Comments received on poems by rrivera138
Slab of Meat, Woman of My Dreams
sylviasearcher said:
The fathomless vastness...
Those words together cause a familiar ache in my head.
May 11th, 2018 00:50
sylviasearcher said:
The fathomless vastness...
Those words together cause a familiar ache in my head.
May 11th, 2018 00:50
Where God is Absent
sylviasearcher said:
I sometines wonder how it ended up like this
April 25th, 2018 02:08
sylviasearcher said:
I sometines wonder how it ended up like this
April 25th, 2018 02:08
Tanqueray\'s
Eugene S. said:
That is awesome! You definetly know how to weave the words!
April 3rd, 2018 07:05
Eugene S. said:
That is awesome! You definetly know how to weave the words!
April 3rd, 2018 07:05
Tanqueray\'s
Lorna said:
Wow - so many wonderful lines here.... loved the last stanza especially and: The night snuffed out the darkness,
the morning a lingering
scent of fresh nostalgia.
April 3rd, 2018 07:05
Lorna said:
Wow - so many wonderful lines here.... loved the last stanza especially and: The night snuffed out the darkness,
the morning a lingering
scent of fresh nostalgia.
April 3rd, 2018 07:05
Landlubber
TrystanBehm said:
I don\'t pretend to know the specific pretext of the emotion behind this great write - but it conjured up some very specific emotions in me. The way you play with and blend the blatant and allegorical is awesome - thank you very much for sharing. Really like this one!
February 7th, 2018 11:12
TrystanBehm said:
I don\'t pretend to know the specific pretext of the emotion behind this great write - but it conjured up some very specific emotions in me. The way you play with and blend the blatant and allegorical is awesome - thank you very much for sharing. Really like this one!
February 7th, 2018 11:12
Gravity
TrystanBehm said:
I really like this. The first two lines could stand all on their own. You are able to invoke a tremendous amount of thought and reflection in five lines. Great write!
February 7th, 2018 11:08
TrystanBehm said:
I really like this. The first two lines could stand all on their own. You are able to invoke a tremendous amount of thought and reflection in five lines. Great write!
February 7th, 2018 11:08