Comments received on poems by Monah_Peyt

I’m Fine
Goldfinch60 said:

Love can be odd at times but one day the love of your life will appear and all will be well.

November 24th, 2019 01:46

I’m Fine
ron parrish aka wordman said:

touching write,love a strange thing

November 23rd, 2019 15:46

I’m Fine
FredPeyer said:

\'A cup of lies you watched me drink\'
Great choice of words here. I do like the way you write Monah. Writing about falling in and falling out of love is always challenging, but you did it well.

November 23rd, 2019 12:26

FredPeyer said:

Aloha Monah,
am dropping in at MPS once in a while again. Still love your writing, no matter how dark, especially the \'callous phantom\'. Wish I could have come up with something like that myself.
Take care,

September 18th, 2019 20:40

Goldfinch60 said:

Very strong write Monah, that rage is almost palpable in your words.

September 18th, 2019 00:31

Wanton Indulgence
Christina8 said:

Love the cadence and feel to this poem. Very nice!

September 11th, 2019 13:32

Monah_Peyt said:

Thank you all ♥️

August 2nd, 2019 16:42

Christina8 said:

Emotive writing. Very well done. Hope things are better in the future

August 1st, 2019 21:17

Phantom Thought
Ahzissm zara to jer huna said:

This one is my favorite

July 26th, 2019 04:30

Christina8 said:

Excellent job!! Thanks for sharing

July 24th, 2019 14:34

elchupacabra said:


July 24th, 2019 13:03

Fuck You
Goddess of the Mist said:

Haha!! Nice one! What comes around, goes around ~ let karma handle it!

June 2nd, 2019 14:31

Fuck You
sillygirl said:

Wow I really love, and can definitely relate to, this! I\'d love to know the meaning and the inspirations behind this, although I can probably what inspired you!

June 1st, 2019 04:32

Candlewitch said:

it is sad when only one person in a couple is really in love :( the one who perpetrates the false love is a serpent! good work!

*hugs, Cat

January 27th, 2019 15:53

Neville said:

one of my favourite pass times and there ya go and write a delightful little poem about it... cheers, Neville

January 18th, 2019 11:06

All is Past
psychofemale said:

this was wonderfully written.

January 17th, 2019 21:03

Little Ghost
Dan Williams said:

Simple, nice. Good work.

January 15th, 2019 16:13

Little Ghost
psychofemale said:

totally the know the feeling and nice rhyme structure and flow :)

January 14th, 2019 22:16

Asher Cain
Christina8 said:

Love this one! Hope your love likes it too. Great job!

June 23rd, 2018 23:32

Christina8 said:

This is a great rhyming acrostic! Very well done, indeed!

June 21st, 2018 16:57

Lorna said:

Lovely ... and yes, this can happen!

June 4th, 2018 07:42

Ahzissm zara to jer huna said:

I think your words are spun beautifully, this is a great work, it stands with the rest in my opinion. Inspiration can be as much a curse as it is a blessing. Inspiration comes and goes as it pleases, it’s up to you to catch it when it returns, and live in that moment. Or so I’ve experienced....

April 15th, 2018 21:23

Je Me Hais
FredPeyer said:

OK Monah, you may never have been a good wife, may always do the wrong thing, may hate your mind, but.....You are one heck of a good writer!

February 10th, 2018 20:10

Mind at War
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

February 8th, 2018 10:04

Gone and Forgotten
Ahzissm zara to jer huna said:

I think the last stanza is linguistically accomadating to the ear but I hope its not true

January 24th, 2018 21:33

Ahzissm zara to jer huna said:

You are perfect, you\'ve done nothing wrong, you deserve no pain

January 24th, 2018 21:29

Gone and Forgotten
FredPeyer said:

The quote about the smile is dead on! And I really do like your poem. Well written, well rhymed. Don\'t agree too much with the subject though. As far as I am concerned, suicide is not an option! But that is just me!

January 24th, 2018 02:04

yellowrose said:

aaw ... such a moving piece of writing .. full of love but so so sad ..

January 22nd, 2018 06:17

yellowrose said:

sounds dreamy with the reference to the ghost.. nice read

January 22nd, 2018 06:16

yellowrose said:

so painful but so well expressed ... she sounds very trapped

January 22nd, 2018 06:14

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