Comments received on poems by Accidental Poet



Stealing Looks
Laura🌻 said:

I believe you can, AP!
Great write! Enjoyed the read and clip!


~Laura~

February 25th, 2018 17:57

Stealing Looks
FredPeyer said:

Without all the confusion, hurt, happiness, love, emotions, and fears of human relationships we would have nothing to write about! You captured that first tentative blossoming of feelings perfectly, AP!

February 25th, 2018 14:54

Stealing Looks
orchidee said:

A fine write AP. Love won\'t always hurt, maybe sometimes. Such as when I dashed ahead and married KP! heehee.

February 25th, 2018 11:48

Stealing Looks
Michael Edwards said:

Hope she\'ll be along soon - Great stuff AP

February 25th, 2018 10:54

Stealing Looks
Lorna said:

Hope she finds you........

February 25th, 2018 10:39

Stealing Looks
Fay Slimm. said:

The state your verse describes is all too familiar today A.P. where feelings are held inside from fear - - an apt final question then - \"Can we be open to love?\" - - hope the lady reaches out for that hand. A compelling read.

February 25th, 2018 08:46

Back In The Day
FredPeyer said:

While we should not live in the past, we can reminisce. You said that beautifully with this poem, AP. Something to ponder too is that today will be tomorrows past and be looked upon as the \'good old days\'!

February 24th, 2018 14:58

Back In The Day
Goldfinch60 said:

I was there, back in the day. Those memories are from where our experience comes.

February 24th, 2018 01:20

Back In The Day
Laura🌻 said:

A fine write, AP!
All that you say is so true!
The sixth stanza says it best! Hindsight is 20/20!
I enjoyed the read!
Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~

February 23rd, 2018 11:12

Back In The Day
Michael Edwards said:

The last stanza sums it up - good write AP

February 23rd, 2018 10:41

Back In The Day
orchidee said:

A fine write AP. Certainly days were better for me without KP, back in those days. It\'s deffo my bad days now! heehee.

February 23rd, 2018 10:04

Back In The Day
Lorna said:

Here\'s for you AP:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pZRk_-CN6A4

February 23rd, 2018 07:00

When I Was Just a Boy
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a great write, I can say the same happened to me \'When I was just a boy\'.

February 23rd, 2018 01:25

When I Was Just a Boy
Laura🌻 said:

A great read, AP!
The poem and visual remind me of a wonderful children’s book, THE DANDELION SEED by Joseph Anthony. I used the book to teach the seasons, the seed’s journey after it was wind blown, and appreciating the challenges it had to overcome.

I feel for today’s youth! Too much to bear!

~Laura~



February 22nd, 2018 20:19

When I Was Just a Boy
Christina8 said:

So sad we live in a place of fear now more than ever! This is a really great poem, and yes, I\'m sorta young but I remember those days too.

February 22nd, 2018 07:10

When I Was Just a Boy
skyebellasario said:

What a beautiful piece! As a young person reading this, I can only hope the world returns to the way it used to be

February 22nd, 2018 07:03

When I Was Just a Boy
Lorna said:

Oh do I ever relate! Thank you AC..... I wouldn\'t want to be a child in today\'s world for all the tea in China......

February 22nd, 2018 06:48

When I Was Just a Boy
orchidee said:

A fine write AP. There are things now which make it seem like past days were \'the good old days\'.
\'I remember when....\' Agghh, no please, Orchi, not remembrances of millions of years ago! As boring as showing us your holidays snaps\'. heehee.

February 22nd, 2018 06:46

When I Was Just a Boy
Michael Edwards said:

I could add to this with my own recollections which would never happen now - so sad - a fine piece of writing AP

February 22nd, 2018 06:27

The Circle of Inspiration
FredPeyer said:

Great poem, AP, so well written, and I love the last two stanzas. They really stand out!

February 19th, 2018 11:52

The Circle of Inspiration
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write. Inspiration is all around us, we see so much that the words within us seem to queue up in droves to be written.

February 19th, 2018 01:22

What If…
FredPeyer said:

AP, your \'what if\' poem got me thinking too now. Not that I would want to be with them, just wondering what happened to them. And yes, it is \'them\' not \'her\'! Guess I was busy when I was young! :-)

February 18th, 2018 13:17

The Circle of Inspiration
Laura🌻 said:

AP,
Thank you for this
INSPIRATIONAL write!
I listened to “The Circle
Game” lyrics by Tom Rush!
Enjoyed it very much!
This is what really grabbed
my attention...

“Were captive on the
carousel of time
We can’t return, we can
only look behind from
where we came”!

~Laura~

February 18th, 2018 12:42

The Circle of Inspiration
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

T hanks \"AP\" Love the song & video and for the record NEW ENGLAND ~ especially in the FALL ~ awesome. Your poem is elegant in its structure ~ and its content is an ideal uplift for Sunday ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems thanks B.

February 18th, 2018 11:40

The Circle of Inspiration
Michael Edwards said:

And there\'s so much to smile about if only others could see
it. Fine write.

February 18th, 2018 10:49

The Circle of Inspiration
orchidee said:

A fine write AP. I\'m in a circle in me KP marriage, which has become a deep rut now. I\'ll never get out if this hole! lol.

February 18th, 2018 10:35

What If…
Michael Edwards said:

In law the question we always asked was \'What if ?\' . In answering it we only considered points of fact. Takes me back. But I guess it\'s different here where there can never be an answer in fact - only in unfounded speculation. But sometimes it\'s nice to dream

February 16th, 2018 11:32

What If…
orchidee said:

Good write AP. Oh woe, it\'s too late for me. What if I had never married KP? But I have! lol.

February 16th, 2018 11:20

What If…
Goldfinch60 said:

What if? The most asked question in our lives and one that can never be answered. Good write AP.

February 16th, 2018 08:53

What If…
myself and me said:

Life fills with all kinds of what ifs. These what ifs are hope, surprise, maybe pain too. wish your what if come true.

February 16th, 2018 08:44



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