Comments received on poems by Accidental Poet
Back In The Day
FredPeyer said:
While we should not live in the past, we can reminisce. You said that beautifully with this poem, AP. Something to ponder too is that today will be tomorrows past and be looked upon as the \'good old days\'!
February 24th, 2018 14:58
FredPeyer said:
While we should not live in the past, we can reminisce. You said that beautifully with this poem, AP. Something to ponder too is that today will be tomorrows past and be looked upon as the \'good old days\'!
February 24th, 2018 14:58
Back In The Day
Goldfinch60 said:
I was there, back in the day. Those memories are from where our experience comes.
February 24th, 2018 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
I was there, back in the day. Those memories are from where our experience comes.
February 24th, 2018 01:20
Back In The Day
Laura🌻 said:
A fine write, AP!
All that you say is so true!
The sixth stanza says it best! Hindsight is 20/20!
I enjoyed the read!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 23rd, 2018 11:12
Laura🌻 said:
A fine write, AP!
All that you say is so true!
The sixth stanza says it best! Hindsight is 20/20!
I enjoyed the read!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 23rd, 2018 11:12
Back In The Day
Michael Edwards said:
The last stanza sums it up - good write AP
February 23rd, 2018 10:41
Michael Edwards said:
The last stanza sums it up - good write AP
February 23rd, 2018 10:41
Back In The Day
orchidee said:
A fine write AP. Certainly days were better for me without KP, back in those days. It\'s deffo my bad days now! heehee.
February 23rd, 2018 10:04
orchidee said:
A fine write AP. Certainly days were better for me without KP, back in those days. It\'s deffo my bad days now! heehee.
February 23rd, 2018 10:04
Back In The Day
Lorna said:
Here\'s for you AP:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pZRk_-CN6A4
February 23rd, 2018 07:00
Lorna said:
Here\'s for you AP:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pZRk_-CN6A4
February 23rd, 2018 07:00
When I Was Just a Boy
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a great write, I can say the same happened to me \'When I was just a boy\'.
February 23rd, 2018 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a great write, I can say the same happened to me \'When I was just a boy\'.
February 23rd, 2018 01:25
When I Was Just a Boy
Laura🌻 said:
A great read, AP!
The poem and visual remind me of a wonderful children’s book, THE DANDELION SEED by Joseph Anthony. I used the book to teach the seasons, the seed’s journey after it was wind blown, and appreciating the challenges it had to overcome.
I feel for today’s youth! Too much to bear!
~Laura~
February 22nd, 2018 20:19
Laura🌻 said:
A great read, AP!
The poem and visual remind me of a wonderful children’s book, THE DANDELION SEED by Joseph Anthony. I used the book to teach the seasons, the seed’s journey after it was wind blown, and appreciating the challenges it had to overcome.
I feel for today’s youth! Too much to bear!
~Laura~
February 22nd, 2018 20:19
When I Was Just a Boy
Christina8 said:
So sad we live in a place of fear now more than ever! This is a really great poem, and yes, I\'m sorta young but I remember those days too.
February 22nd, 2018 07:10
Christina8 said:
So sad we live in a place of fear now more than ever! This is a really great poem, and yes, I\'m sorta young but I remember those days too.
February 22nd, 2018 07:10
When I Was Just a Boy
skyebellasario said:
What a beautiful piece! As a young person reading this, I can only hope the world returns to the way it used to be
February 22nd, 2018 07:03
skyebellasario said:
What a beautiful piece! As a young person reading this, I can only hope the world returns to the way it used to be
February 22nd, 2018 07:03
When I Was Just a Boy
Lorna said:
Oh do I ever relate! Thank you AC..... I wouldn\'t want to be a child in today\'s world for all the tea in China......
February 22nd, 2018 06:48
Lorna said:
Oh do I ever relate! Thank you AC..... I wouldn\'t want to be a child in today\'s world for all the tea in China......
February 22nd, 2018 06:48
When I Was Just a Boy
orchidee said:
A fine write AP. There are things now which make it seem like past days were \'the good old days\'.
\'I remember when....\' Agghh, no please, Orchi, not remembrances of millions of years ago! As boring as showing us your holidays snaps\'. heehee.
