Comments received on poems by Daniel.M



My Girl
Tris Eaton said:

Awe this is so cute

November 1st, 2017 11:20

My Girl
Theta the scholar said:

Corny but good


November 1st, 2017 11:17

My true fear
FredPeyer said:

You write well about a problem many people have: the fear of rejection. But the simple fact that you are posting your writing here on MPS shows me that you are trying to overcome this fear.
Well written, keep on writing!

October 31st, 2017 22:28

Dove.
SorrowfullyHappy said:

you should send her this poem
oh and you misspelled one in lin 2...
fix that before you send it to her

October 30th, 2017 13:11

Dove.
Theta the scholar said:

But i least your starting to make your own poems now (^-^)

October 30th, 2017 11:17

Dove.
Theta the scholar said:

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww nice one danny i just might give the link to her mwahahahaha


October 30th, 2017 11:15

Her.
Daniel.M said:

credit: Theta the scholar.

October 28th, 2017 22:23