Comments received on poems by Accidental Poet



Doctor’s Orders
myself and me said:

A good doctor to visit.

November 13th, 2017 09:01

A Poem That Sleeps
myself and me said:

May the poem have a good dream.

November 13th, 2017 08:59

Doctor’s Orders
Christina8 said:

A wonderful write! I love the way you wrote this out. I especially like the prescription. I think we could all do more of this if we\'re not posting daily already.

November 13th, 2017 07:23

Doctor’s Orders
Drewp said:

A lovely write. It resonates with me very much without boring you with the details. Happy Not Birthday and thank you.

November 13th, 2017 07:07

Doctor’s Orders
Accidental Poet said:

Thanks orchi, that does make a lot of sense. I hadn\'t even thought of that. Probable how I have my settings, I\'ll look into that right now. You\'re a super hero orchi, cape flying in the breeze, standing there arms folded so proud. Now I\'m the one waffling. Thanks orchi.

November 13th, 2017 05:51

Doctor’s Orders
orchidee said:

Mine\'s on the 18th of a month, so dunno when that will show up? 18 months in a year?

November 13th, 2017 05:37

Doctor’s Orders
orchidee said:

A fine write AP. Yes, it got someone else\'s birthday wrong too! lol.
Ahh is it the American thing? Date shown as: US month/day/year. The UK way is: date/month/year.
Makes sense: somehow the UK date form is taken?
If you was born Dec 12th it would be correct: 12/12/year.
Know what I\'m waffling on a bout?

November 13th, 2017 05:36

A Poem That Sleeps
Goldfinch60 said:

That poem has obviously awoken with these words.

November 13th, 2017 02:02

A Poem That Sleeps
skyebellasario said:

A relatable write AP! Loved it :)

November 12th, 2017 16:01

A Poem That Sleeps
Fay Slimm. said:

Love the conception of poems that sleep - - tis true that words after a while form themselves and sometimes when we are least expecting it a subject gathers its sentencing from almost nowhere. - thanks A.P, for versing the frustration of waiting for clear and completed inspiration.

November 12th, 2017 11:32

A Poem That Sleeps
kevin browne said:

AP, I believe every poet on Earth has watched it. Williams is totally brilliant in this film. you\'re very welcome for for the uplift, we all deserve it.

November 12th, 2017 09:53

A Poem That Sleeps
kevin browne said:

capturing that sleeping poem with imagination is a beautiful thing. your transition from mind to paper is a remarkable notice of what not to lose. brilliant rhyming, yet again with good fluent style. i love your work AP.

November 12th, 2017 09:40

A Poem That Sleeps
orchidee said:

Erm, yes, Happy Birthday. I never know today was Dec 11th though? Eh?! Now that page is not staring back at you all blank! Oh lol, it got it wrong for another poet\'s birthday before as well.

November 12th, 2017 09:25

A Poem That Sleeps
Christina8 said:

Oh I get why you said that our posts were similiar! Mine about writers block and yours about a \"poem that sleeps\". Well, yours was much better, in my humble opinion, but I think written about similiar topic. Great job on this!!

November 12th, 2017 09:08

A Poem That Sleeps
rrodriguez said:

Nicely done... Being there... By the way, Happy Birthday!

November 12th, 2017 09:02

A Poem That Sleeps
Drewp said:

Beautiful irony. I love this. Excellent write

November 12th, 2017 08:58

A Poem That Sleeps
Michael Edwards said:

Often the situation but always it finds it\'s way onto the page somehow or other - it\'ll come.

November 12th, 2017 08:50

We’re Going Home
Christina8 said:

Insightful and beautifully written tribute to our soldiers on the field and veterans! So glad you wrote it!

November 11th, 2017 17:58

We’re Going Home
FredPeyer said:

A fine tribute to all who served! Well done, AP! I served in the Swiss Air Force (don\'t laugh, they DO have more than one pilot!), and even though I never went to war, at least I was trained and ready!

November 11th, 2017 17:17

We’re Going Home
Michael Edwards said:

As Orchi says it could equally apply here in the UK - a super sensitive write AP.

November 11th, 2017 13:35

We’re Going Home
kevin browne said:

a fantastic tribute to the ones who so deserve it. well written, AP.

November 11th, 2017 13:33

We’re Going Home
Fay Slimm. said:

A heart-rending picture of sacrifice on both sides of war-torn conditions A.P. - - your pen struck a special note when it wrote
\"Forever a soldier grieves
For the soldier’s life he stole\" - - how true this must be for the many who were going home again.A touching read my friend.

November 11th, 2017 11:52

We’re Going Home
w c said:

A fine tribute to those that serve(d).

November 11th, 2017 10:38

We’re Going Home
orchidee said:

An excellent and sensitive tribute AP. Also for \'United Kingdom\' in the penultimate line.

November 11th, 2017 09:41

Reflection of Beauty
kevin browne said:

a real poet writing brilliant poetry. good work.

November 10th, 2017 17:51

DAMN HUMANS!
FredPeyer said:

AP, I had a big smile on my face by the time I finished reading your poem. It started out so-so, I mean we all know how it feels to drive to work...boring! But then it picked up, got better and better right up to the totally unexpected, but great conclusion!

November 10th, 2017 11:50

DAMN HUMANS!
orchidee said:

A fine write AP.

November 10th, 2017 09:56

DAMN HUMANS!
myself and me said:

I guess in the eyes of all nature creatures, we are \"Damn humans\".

November 10th, 2017 09:52

DAMN HUMANS!
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write, seagulls are very skilled at what they can do.

November 10th, 2017 09:06

DAMN HUMANS!
Michael Edwards said:

Great write - it gave me a smile. Slightly off topic you mention drivers sipping coffee - why on earth do they find the need to drink coffee whilst driving ? As dangerous as talking on the mobile phone (cell net) and that\'s illegal here in the UK. Rant over !!!

November 10th, 2017 08:48



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