Comments received on poems by LittleGift

Can I Be Brave?
Maxine Smith said:

Your doing amazing hun, your writing is so beautiful, you don’t have to question your courage, YOU ARE BRAVE.
Your a strong mum, one of the hardest jobs in the world, your strength lies within, your beautiful boy knows it!
Powerful poem hun, hope your alright. I haven’t been on in a while.

June 17th, 2019 15:29

Can I Be Brave?
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Wowww this is so special, such an eloquent poetic masterpiece, tinged with soulful feel yet with hope in positive things and sunshine and the sea to inspire. Kudos for this awesome poem.

Plz pls do comment my newest poem too.

May 4th, 2019 15:02

Can I Be Brave?
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Hold On LG
Your worth is bigger than you feel
Love this

April 30th, 2019 05:03

I don\'t want to play today
Neville said:

The pain and sense of loss is very real.. one can feel it , in almost every word.... a tear stained page for sure.... Neville

April 7th, 2019 06:09

To Live
Neville said:

Good Morning my friend.. this is a lovely poem you have written here and one in which you have mentioned so many things I think most folk dream of and value.... It reminds me tho that obtaining or achieving many of them takes a lot of effort and determination... Bless you LG........... Neville

April 4th, 2019 02:24

Can I Be Brave?
Poetic Dan said:

Yet muster you did with music so beautiful to fit! There is no doubt you\'re going to surf right over this! You may be little but still a gift ;)
Much peace and respect
For sharing this!

March 30th, 2019 04:35

Never Forgotten (I promised and have kept it)
Suresh said:

As she left, she gathered all her belongings, except one, she left you a memory for eternity.

March 28th, 2019 16:16

Life’s Own Vine
Suresh said:

Such intense depth, and what a journey

March 28th, 2019 16:11

Final Breath
Suresh said:

Wait, before you go thru the saintly door
And the last gasp you exhale
Make sure there isn\'t something left to explore
If so, no rush, go ahead, a fresh breath, inhale

March 28th, 2019 16:05

Final Breath
Neville said:

Nicely poemed my friend very nicely poemed indeed... N

March 28th, 2019 14:10

Can I Be Brave?
Suresh said:

The fact that you realize the many facets, says that your have the will and your strength can overcome any adversity.

March 26th, 2019 15:13

Life’s Own Vine
Neville said:

You were darn good even then methinks... N x

March 25th, 2019 14:28

Can I Be Brave?
sylviasearcher said:

Oh I could feel the tug of the ocean reaching out from the waves, like a heavy drag on the soul, reminding me of a feeling I know so well.

Spring is a funny time, the light makes us think we should feel better But the heavy weight in our souls tells us we can’t. Such a juxtaposition can cause the heaviness to become all the more mighty.

Yet in your write I feel such power and strength against the crashing waves. Such a belief in the light. Only it is inside you.

Beautiful poignant emotive piece.


March 25th, 2019 02:44

Can I Be Brave?
Nicholas Browning said:

Sometimes we have to ask ourselves not of our value, but of our value to certain people. Friendship, family, love, all of these pertain to it. It\'s not easy, and anyone that says it is, is a liar. \"Or a cheat, but I wouldn\'t know\".
Maybe your former self is what\'s holding you back. Maybe the only way forward is a new train of thought. Only my opinions though, do don\'t mind them too much!
Best regards!

March 24th, 2019 20:39

Can I Be Brave?
Michael Edwards said:

Well you sure mustered well - keep mustering LG.

March 24th, 2019 16:23

Can I Be Brave?


March 24th, 2019 15:21

Can I Be Brave?
Angela1711 said:

I really enjoyed reading this. If this is this what you muster up give me more. The waves will always be endless and forever crashing in but you have great strength appreciate each breath you take, let the light in. Much love

March 24th, 2019 15:06

Can I Be Brave?
Neville said:

There is not only beauty here, there is also a subtle strength and despite everything, a sense of hope that is louder than any of those quieter whispered doubts... the very fact you crafted such a clear and fine poem is encouraging... If you were to scream these words down into a canyon.. the echo would come back to you screaming... Yes, of course you can my friend..... Neville

March 24th, 2019 13:06

Can I Be Brave?
Fay Slimm said:

This write is amazing and if you mustered it under duress it shows how much talent you have for poetic writing dear L.G. - - some wonderful imagery in places too many for me to have favourites - keep remembering self worth my friend and hope my posting today made sense to you too. x Fay

March 24th, 2019 12:18

Can I Be Brave?
orchidee said:

Ah! I get an error message on the video. I suppose we can go along with the waves and sands at times, but there\'s going against the tide too. We don\'t have to be rebels doing this, but individuals, unique. This is how I see the end lines of this poem.

March 24th, 2019 11:19

The Star That Chose to Fall (picture drawn also by me)
Suresh said:

Those who love us, guide us, are our safety wheels on the bicycle, knowing one day we will be without those wheels, but forever live in our memories

March 23rd, 2019 12:05

Becoming an Angel (dedicated to my best friend)
Neville said:

What an incredibly poignant poem you have penned and posted here in this near perfect dedication to your much loved and presumably still much missed friend .... these words have now become a lasting tribute to both your love and tragic loss... Neville x

March 23rd, 2019 10:59

A Love Fated
Neville said:

this is in fact quite lovely and...... get this, the very first time I ever encountered named padlocks fastened to a bridge was in Bulgaria.. those same locks were still there when I passed by as near today as yesterday....... Neville

March 21st, 2019 15:27

The Billowing Winds
Suresh said:

It dies with a whimper, but comes with a flurry
If it happens indoors, sends all scurry (ing)
Enjoyed it

March 21st, 2019 11:17

The Billowing Winds
Maxine Smith said:

Perfectly fits with the weather we have been experiencing lately.
I one hundred percent agree with Nicholas, love how you have personified forces of nature. Really cleverly written.

March 20th, 2019 13:21

The Billowing Winds
G84 said:

Awesome write, I always loved the wind you can’t see it but you can see the effect it has on everything it touches... an invisible power - the best kind!

March 17th, 2019 12:05

The Billowing Winds
Joe Dawson said:

Just been listening to Gale Storm singing Dark Moon. Spot on with \'The Billowing Winds\'. Struggling right now to keep 20 young cherry laurels (just planted) in the ground against a bevy of storms rolling in off the Atlantic. Sometimes I could do with less wind in winter. Very good write. Joe

March 15th, 2019 10:14

The Billowing Winds
Goldfinch60 said:

This is a great write LG, it flows beautifully.

March 14th, 2019 01:08

The Billowing Winds
Diamond said:

Some wind simply wipes off one\'s trace -True!

Nice imagery!

March 13th, 2019 12:26

The Billowing Winds
orchidee said:

I\'ve worked it out! They must go A to Z. We had Evie or Eva(?), then Freya, now Gareth. Bets on next one: H...……?

March 13th, 2019 10:44

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