Comments received on poems by Chocolate_daisies
Letting Him Go
FredPeyer said:
Another well written poem, c-d! Good rhyming, good flow.
As for the subject, yes good-byes are always hard, but eventually there will be somebody else. Remember the old saying: One door closes, another one opens up.
(I know, I know, it\'s easy to say!!!)
You gotta believe in yourself first, then all kinds of things will happen. One last thing to think about: An end with pain is better than pain with no end!
November 29th, 2017 18:50
FredPeyer said:
Another well written poem, c-d! Good rhyming, good flow.
As for the subject, yes good-byes are always hard, but eventually there will be somebody else. Remember the old saying: One door closes, another one opens up.
(I know, I know, it\'s easy to say!!!)
You gotta believe in yourself first, then all kinds of things will happen. One last thing to think about: An end with pain is better than pain with no end!
November 29th, 2017 18:50
Dear Father
FredPeyer said:
Incredibly well written, c-d. It hurts seeing a loved one, especially a father, being \'taken away\' by \'something bad\' as you say. But we have to keep on loving, even if it hurts!
November 29th, 2017 18:46
FredPeyer said:
Incredibly well written, c-d. It hurts seeing a loved one, especially a father, being \'taken away\' by \'something bad\' as you say. But we have to keep on loving, even if it hurts!
November 29th, 2017 18:46
