My Heavy Cup.
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Love it! Great use of repetition, internal rhyme, and alliteration. Admirable too that we see four, full (four line) stanzas. I personally pick up some biblical pings (Matthew 20:22 and Psalm 16:5); whether you intended this or simply surrendered to your internal muse (often led by Divine Providence) we don’t really know.

December 10th, 2017 20:15