Comments received on poems by Accidental Poet



The Digital Pen
Zizi said:

AP, I love the way you end this poem.

December 12th, 2017 17:52

Culture
Zizi said:

A beautiful and very realistic poem AP.


December 12th, 2017 17:50

Marathon Hearts
Fay Slimm. said:

Keep seeking deep down in your heart for that marathon strength dear friend - a heart-touching read.

December 12th, 2017 12:01

Marathon Hearts
lasergraph said:

Great touching piece. She will always be there, nestled in the chambers of your heart.

December 12th, 2017 09:21

Marathon Hearts
orchidee said:

Have patience with, and in the strength. Or strength with, and in, the patience. Or both in each other!
I\'ve never really seen the two as being in conflict.


December 12th, 2017 06:42

Marathon Hearts
orchidee said:

A sensitive write AP. How about both running together? Might not be a competitive race then. Patience and Strength running together.
Or as a three-legged race? I mean, one leg each tied together, not three legs in total! I will stop waffling now. Digging myself into this hole. I won\'t get out! lol.

December 12th, 2017 06:40

Heaven In My Heart
Fay Slimm. said:

A shining love between mother and son so tenderly and honestly versed here shows such closeness can never fade - with heaven held in your heart how can you not enjoy your birthday - - have a good and blessed day dear A.P, - - and thanks for an endearing read.

December 11th, 2017 17:16

Heaven In My Heart
drabbler said:

This is a gorgeous and very openly emotional poem. I love the idea of having heaven in your heart- it\'s a beautiful idea that had never been apparent to me.
Keep writing ~ F

December 11th, 2017 16:22

Heaven In My Heart
FredPeyer said:

A beautiful tribute to your mom, AP! And you are so right, they will always be heaven in our heart.

December 11th, 2017 16:00

Heaven In My Heart
Christina8 said:

A beautiful poem, AP!! I can relate to this poem too! I never thought of it as having heaven in your heart, thanks for sharing this beautiful piece!

December 11th, 2017 10:41

Heaven In My Heart
orchidee said:

You is not so far along that long and winding road of life. Why, you is fairly young still! heehee.

December 11th, 2017 09:38

Heaven In My Heart
orchidee said:

A fine write and tribute AP. But doh, in UK, your birthday was 12th November as it took the USA date format as 12/11/year. That\'s: Day of month/month/year in UK date format.
Oh, what am I wittering on about?! lol.

December 11th, 2017 09:37

Heaven In My Heart
FineB said:

That was so beautiful Accidental Poet.

Thanks for sharing.

Keep writing
FineB

December 11th, 2017 09:31

Heaven In My Heart
Laura🌻 said:

AP,
Love the title!
A beautiful, precious , exquisite poem! A tribute to your mom on your birthday! That is so special!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
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Enjoyed the song! Paul McCartney is one of my favorites!


December 11th, 2017 09:30

Heaven In My Heart
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write, may heaven always be in your heart.

December 11th, 2017 09:04

Young Man
Goldfinch60 said:

That young man will become the wise man with time and experience.

I have just celebrated the 48th anniversary of my 21st.

December 11th, 2017 02:21

Young Man
ron parrish aka wordman said:

this is really touching and profound my friend,my son sent me this song last week,guess he`s thinking

December 10th, 2017 23:16

Young Man
FredPeyer said:

AP, no kidding, it sounds as if you wrote this poem for me!
I love it, and therefore it has to go into my favorites!

December 10th, 2017 20:54

The Spirit Within
FredPeyer said:

Well written,. AP! Have to agree with Louis, we poets are all inhabited by angels, sometimes demons, for sure our muse, and numerous other entities that urge us to to what we must: write!

December 10th, 2017 17:49

The Sunrise in My Heart
FredPeyer said:

Very beautifully penned, AP!
\'The sunrise in my heart\'...love that line.

December 10th, 2017 17:40

Young Man
Fay Slimm. said:

Full of experience and put so wisely these words say just how it is to look back - - love the song too.

December 10th, 2017 12:01

Young Man
poetboy123 said:

Happy Birthday AP and this poem was simply INCREDIBLE! Tremendously enjoyed the clever wordplay and rhythm throughout as if you could sing along.

December 10th, 2017 10:46

Young Man
Michael Edwards said:

Aw gee you\'re still young - my next birthday will be my 54th anniversary of the 21st. Great song, great write.

December 10th, 2017 09:58

Young Man
orchidee said:

Come on now - you knows you is 21 again. Maybe 22 - very old!

December 10th, 2017 08:38

Young Man
orchidee said:

A fine write AP and best wishes! But someone moaned they were getting old at 30. And I have a friend who will be 37 on the same day as your birthday!
I\'m millions of years old me self! lol.

December 10th, 2017 08:37

The Spirit Within
WL Schuett said:

Very spiritual AP , very personal and heartfelt a great write ...

December 10th, 2017 07:36

The Spirit Within
Goldfinch60 said:

Those Angels have always been there but in the twilight of our lives we can understand them and see them. Good write AP.

December 10th, 2017 02:11

The Spirit Within
Christina8 said:

Love this poem, AP! You are definitely in the presence of angels, I think we all are, but you listen to them. Inspiring wonderful poems such as these! Just a great poem altogether!

December 9th, 2017 14:19

The Spirit Within
orchidee said:

Oh I shall wax lyrical AP: Hear the sounds of angels voices, maybe singing anew - then I came along and ruined it, cos I sang too! heehee.
I\'m a horrible spoilsport. lol.

December 9th, 2017 12:43

The Spirit Within
w c said:

Another winner AP! Thanks for sharing your struggle.

December 9th, 2017 11:22



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