Comments received on poems by Av
MY LIPS ARE THE WOMBS OF HER BRUISES
FredPeyer said:
Wearing long pants and a long sleeved turtle neck pullover, sweating profusely, she walked down the street in the summer heat, eyes closed, cursing A.V., but remembering every bite with pleasure.
October 31st, 2017 11:59
FredPeyer said:
Wearing long pants and a long sleeved turtle neck pullover, sweating profusely, she walked down the street in the summer heat, eyes closed, cursing A.V., but remembering every bite with pleasure.
October 31st, 2017 11:59
MY LIPS ARE THE WOMBS OF HER BRUISES
Christina8 said:
Oh this is great! \"catalog the travels of my kiss\" A stunning write from you Av!! Something I will remember. I enjoyed reading this one!!
October 30th, 2017 14:28
Christina8 said:
Oh this is great! \"catalog the travels of my kiss\" A stunning write from you Av!! Something I will remember. I enjoyed reading this one!!
October 30th, 2017 14:28
MY LIPS ARE THE WOMBS OF HER BRUISES
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah yes - - I remember it well - covered all over and didnt dare show my Ma - - - great piece of gentle erotica again my friend.
October 30th, 2017 14:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah yes - - I remember it well - covered all over and didnt dare show my Ma - - - great piece of gentle erotica again my friend.
October 30th, 2017 14:09
ON THE FRINGES OF HER FLOWERS
Fay Slimm. said:
Passion extraordinaire in this powerful outline of amazing metaphors - that last line is surely inspired AV
October 26th, 2017 13:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Passion extraordinaire in this powerful outline of amazing metaphors - that last line is surely inspired AV
October 26th, 2017 13:32
ON THE FRINGES OF HER FLOWERS
Simple-Man87 said:
Dang. That was amazing. You have an extraordinary talent. Very very well done.
October 26th, 2017 11:06
Simple-Man87 said:
Dang. That was amazing. You have an extraordinary talent. Very very well done.
October 26th, 2017 11:06
ON THE FRINGES OF HER FLOWERS
myself and me said:
Reading this, require a strong heart and narrow throat, otherwise, the heart will jump out. You shall put a warning sign at the beginning \"not suitable for high-blood pressure individual\". I know my pressure now is out of the meter.
October 26th, 2017 08:02
myself and me said:
Reading this, require a strong heart and narrow throat, otherwise, the heart will jump out. You shall put a warning sign at the beginning \"not suitable for high-blood pressure individual\". I know my pressure now is out of the meter.
October 26th, 2017 08:02
ON THE FRINGES OF HER FLOWERS
FredPeyer said:
I did read the whole thing (twice actually) and my head is spinning!
....sweet pelvic storm... ...like phantoms of your joy....
Where the heck do you get these inspirations???
If this is a biography, you are one heck of a lover! :-)
October 26th, 2017 04:04
FredPeyer said:
I did read the whole thing (twice actually) and my head is spinning!
....sweet pelvic storm... ...like phantoms of your joy....
Where the heck do you get these inspirations???
If this is a biography, you are one heck of a lover! :-)
October 26th, 2017 04:04
AFFLICTION
Simple-Man87 said:
Wow... Wow.. This was amazing. One of my new favorite lines... \".a love that rips off your dress...and forces you to feel all the things you repress.\"
This was incredible. Thank you for sharing.
October 25th, 2017 13:35
Simple-Man87 said:
Wow... Wow.. This was amazing. One of my new favorite lines... \".a love that rips off your dress...and forces you to feel all the things you repress.\"
This was incredible. Thank you for sharing.
October 25th, 2017 13:35
AFFLICTION
Heather T said:
Yay, I found you!!! I should have known to just follow the heat. And what a slick treat you\'ve left for us to slip in, you fever-tongued devil. Whatever has happened, you know your Sis has your back.
October 25th, 2017 12:12
Heather T said:
Yay, I found you!!! I should have known to just follow the heat. And what a slick treat you\'ve left for us to slip in, you fever-tongued devil. Whatever has happened, you know your Sis has your back.
October 25th, 2017 12:12
AFFLICTION
myself and me said:
Holly hot chili. You are the king of this. poem in red and black, as hot as always.
October 25th, 2017 11:16
myself and me said:
Holly hot chili. You are the king of this. poem in red and black, as hot as always.
October 25th, 2017 11:16
AFFLICTION
Christina8 said:
Great write A.V.! Good to see you writing again! Back with hot and sexy erotica! Loved this piece!
October 25th, 2017 06:32
Christina8 said:
Great write A.V.! Good to see you writing again! Back with hot and sexy erotica! Loved this piece!
October 25th, 2017 06:32
AFFLICTION
Fay Slimm. said:
The power in this piece of erotica sends shivers to each sentence - - love the tenderness in that final line - \'good to see you posting again AV
October 25th, 2017 05:32
Fay Slimm. said:
The power in this piece of erotica sends shivers to each sentence - - love the tenderness in that final line - \'good to see you posting again AV
October 25th, 2017 05:32
AFFLICTION
FredPeyer said:
Ahh, to be twenty-five again!
Really like the whole poem, but love that last line, A.V.
October 25th, 2017 00:22
FredPeyer said:
Ahh, to be twenty-five again!
Really like the whole poem, but love that last line, A.V.
October 25th, 2017 00:22
