Comments received on poems by wordseven7



A Prayer
orchidee said:

A fine write Word. Wonder if I could adapt it to a hymn-poem? Not pinch the poem though - not plagiarising!

August 24th, 2017 08:32

Relationship
michelleldixon314 said:

this is good

August 23rd, 2017 13:33

Humanity
orchidee said:

This has a prophetic tone to it. True about the marathon and sprint too. Well, the whole poem is true! I notice Ecclesiastes (Old Testament) near the end of this.
The final lines speak of needing to bring more in, while still time.

August 22nd, 2017 08:49

From Death to Life - Testimony
wordseven7 said:

Yes it is Sever and thank you....


August 22nd, 2017 08:46

From Death to Life - Testimony
orchidee said:

\'Now I worship and serve the true [and] living God\'. A verbatim line said by St Alban (UK) at his trial, and then martyrdom.

August 22nd, 2017 08:33

From Death to Life - Testimony
orchidee said:

Oh wow! I just knew I was going to like this! I understand - there is \'spiritual\' language, which can\'t be substituted with anything else really.
Should it be \'shaded\' or \'shed\'? It could be either, I feel.
But it should be \'serve\' not \'sever\'?


August 22nd, 2017 08:31

From Death to Life - Testimony
wordseven7 said:

Thank you,
Yes - THE VIOLENT* COMMUNITY* OF RELIGION
But a relationship is not....

August 22nd, 2017 07:10

Humanity
Accidental Poet said:

AMEN! This world IS in need of God, love and restoration. Great write here word7

August 21st, 2017 18:06

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