Comments received on poems by Accidental Poet
Someone to Answer To
Neville said:
call it what you will, there is certainly something out there ..
perfectly penned my literary friend .. enjoyed no end .. Neville
September 18th, 2021 11:21
Neville said:
call it what you will, there is certainly something out there ..
perfectly penned my literary friend .. enjoyed no end .. Neville
September 18th, 2021 11:21
Someone to Answer To
dusk arising said:
Yes so do I. But i can\'t believe in these religious traditions man has created to manipulate our minds when we are small children.
Sit before coastal waves, or beneath open sky at night and the power from something connects spiritually.
September 18th, 2021 09:13
dusk arising said:
Yes so do I. But i can\'t believe in these religious traditions man has created to manipulate our minds when we are small children.
Sit before coastal waves, or beneath open sky at night and the power from something connects spiritually.
September 18th, 2021 09:13
Starquest
Goldfinch60 said:
So true AP, each star is a loved one that has moved on and waiting for somebody to join them.
Andy
September 18th, 2021 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
So true AP, each star is a loved one that has moved on and waiting for somebody to join them.
Andy
September 18th, 2021 00:28
Starquest
orchidee said:
Some real spiritual phrases in this.
I could see it to a hymn tune, adapted a bit, if you wish?
What\'s that you say? \'Yes, as long as YOU don\'t sing it!\' heehee.
September 17th, 2021 10:23
orchidee said:
Some real spiritual phrases in this.
I could see it to a hymn tune, adapted a bit, if you wish?
What\'s that you say? \'Yes, as long as YOU don\'t sing it!\' heehee.
September 17th, 2021 10:23
Starquest
orchidee said:
An atmospheric write AP.
I gotta help Branson with his crackpot space flights. He\'s a bit short of dough, don\'t ya know!
I might have portions of that 3 hour Ambient Meditation now and again.
September 17th, 2021 10:20
orchidee said:
An atmospheric write AP.
I gotta help Branson with his crackpot space flights. He\'s a bit short of dough, don\'t ya know!
I might have portions of that 3 hour Ambient Meditation now and again.
September 17th, 2021 10:20
Starquest
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words are strongly emotive and lines like - Tis in a sea of love I long to bask - are so moving A.P. - wishing you shining with success with your ongoing starquest.
September 17th, 2021 05:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words are strongly emotive and lines like - Tis in a sea of love I long to bask - are so moving A.P. - wishing you shining with success with your ongoing starquest.
September 17th, 2021 05:26
Nothing
Goldfinch60 said:
Thinking of nothing, if you can do it, brings so much relaxation into the mind AP.
Andy
September 17th, 2021 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Thinking of nothing, if you can do it, brings so much relaxation into the mind AP.
Andy
September 17th, 2021 00:49
Nothing
The elder poet said:
Our minds are always working . There\'s no way we can we can do nothing. Think nothing .It\'s the way we were created. I lay at night. Close my eyes . And try to think of nothing But I can\'t . Very well written A.P . thank you for sharing.
September 16th, 2021 18:05
The elder poet said:
Our minds are always working . There\'s no way we can we can do nothing. Think nothing .It\'s the way we were created. I lay at night. Close my eyes . And try to think of nothing But I can\'t . Very well written A.P . thank you for sharing.
September 16th, 2021 18:05
Nothing
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna sing it: \'I, I who have nothing!\' Nothing to show, that is, after about 6,342 singing lessons. lol.
A path to insanity? Trying to \'see\' nothing?! I saw a pink elephant flying though. lol.
September 16th, 2021 06:43
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna sing it: \'I, I who have nothing!\' Nothing to show, that is, after about 6,342 singing lessons. lol.
A path to insanity? Trying to \'see\' nothing?! I saw a pink elephant flying though. lol.
September 16th, 2021 06:43
Nothing
L. B. Mek said:
yourself, dear poet
close your eyes, and look inside
it will bring you the serene emptiness you desire
because looking inside, means answering the fears, anxieties and doubts you harbour within
and when you\'ve confronted them, they\'ll all morph to the background and quietude will reside in their place
giving you that peace of mind you crave..
will it happen overnight, no!
is it something attainable you can aspire towards, yes!
will the benefits effect you in a positive manner, while
you\'re striving to achieve your goal, unquestionably!
(I like the introspective theme to your write, but appreciate
that its not demeaning or demanding in tone
merely suggestive and questioning, a wonderful read, thanks for sharing)
September 16th, 2021 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
yourself, dear poet
close your eyes, and look inside
it will bring you the serene emptiness you desire
because looking inside, means answering the fears, anxieties and doubts you harbour within
and when you\'ve confronted them, they\'ll all morph to the background and quietude will reside in their place
giving you that peace of mind you crave..
will it happen overnight, no!
is it something attainable you can aspire towards, yes!
will the benefits effect you in a positive manner, while
you\'re striving to achieve your goal, unquestionably!
(I like the introspective theme to your write, but appreciate
that its not demeaning or demanding in tone
merely suggestive and questioning, a wonderful read, thanks for sharing)
September 16th, 2021 06:08
In The Absence of Light
Goldfinch60 said:
May we all live that life we were meant to AP.
Andy
September 16th, 2021 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
May we all live that life we were meant to AP.
Andy
September 16th, 2021 00:30
In The Absence of Light
Laura🌻 said:
A.P.,
Happy…but not so carefree
…at least for me!
These words of mine ⬆️⬆️
may sound like an oxymoron,
but not so much for me.
I’ve learned to live and make the best of whatever comes my way.
I’m my humble opinion,
living in misery and/or feeling sorry for oneself is futile.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem.
Laura🌻
September 15th, 2021 16:12
Laura🌻 said:
A.P.,
Happy…but not so carefree
…at least for me!
