Comments received on poems by Accidental Poet
Attention Addicts
Goldfinch60 said:
A very good and very true write, there are so many people out there that just want to be noticed who are irrelevant.
March 4th, 2018 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
A very good and very true write, there are so many people out there that just want to be noticed who are irrelevant.
March 4th, 2018 01:30
Attention Addicts
skyebellasario said:
Great write AP! Personally I love the Kardashians but I can see your point of view :)
March 3rd, 2018 17:42
skyebellasario said:
Great write AP! Personally I love the Kardashians but I can see your point of view :)
March 3rd, 2018 17:42
Attention Addicts
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for posting AP ~ Poems in ITALICS always make me THINK ~ this is no exception ! Love the Structure ~ seven balanced quatrains and a consistent (xaxa xbxb etc) Rhyme Pattern ~ a real POEM ! Your subject is intriguing and we all ask \"is it ME ?\" Ones personality is inevitably mirrored in our Poems and I am an EXTROVERT so (in the main) I write EXTROVERT POETRY and like us all I love to get CONSTRUCTIVE and COHERENT comments ~ BUT I.m not seeking attention ~ just being ME ~ which is why I capitalise my TITLES ~ to stand out ! I always encourage ~ especially New Members ~ and (most of !) my poems are structured and coherent ! Your poem has made me think about myself and all our Members ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
March 3rd, 2018 17:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for posting AP ~ Poems in ITALICS always make me THINK ~ this is no exception ! Love the Structure ~ seven balanced quatrains and a consistent (xaxa xbxb etc) Rhyme Pattern ~ a real POEM ! Your subject is intriguing and we all ask \"is it ME ?\" Ones personality is inevitably mirrored in our Poems and I am an EXTROVERT so (in the main) I write EXTROVERT POETRY and like us all I love to get CONSTRUCTIVE and COHERENT comments ~ BUT I.m not seeking attention ~ just being ME ~ which is why I capitalise my TITLES ~ to stand out ! I always encourage ~ especially New Members ~ and (most of !) my poems are structured and coherent ! Your poem has made me think about myself and all our Members ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
March 3rd, 2018 17:11
Attention Addicts
Michael Edwards said:
So so true - they are out there (even here ? ) and appear oblivious of the image they project. The best treatment is to simply ignore them - that hurts them most. Great poem
March 3rd, 2018 15:32
Michael Edwards said:
So so true - they are out there (even here ? ) and appear oblivious of the image they project. The best treatment is to simply ignore them - that hurts them most. Great poem
March 3rd, 2018 15:32
Attention Addicts
Lauraš» said:
AP,
Another fine write!
Well done, my friend!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 3rd, 2018 12:43
Lauraš» said:
AP,
Another fine write!
Well done, my friend!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 3rd, 2018 12:43
Attention Addicts
Fay Slimm. said:
Self respect is certainly not the self absorbed attitude that some show to the world - a needed and well-written reminder A.P.
March 3rd, 2018 11:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Self respect is certainly not the self absorbed attitude that some show to the world - a needed and well-written reminder A.P.
March 3rd, 2018 11:44
Answer the Calling
skyebellasario said:
Beautiful write AP! We all have a calling that entices us :)
March 2nd, 2018 17:19
skyebellasario said:
Beautiful write AP! We all have a calling that entices us :)
March 2nd, 2018 17:19
Answer the Calling
orchidee said:
CCCCCOOOOOEEEEEEEEE!!!! You answering my call? You hear me yelling it out in capitals?! lol.
March 2nd, 2018 09:18
orchidee said:
CCCCCOOOOOEEEEEEEEE!!!! You answering my call? You hear me yelling it out in capitals?! lol.
March 2nd, 2018 09:18
Answer the Calling
FineB said:
Thank you Accidental Poet!
Great poem!
I am still wondering what my call is?
Keep writing
Fine B
March 2nd, 2018 04:38
FineB said:
Thank you Accidental Poet!
Great poem!
I am still wondering what my call is?
Keep writing
Fine B
March 2nd, 2018 04:38
Stealing Looks
myself and me said:
Maybe time will solve the mystery and the song is touching. Wonderful writing.
February 26th, 2018 09:05
myself and me said:
Maybe time will solve the mystery and the song is touching. Wonderful writing.
February 26th, 2018 09:05
Stealing Looks
Lauraš» said:
I believe you can, AP!
Great write! Enjoyed the read and clip!
~Laura~
February 25th, 2018 17:57
Lauraš» said:
I believe you can, AP!
Great write! Enjoyed the read and clip!
~Laura~
February 25th, 2018 17:57
Stealing Looks
FredPeyer said:
Without all the confusion, hurt, happiness, love, emotions, and fears of human relationships we would have nothing to write about! You captured that first tentative blossoming of feelings perfectly, AP!