February 22nd, 2018 06:46
orchidee said:
A fine write AP. There are things now which make it seem like past days were \'the good old days\'.
\'I remember when....\' Agghh, no please, Orchi, not remembrances of millions of years ago! As boring as showing us your holidays snaps\'. heehee.
February 22nd, 2018 06:46
When I Was Just a Boy
Michael Edwards said:
I could add to this with my own recollections which would never happen now - so sad - a fine piece of writing AP
February 22nd, 2018 06:27
Michael Edwards said:
I could add to this with my own recollections which would never happen now - so sad - a fine piece of writing AP
February 22nd, 2018 06:27
The Circle of Inspiration
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, AP, so well written, and I love the last two stanzas. They really stand out!
February 19th, 2018 11:52
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, AP, so well written, and I love the last two stanzas. They really stand out!
February 19th, 2018 11:52
The Circle of Inspiration
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write. Inspiration is all around us, we see so much that the words within us seem to queue up in droves to be written.
February 19th, 2018 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write. Inspiration is all around us, we see so much that the words within us seem to queue up in droves to be written.
February 19th, 2018 01:22
What If…
FredPeyer said:
AP, your \'what if\' poem got me thinking too now. Not that I would want to be with them, just wondering what happened to them. And yes, it is \'them\' not \'her\'! Guess I was busy when I was young! :-)
February 18th, 2018 13:17
FredPeyer said:
AP, your \'what if\' poem got me thinking too now. Not that I would want to be with them, just wondering what happened to them. And yes, it is \'them\' not \'her\'! Guess I was busy when I was young! :-)
February 18th, 2018 13:17
The Circle of Inspiration
Laura🌻 said:
AP,
Thank you for this
INSPIRATIONAL write!
I listened to “The Circle
Game” lyrics by Tom Rush!
Enjoyed it very much!
This is what really grabbed
my attention...
“Were captive on the
carousel of time
We can’t return, we can
only look behind from
where we came”!
~Laura~
February 18th, 2018 12:42
Laura🌻 said:
AP,
Thank you for this
INSPIRATIONAL write!
I listened to “The Circle
Game” lyrics by Tom Rush!
Enjoyed it very much!
This is what really grabbed
my attention...
“Were captive on the
carousel of time
We can’t return, we can
only look behind from
where we came”!
~Laura~
February 18th, 2018 12:42
The Circle of Inspiration
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
T hanks \"AP\" Love the song & video and for the record NEW ENGLAND ~ especially in the FALL ~ awesome. Your poem is elegant in its structure ~ and its content is an ideal uplift for Sunday ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems thanks B.
February 18th, 2018 11:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
T hanks \"AP\" Love the song & video and for the record NEW ENGLAND ~ especially in the FALL ~ awesome. Your poem is elegant in its structure ~ and its content is an ideal uplift for Sunday ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems thanks B.
February 18th, 2018 11:40
The Circle of Inspiration
Michael Edwards said:
And there\'s so much to smile about if only others could see
it. Fine write.
February 18th, 2018 10:49
Michael Edwards said:
And there\'s so much to smile about if only others could see
it. Fine write.
February 18th, 2018 10:49
The Circle of Inspiration
orchidee said:
A fine write AP. I\'m in a circle in me KP marriage, which has become a deep rut now. I\'ll never get out if this hole! lol.
February 18th, 2018 10:35
orchidee said:
A fine write AP. I\'m in a circle in me KP marriage, which has become a deep rut now. I\'ll never get out if this hole! lol.
February 18th, 2018 10:35
What If…
Michael Edwards said:
In law the question we always asked was \'What if ?\' . In answering it we only considered points of fact. Takes me back. But I guess it\'s different here where there can never be an answer in fact - only in unfounded speculation. But sometimes it\'s nice to dream
February 16th, 2018 11:32
Michael Edwards said:
In law the question we always asked was \'What if ?\' . In answering it we only considered points of fact. Takes me back. But I guess it\'s different here where there can never be an answer in fact - only in unfounded speculation. But sometimes it\'s nice to dream
February 16th, 2018 11:32
What If…
orchidee said:
Good write AP. Oh woe, it\'s too late for me. What if I had never married KP? But I have! lol.
February 16th, 2018 11:20
orchidee said:
Good write AP. Oh woe, it\'s too late for me. What if I had never married KP? But I have! lol.
