Comments received on poems by Mira-kitsu
The Sting
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Whether it\'s true or not, I\'d like to imagine that that which is preserved for marriage alone was not part of the \"gifting\" described in this well written poem. The woman described is noble and royal and only a prince wiling to make a lifelong, indissoluble commitment of permanent marriage could ever deserve this complete gift of self that you aspire to.
August 31st, 2017 22:29
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Whether it\'s true or not, I\'d like to imagine that that which is preserved for marriage alone was not part of the \"gifting\" described in this well written poem. The woman described is noble and royal and only a prince wiling to make a lifelong, indissoluble commitment of permanent marriage could ever deserve this complete gift of self that you aspire to.
August 31st, 2017 22:29
The Sting
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Mira!
Well written and heart-felt. A love falling apart always hurts. I salute you for your \'radiating smile\', just make sure that smile includes the eyes!
August 31st, 2017 22:03
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Mira!
Well written and heart-felt. A love falling apart always hurts. I salute you for your \'radiating smile\', just make sure that smile includes the eyes!
August 31st, 2017 22:03
