Comments received on poems by Accidental Poet



Nocturnal Inspirations
ron parrish aka wordman said:

sweet dreams sweep through your mind of another place and a better time,now she is gone and dreams is all i have left,so i race to my bed,lay down my head,and the dreams sweep my mind...

October 18th, 2017 20:56

Nocturnal Inspirations
skyebellasario said:

Loved it AP!

October 18th, 2017 16:34

Nocturnal Inspirations
Louis Gibbs said:

When I\'ve just written a poem in the evening, my muse won\'t let me drift off to sleep until she has honed it to her satisfaction. I keep a pad and pen beside the bed just for her.
A fine poem describing the blessing and curse of being a poet, AP!

October 18th, 2017 14:38

Nocturnal Inspirations
Christina8 said:

Great write! Sometimes as poets, we just gotta go with the flow and see where it takes us! And then sleep will come. I think a lot of us have had nights like this. Great job!

October 18th, 2017 13:47

Nocturnal Inspirations
WL Schuett said:

Sometimes you just gotta put things to bed and sleep ! Good poem AP I have had many nights like this myself

October 18th, 2017 07:46

Nocturnal Inspirations
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, sometimes those words just will wait.

October 18th, 2017 07:36

If In The End
ron parrish aka wordman said:

a nice preview of your thoughts,where do we go from here after we have reached our peak in life,not ready to stop,but begin again,where do we go from here...

October 17th, 2017 11:03

If In The End
WL Schuett said:

I am also so aware of my own imperfections , to come out even at the end I think would be great , love this poem AP

October 17th, 2017 10:02

If In The End
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, the past is behind us and gave us the experience to cherish what we have and will have upin the future. Live it to the best of your ability.

October 17th, 2017 08:18

If In The End
orchidee said:

But you is not gone yet, and you wrote this in 2011! Stay around some time - hope you do! :)

October 17th, 2017 07:44

If In The End
FredPeyer said:

Thought provoking poem here, AP! I like it! It seemed like a good idea at the time, but today we know more and look differently at what we did in the past. Cannot change it, but maybe learn?

October 17th, 2017 03:34

A Lifelong Journey
poetboy123 said:

Wow, it was all very well said, stupendous piece!

October 16th, 2017 18:17

A Lifelong Journey
Louis Gibbs said:

You nailed us with this one, AP! Well done, sir.

October 16th, 2017 11:51

A Lifelong Journey
FredPeyer said:

Everything you wrote is true, and so well penned, AP!
Poetry begins with one word, as our journey begins with one step!

October 16th, 2017 11:28

A Lifelong Journey
Laura🌻 said:

Loved this AP! The whole poem is great. I especially liked the lines...

\"Some dreams come true
And for some still to yearn\"

\"The search for inspiration
A lifelong journey to old age\"

~Laura~

October 16th, 2017 08:33

A Lifelong Journey
Goldfinch60 said:

That empty page is just awaiting words to flow onto it as your wonderful words have on this page.

October 16th, 2017 08:09

A Lifelong Journey
WL Schuett said:

A poets life , like a raging river . Well said AP this is another fine poem!

October 16th, 2017 07:50

A Lifelong Journey
orchidee said:

A fine write AP, though it may bring on a swoon for me, hearing \'flirt\'! heehee. Oh, do come on, Orchi, you\'re like a wet dish-cloth sometimes. lol.

October 16th, 2017 07:50

A Lifelong Journey
Fay Slimm. said:

Great imagery for poetic use - love the word \"flirt\" with words - - thanks for sharing your thoughts on this journey AP.

October 16th, 2017 07:27

A Lifelong Journey
Heather T said:

I\'m in love with the idea of a poet\'s flirtation with the page! Wonderful.

October 16th, 2017 06:30

A Lifelong Journey
Christina8 said:

I just love the metaphor, especially of the first stanza! It is so beautiful and true. Really great poem AP!

October 16th, 2017 06:23

A Lifelong Journey
Seek said:

It takes one to know one. The poet\'s journey very well written.

October 16th, 2017 05:02

Only a Heartbeat Away
FredPeyer said:

I really like your poem, AP! Feel the same way. It reminded me a little bit of Frank Sinatra\'s \"My way\", a song I also like.

October 16th, 2017 04:46

Fire To The Phoenix
Poetic Dan said:

Sang every word of yours in my head, finished with the tune you recommended and I\'m going to rock and roll this day. Thank you my friend

October 16th, 2017 02:13

Only a Heartbeat Away
ron parrish aka wordman said:

sunshine and rain,sweet love and pain,memories lost and found
but the gate of heaven can always be found

October 16th, 2017 01:19

Only a Heartbeat Away
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write, so positive and to my mind so true, I will be there.

October 16th, 2017 00:39

Only a Heartbeat Away
poetboy123 said:

This is brilliant!

October 15th, 2017 13:03

Only a Heartbeat Away
orchidee said:

Erm, stay \'this side\' somewhat longer - well, if you can. None of us know when our \'time\'s up\'. :)

A friend said one day (a visitor) - \'See you in the Rapture, if not before\'. Why yes, if we don\'t see them \'before\', this will be so!

October 15th, 2017 08:24

Only a Heartbeat Away
Fay Slimm. said:

A read to warm the heart - I just love that final line - - such an encouraging poem.

October 15th, 2017 06:55

Fire To The Phoenix
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and yes Rock and Roll is alive and well.

October 15th, 2017 00:50



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