Comments received on poems by Scarlite
Here I lie
Nicholas Browning said:
This is cool on so many levels. Willingness to accept death\'s embrace in poetic form. Ahhhh, lovely. We all gotta die, true that.
August 18th, 2017 01:45
Nicholas Browning said:
This is cool on so many levels. Willingness to accept death\'s embrace in poetic form. Ahhhh, lovely. We all gotta die, true that.
August 18th, 2017 01:45
Here I lie
FredPeyer said:
Aloha Cheshie, welcome to MPS!
Your really well written poem drew me in and haunted me. Like how you wrote the beginning and the end.
Maybe it\'s my age, but sometimes I do wonder how it will feel to die. Your poem gives a lot of food for thought.
Well penned!
August 18th, 2017 01:00
FredPeyer said:
Aloha Cheshie, welcome to MPS!
Your really well written poem drew me in and haunted me. Like how you wrote the beginning and the end.
Maybe it\'s my age, but sometimes I do wonder how it will feel to die. Your poem gives a lot of food for thought.
Well penned!
August 18th, 2017 01:00