These words of mine ⬆️⬆️
may sound like an oxymoron,
but not so much for me.
I’ve learned to live and make the best of whatever comes my way.
I’m my humble opinion,
living in misery and/or feeling sorry for oneself is futile.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem.
Laura🌻
September 15th, 2021 16:12
In The Absence of Light
orchidee said:
Yep, verse 2 is true if ya hear me singing! heehee.
September 15th, 2021 08:18
orchidee said:
Yep, verse 2 is true if ya hear me singing! heehee.
September 15th, 2021 08:18
A Lifelong Journey
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words AP, those words flow onto the page and are there for eternity.
Andy
September 15th, 2021 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words AP, those words flow onto the page and are there for eternity.
Andy
September 15th, 2021 00:19
A Lifelong Journey
orchidee said:
A fine write and a risky clip - cos I might sing along to it! lol.
September 14th, 2021 07:13
orchidee said:
A fine write and a risky clip - cos I might sing along to it! lol.
September 14th, 2021 07:13
The Sands of Time
L. B. Mek said:
\'Mr. Arthur Itus when it rains\'
what a wonderfully vulnerable voice, you\'ve cultivated dear poet!
\'Tell me not, in mournful numbers,
Life is but an empty dream! --
For the soul is dead that slumbers,
And things are not what they seem.
Life is real! Life is earnest!
And the grave is not its goal\'
(easily on of the best starts to a poem, ever written! in my humble opinion)
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-17171
September 14th, 2021 03:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'Mr. Arthur Itus when it rains\'
what a wonderfully vulnerable voice, you\'ve cultivated dear poet!
\'Tell me not, in mournful numbers,
Life is but an empty dream! --
For the soul is dead that slumbers,
And things are not what they seem.
Life is real! Life is earnest!
And the grave is not its goal\'
(easily on of the best starts to a poem, ever written! in my humble opinion)
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-17171
September 14th, 2021 03:08
The Sands of Time
Goldfinch60 said:
But at least those grains of sand are still running free in our lives and once more I got up this morning so all is well.
Andy
September 14th, 2021 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
But at least those grains of sand are still running free in our lives and once more I got up this morning so all is well.
Andy
September 14th, 2021 00:55
The Sands of Time
Thekkinkkattil said:
Sailing in the same boat. There with you, beautifully penned
September 13th, 2021 09:08
Thekkinkkattil said:
Sailing in the same boat. There with you, beautifully penned
September 13th, 2021 09:08
The Sands of Time
orchidee said:
Good write AP.
Me journey is painful. I\'m treading the gravel of time barefoot - ouch! I must get some sand in! lol.
September 13th, 2021 05:37
orchidee said:
Good write AP.
Me journey is painful. I\'m treading the gravel of time barefoot - ouch! I must get some sand in! lol.
September 13th, 2021 05:37
Love Heals All Wounds
Goldfinch60 said:
So true AP. Love can heal all wounds.
Andy
September 13th, 2021 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
So true AP. Love can heal all wounds.
Andy
September 13th, 2021 02:08
On Patriots Day
myself and me said:
The world never the same since the day.
September 11th, 2021 12:05
myself and me said:
The world never the same since the day.
September 11th, 2021 12:05
Fear Not One So Young
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words AP, that motherly love is always with you.
Andy
September 11th, 2021 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words AP, that motherly love is always with you.
Andy
September 11th, 2021 00:15
Fear Not One So Young
The elder poet said:
A beautiful tribute to your mother. I enjoyed the read. You AP. have a great weekend.
September 10th, 2021 22:00
The elder poet said:
A beautiful tribute to your mother. I enjoyed the read. You AP. have a great weekend.
September 10th, 2021 22:00
Fear Not One So Young
orchidee said:
Good write AP.
Erm, I forgot when I was young. Well, it was before 1066! heehee.
September 10th, 2021 10:20
orchidee said:
Good write AP.
Erm, I forgot when I was young. Well, it was before 1066! heehee.
September 10th, 2021 10:20
Fear Not One So Young
Fay Slimm. said:
A great idea to write to a young self and your pen sorted the moments you cannot forget so aptly A.P. - - a wonderful read and the line I found most enchanting was \"The love song you both know will not go unsung\" - - thank you for meeting the challenge so well.
September 10th, 2021 08:57
Fay Slimm. said:
A great idea to write to a young self and your pen sorted the moments you cannot forget so aptly A.P. - - a wonderful read and the line I found most enchanting was \"The love song you both know will not go unsung\" - - thank you for meeting the challenge so well.
September 10th, 2021 08:57
Fear Not One So Young
DreamyDumpling said:
A wonderful read, thanks for sharing.
September 10th, 2021 06:31
DreamyDumpling said:
A wonderful read, thanks for sharing.
September 10th, 2021 06:31
Fear Not One So Young
L. B. Mek said:
\'Fear not one so young
The love song you both know will not go unsung
Though you may shed your own share of tears
And have troubled times through the years
Your Mother loves you still
So much love for you, your heart she’ll fill\'..
Beautiful lines!
thank you, dear Poet
September 10th, 2021 05:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'Fear not one so young
The love song you both know will not go unsung
Though you may shed your own share of tears
And have troubled times through the years
Your Mother loves you still
So much love for you, your heart she’ll fill\'..
Beautiful lines!
thank you, dear Poet
September 10th, 2021 05:56
Battle Scars of Time
orchidee said:
A fine write AP from 2003. it was peaceful then. I wasn\'t composing any songs! heehee. That\'s why they say \'the good old days!\'
September 9th, 2021 13:38
orchidee said:
A fine write AP from 2003. it was peaceful then. I wasn\'t composing any songs! heehee. That\'s why they say \'the good old days!\'
September 9th, 2021 13:38
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