Comments received on poems by josh_hayeslip
Our Legacy In Bondage
marielababy said:
this is beautiful , you are so talented:)
November 6th, 2017 00:31
marielababy said:
this is beautiful , you are so talented:)
November 6th, 2017 00:31
I remember when life was normal
HChristian74 said:
You hit hard upon a fundamental truth of western civilization - the dualism our societies are mired in day in and day out. This piece is readable, yet it has great depth, insight, and substance. A perfectly balanced write my friend. Keep up the good work!
HC
October 24th, 2017 10:29
HChristian74 said:
You hit hard upon a fundamental truth of western civilization - the dualism our societies are mired in day in and day out. This piece is readable, yet it has great depth, insight, and substance. A perfectly balanced write my friend. Keep up the good work!
HC
October 24th, 2017 10:29
Our Legacy In Bondage
HChristian74 said:
Wow! This write does not mince words, it pulls no punches, but it isn\'t overwrought with hyperbole either - it is a perfect blend of social conscience, commentary, observation, and analysis, with just the right amount of emotion peppered in! Kudos my friend.
HC
October 24th, 2017 10:26
HChristian74 said:
Wow! This write does not mince words, it pulls no punches, but it isn\'t overwrought with hyperbole either - it is a perfect blend of social conscience, commentary, observation, and analysis, with just the right amount of emotion peppered in! Kudos my friend.
HC
October 24th, 2017 10:26
I remember when life was normal
marielababy said:
I love it so much , thank you for writing this ! :)
October 23rd, 2017 22:41
marielababy said:
I love it so much , thank you for writing this ! :)
October 23rd, 2017 22:41
Where is she? Is she you?
HChristian74 said:
Very honest and heartfelt. The meter flows so eloquently and it is a pleasure to read words that aren\'t forced, but that flow from the heart, and speak to the soul at the same time. Beautifully written! I look forward to your future works of art.
~HC
October 21st, 2017 15:29
HChristian74 said:
Very honest and heartfelt. The meter flows so eloquently and it is a pleasure to read words that aren\'t forced, but that flow from the heart, and speak to the soul at the same time. Beautifully written! I look forward to your future works of art.
~HC
October 21st, 2017 15:29
Where is she? Is she you?
Christina8 said:
Awesome write! Welcome to MPS. Can\'t wait to read more of your poems!
October 20th, 2017 23:29
Christina8 said:
Awesome write! Welcome to MPS. Can\'t wait to read more of your poems!
October 20th, 2017 23:29
