Comments received on poems by addynicole
Anxious
FredPeyer said:
Your poem pulled me in starting with that first line. Good writing addynicole!
November 23rd, 2019 13:54
FredPeyer said:
Your poem pulled me in starting with that first line. Good writing addynicole!
November 23rd, 2019 13:54
Can you see me?
MendedFences27 said:
To be seen \"as strong, confident, and intelligent\" talk to this person. Do that and they will see you.
Your poem speaks to us readers, we relate. We appreciate the quality of your work You have a talent. As a poet, you should never fear \"Truth,\" or the spoken word, but yes, fear the withheld emotion, the silence of the unseen.
Loved your poem. - Phil A.
October 14th, 2017 19:40
MendedFences27 said:
To be seen \"as strong, confident, and intelligent\" talk to this person. Do that and they will see you.
Your poem speaks to us readers, we relate. We appreciate the quality of your work You have a talent. As a poet, you should never fear \"Truth,\" or the spoken word, but yes, fear the withheld emotion, the silence of the unseen.
Loved your poem. - Phil A.
October 14th, 2017 19:40
Can you see me?
Christina8 said:
This is great. Such a relatable write. Sometimes I feel unseen. Look forward to more of your writes!
October 14th, 2017 18:36
Christina8 said:
This is great. Such a relatable write. Sometimes I feel unseen. Look forward to more of your writes!
October 14th, 2017 18:36
Truth
MendedFences27 said:
Truth - What is it? Some things have a certitude, the Sun is in the sky, the moon, the planets ,etc. These certainties usually are in the realm of Nature. \"Truth,\" though is a creation of Man. As such, it is prone to interpretation. To each of us ,\"Truth\" is what we know. Thus, education leads to a greater refinement of it. When all is said and done, \"Truth\" can be found only within one\'s heart.
Terrific poem (a few typos) and that\'s the truth. I truly enjoyed your poem. It caused me to stop and think. - Phil A.
October 14th, 2017 10:37
MendedFences27 said:
Truth - What is it? Some things have a certitude, the Sun is in the sky, the moon, the planets ,etc. These certainties usually are in the realm of Nature. \"Truth,\" though is a creation of Man. As such, it is prone to interpretation. To each of us ,\"Truth\" is what we know. Thus, education leads to a greater refinement of it. When all is said and done, \"Truth\" can be found only within one\'s heart.
Terrific poem (a few typos) and that\'s the truth. I truly enjoyed your poem. It caused me to stop and think. - Phil A.
October 14th, 2017 10:37