February 16th, 2018 11:20
What If…
Goldfinch60 said:
What if? The most asked question in our lives and one that can never be answered. Good write AP.
February 16th, 2018 08:53
Goldfinch60 said:
What if? The most asked question in our lives and one that can never be answered. Good write AP.
February 16th, 2018 08:53
What If…
myself and me said:
Life fills with all kinds of what ifs. These what ifs are hope, surprise, maybe pain too. wish your what if come true.
February 16th, 2018 08:44
myself and me said:
Life fills with all kinds of what ifs. These what ifs are hope, surprise, maybe pain too. wish your what if come true.
February 16th, 2018 08:44
What If…
Laura🌻 said:
AP,
I agree with Lorna!
What if you tried to
find her?
She might be thinking
of the same what ifs!
As Lorna commented,
she too may be thinking
and wondering the same
what ifs about you!
Thank you for sharing
your thoughts about
Sharon...once again!
~Laura~
February 16th, 2018 07:07
Laura🌻 said:
AP,
I agree with Lorna!
What if you tried to
find her?
She might be thinking
of the same what ifs!
As Lorna commented,
she too may be thinking
and wondering the same
what ifs about you!
Thank you for sharing
your thoughts about
Sharon...once again!
~Laura~
February 16th, 2018 07:07
What If…
Fay Slimm. said:
Good question to describe such a longing A.P - - an engaging read.
February 16th, 2018 07:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Good question to describe such a longing A.P - - an engaging read.
February 16th, 2018 07:04
What If…
Lorna said:
Moody Blues this morning! Thanks AP! There\'s a yearning in this poem that will make you sad! Maybe just great to think you still have this wonderful feeling about her after all these years and in real life it might have disappeared! Plus (being a woman) she is probably thinking the same thing. Who knows.... maybe you will both find each other again - have you tried?
February 16th, 2018 06:28
Lorna said:
Moody Blues this morning! Thanks AP! There\'s a yearning in this poem that will make you sad! Maybe just great to think you still have this wonderful feeling about her after all these years and in real life it might have disappeared! Plus (being a woman) she is probably thinking the same thing. Who knows.... maybe you will both find each other again - have you tried?
February 16th, 2018 06:28
If You Only Knew
Lorna said:
Love is love and this one can\'t be spoiled by anything now...... and maybe it\'s the same for her! It\'s there for you to hold on to no matter what bad things may happen......... maybe better than real life! Plus loved the music AP.
February 15th, 2018 20:17
Lorna said:
Love is love and this one can\'t be spoiled by anything now...... and maybe it\'s the same for her! It\'s there for you to hold on to no matter what bad things may happen......... maybe better than real life! Plus loved the music AP.
February 15th, 2018 20:17
If You Only Knew
Laura🌻 said:
AP,
I know we’ve discussed
your love for Sharon in
the past. An everlasting
love! I’m so happy you
wrote this poem for her!
I enjoyed the read and Kris
Kristofferson very much!
Thank you for the sharing!
~Laura ~
February 15th, 2018 19:57
Laura🌻 said:
AP,
I know we’ve discussed
your love for Sharon in
the past. An everlasting
love! I’m so happy you
wrote this poem for her!
I enjoyed the read and Kris
Kristofferson very much!
Thank you for the sharing!
~Laura ~
February 15th, 2018 19:57
If You Only Knew
kevin browne said:
Loved reading this, AP, your work will make everyone reminisce all the way to the day when we fell in love for the first time. Think I must of been 8 when I was being attacked by loves conformity , I can\'t remember her name but the feeling I still remember to this day. I\'m quite a prolific love poem writer and it\'s always good to read others write them too, but with a touch of class obviously, just like you have done right here. a tenderly written piece about love, well written, AP.
February 15th, 2018 00:49
kevin browne said:
Loved reading this, AP, your work will make everyone reminisce all the way to the day when we fell in love for the first time. Think I must of been 8 when I was being attacked by loves conformity , I can\'t remember her name but the feeling I still remember to this day. I\'m quite a prolific love poem writer and it\'s always good to read others write them too, but with a touch of class obviously, just like you have done right here. a tenderly written piece about love, well written, AP.
February 15th, 2018 00:49
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