when I wax metaphorical with her about various varieties of trout - old ones, that is! lol.

February 4th, 2024 15:48

Metaphors of change
sorenbarrett said:

A deep concept that merits more thought than a short few lines. \"from one concept to another\" here lies the depth of many deep seas where life began and still does in the sea of the mind.

February 4th, 2024 13:55

Metaphors of change
Parisab said:

I never thought about how metaphor and change are related. That’s neat!

February 4th, 2024 12:13

Metaphors of change
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful, all credit to you super powerful and such a beautiful thought. ❤️

February 4th, 2024 11:49

Poor Punxsutawney Phil
2781 said:

I am a little slow, but doesn\'t sun cast a shadow?
Are they relying on Phils intuition? or are they pulling him out of his hole?

February 3rd, 2024 23:00

As Easy as Breathing
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

February 3rd, 2024 21:36

As Easy as Breathing
sorenbarrett said:

This piece hit me from the beginning when the Name Weiss was mentioned it matched my family on my mother\'s side that came from
Switzerland. As for playing I took violin, piano, learned the harmonica and tried the accordion but never fully mastered any. I tried the guitar but was too lazy to learn, besides I found that it hurt my fingers. But through it all I have learned to read and write music and have a deep appreciation for music of all types. A most lovely write with a bit of sadness at the end. Loved it.

February 3rd, 2024 11:58

As Easy as Breathing
Neville said:



there\'s a lifetime of love stamped on this page .. don\'t put it off any longer ..

February 3rd, 2024 09:42

As Easy as Breathing
2781 said:

Music gives words another string,
My wife tells me Michael Jackson couldn\'t play, but man, he could sing.
Like the gift to the poet, it comes from the heart,
Sing him a tune, it will add to your art.

February 3rd, 2024 07:00

As Easy as Breathing
Teddy.15 said:

A boy so fortunate

To play the guitar

As easy as breathing

The evolution of a star

This is what it\'s all about my dear A.P ❤️

February 3rd, 2024 06:00

As Easy as Breathing
peto said:

An extremely emotional and touching write

February 3rd, 2024 04:23

As Easy as Breathing
Goldfinch60 said:

Pick up that guitar AP and play for Sharon.

Andy

February 3rd, 2024 03:31

Poor Punxsutawney Phil
Goldfinch60 said:

May Spring come early to you AP.

Andy

February 3rd, 2024 03:24

As Easy as Breathing
orchidee said:

I got a challenge for you, about breathing
Try not breathing for 24 hours. I did it, but didn\'t feel well after it. Doh! lol.
Wish KP would stop breathing old trout-breath.

February 3rd, 2024 03:04

Poor Punxsutawney Phil
Doggerel Dave said:

Wot or who is a groundhog and how the hell did he end up with a Punxsutawney moniker? Oh I see, it\'s an American. That explains it all........ Americans are sometimes accused of being ignorant of the rest of the world....well here\'s one non American helping to even the score.... lol

February 2nd, 2024 17:04

Poor Punxsutawney Phil
Bella Shepard said:

Poor Phil! Now if you want a more accurate prediction just check out New Melle Bella, my allergies afirm that Spring is definitely here. Good write, and a fun one!

February 2nd, 2024 16:35

Poor Punxsutawney Phil
sorenbarrett said:

This brought to mind \"Groundhog Day\" one of my favorite movies. I think he may have a better record than the weather bureau. A fun write

February 2nd, 2024 11:31

Poor Punxsutawney Phil
Tom Dylan said:

Thanks for sharing. I only know Groundhog Day from the movie. We say if something happens over and over, it\'s like groundhog day. :-) Is it something the whole of US celebrates? When I saw the film back in the day, I thought it was made up.

February 2nd, 2024 05:46



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