Comments received on poems by .M.



the reason
Masking said:

Clever, And well written. Easy to understand as well. Good job

July 29th, 2018 08:18

[sorry]
Masking said:

it seems as though you need perspective. The idea of the poem is good, But it\'s got bad flow. If you improve those it won\'t be half bad ^_^

July 29th, 2018 08:17

the cycle
Masking said:

I have 1 complaint, the flow. It seems to abruptly stop commonly in the poem, though the Idea for it is well founded.

July 29th, 2018 04:17

the reason
Arianna Smith said:

Relatable. Great read!

May 7th, 2018 19:39

the reason
Kat18 said:

i get you. i feel im the reason to sometimes.

May 7th, 2018 17:31

[im alright]
Masking said:

I see a life, by yourself no life at all. But always remember there are always \"The Fault In Our Stars\"

November 30th, 2017 20:03