Comments received on poems by Joy Fetherolf
I\'m fine
orchidee said:
Know what you mean. I, and surely lots of others, do it from time to time. Would folk listen if we replied, \'Actually I\'m not fine\'?
September 16th, 2017 01:58
orchidee said:
Know what you mean. I, and surely lots of others, do it from time to time. Would folk listen if we replied, \'Actually I\'m not fine\'?
September 16th, 2017 01:58
I\'m fine
dusk arising said:
Well described lie we use all too often here. I like your style.
September 15th, 2017 20:47
dusk arising said:
Well described lie we use all too often here. I like your style.
September 15th, 2017 20:47
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Gary Edward Geraci said:
The best cure for self doubt is your gift of self to others. Your poem succeeds in this respect. A wonderful gift for us. Thank you. Now find it in your heart to forgive your tormentor(s) and there will be no stopping you...
September 12th, 2017 22:38
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The best cure for self doubt is your gift of self to others. Your poem succeeds in this respect. A wonderful gift for us. Thank you. Now find it in your heart to forgive your tormentor(s) and there will be no stopping you...
September 12th, 2017 22:38
Watch Me
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Joy!
I do like your poem very much. Also like the structure.
As far as content is concerned, YOU ARE SO RIGHT! Nobody but you decides what you are capable of. Keep on writing like this and we\'ll be watching you!
September 12th, 2017 18:58
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Joy!
I do like your poem very much. Also like the structure.
As far as content is concerned, YOU ARE SO RIGHT! Nobody but you decides what you are capable of. Keep on writing like this and we\'ll be watching you!
September 12th, 2017 18:58
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Louis Gibbs said:
A spunky one, indeed! Well done, and welcome to MPS!
September 12th, 2017 16:34
Louis Gibbs said:
A spunky one, indeed! Well done, and welcome to MPS!
September 12th, 2017 16:34
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Poetic Dan said:
And watch we will. Felt my life flash before my eye, brilliant written words to build your new world.
Thank you for sharing
September 12th, 2017 16:05
Poetic Dan said:
And watch we will. Felt my life flash before my eye, brilliant written words to build your new world.
Thank you for sharing
September 12th, 2017 16:05
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lasergraph said:
Good write. Others can only have power over us if we let them. Good job.
September 12th, 2017 15:49
lasergraph said:
Good write. Others can only have power over us if we let them. Good job.
September 12th, 2017 15:49