February 25th, 2018 14:54
FredPeyer said:
Without all the confusion, hurt, happiness, love, emotions, and fears of human relationships we would have nothing to write about! You captured that first tentative blossoming of feelings perfectly, AP!
February 25th, 2018 14:54
Stealing Looks
orchidee said:
A fine write AP. Love won\'t always hurt, maybe sometimes. Such as when I dashed ahead and married KP! heehee.
February 25th, 2018 11:48
orchidee said:
A fine write AP. Love won\'t always hurt, maybe sometimes. Such as when I dashed ahead and married KP! heehee.
February 25th, 2018 11:48
Stealing Looks
Michael Edwards said:
Hope she\'ll be along soon - Great stuff AP
February 25th, 2018 10:54
Michael Edwards said:
Hope she\'ll be along soon - Great stuff AP
February 25th, 2018 10:54
Stealing Looks
Fay Slimm. said:
The state your verse describes is all too familiar today A.P. where feelings are held inside from fear - - an apt final question then - \"Can we be open to love?\" - - hope the lady reaches out for that hand. A compelling read.
February 25th, 2018 08:46
Fay Slimm. said:
The state your verse describes is all too familiar today A.P. where feelings are held inside from fear - - an apt final question then - \"Can we be open to love?\" - - hope the lady reaches out for that hand. A compelling read.
February 25th, 2018 08:46
Back In The Day
FredPeyer said:
While we should not live in the past, we can reminisce. You said that beautifully with this poem, AP. Something to ponder too is that today will be tomorrows past and be looked upon as the \'good old days\'!
February 24th, 2018 14:58
FredPeyer said:
While we should not live in the past, we can reminisce. You said that beautifully with this poem, AP. Something to ponder too is that today will be tomorrows past and be looked upon as the \'good old days\'!
February 24th, 2018 14:58
Back In The Day
Goldfinch60 said:
I was there, back in the day. Those memories are from where our experience comes.
February 24th, 2018 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
I was there, back in the day. Those memories are from where our experience comes.
February 24th, 2018 01:20
Back In The Day
Lauraš» said:
A fine write, AP!
All that you say is so true!
The sixth stanza says it best! Hindsight is 20/20!
I enjoyed the read!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 23rd, 2018 11:12
Lauraš» said:
A fine write, AP!
All that you say is so true!
The sixth stanza says it best! Hindsight is 20/20!
I enjoyed the read!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 23rd, 2018 11:12
Back In The Day
Michael Edwards said:
The last stanza sums it up - good write AP
February 23rd, 2018 10:41
Michael Edwards said:
The last stanza sums it up - good write AP
February 23rd, 2018 10:41
Back In The Day
orchidee said:
A fine write AP. Certainly days were better for me without KP, back in those days. It\'s deffo my bad days now! heehee.
February 23rd, 2018 10:04
orchidee said:
A fine write AP. Certainly days were better for me without KP, back in those days. It\'s deffo my bad days now! heehee.
February 23rd, 2018 10:04
Back In The Day
Lorna said:
Here\'s for you AP:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pZRk_-CN6A4
February 23rd, 2018 07:00
Lorna said:
Here\'s for you AP:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pZRk_-CN6A4
February 23rd, 2018 07:00
When I Was Just a Boy
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a great write, I can say the same happened to me \'When I was just a boy\'.
February 23rd, 2018 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a great write, I can say the same happened to me \'When I was just a boy\'.
February 23rd, 2018 01:25
When I Was Just a Boy
Lauraš» said:
A great read, AP!
The poem and visual remind me of a wonderful childrenās book, THE DANDELION SEED by Joseph Anthony. I used the book to teach the seasons, the seedās journey after it was wind blown, and appreciating the challenges it had to overcome.
I feel for todayās youth! Too much to bear!
~Laura~
February 22nd, 2018 20:19
Lauraš» said:
A great read, AP!
The poem and visual remind me of a wonderful childrenās book, THE DANDELION SEED by Joseph Anthony. I used the book to teach the seasons, the seedās journey after it was wind blown, and appreciating the challenges it had to overcome.
I feel for todayās youth! Too much to bear!
~Laura~
February 22nd, 2018 20:19
When I Was Just a Boy
Christina8 said:
So sad we live in a place of fear now more than ever! This is a really great poem, and yes, I\'m sorta young but I remember those days too.
February 22nd, 2018 07:10
Christina8 said:
So sad we live in a place of fear now more than ever! This is a really great poem, and yes, I\'m sorta young but I remember those days too.
February 22nd, 2018 07:10
When I Was Just a Boy
skyebellasario said:
What a beautiful piece! As a young person reading this, I can only hope the world returns to the way it used to be
February 22nd, 2018 07:03
skyebellasario said:
What a beautiful piece! As a young person reading this, I can only hope the world returns to the way it used to be
February 22nd, 2018 07:03
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