Comments received on poems by rrivera138



Slab of Meat, Woman of My Dreams
sylviasearcher said:

The fathomless vastness...

Those words together cause a familiar ache in my head.

May 11th, 2018 00:50

Beating Around the (Love) Bush
onepauly said:

shows you got class.

April 28th, 2018 21:20

Where God is Absent
sylviasearcher said:

I sometines wonder how it ended up like this

April 25th, 2018 02:08

Tanqueray\'s
Eugene S. said:

That is awesome! You definetly know how to weave the words!

April 3rd, 2018 07:05

Tanqueray\'s
Lorna said:

Wow - so many wonderful lines here.... loved the last stanza especially and: The night snuffed out the darkness,
the morning a lingering
scent of fresh nostalgia.

April 3rd, 2018 07:05

Landlubber
TrystanBehm said:

I don\'t pretend to know the specific pretext of the emotion behind this great write - but it conjured up some very specific emotions in me. The way you play with and blend the blatant and allegorical is awesome - thank you very much for sharing. Really like this one!

February 7th, 2018 11:12

Gravity
TrystanBehm said:

I really like this. The first two lines could stand all on their own. You are able to invoke a tremendous amount of thought and reflection in five lines. Great write!

February 7th, 2018 11:08

Landlubber
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 7th, 2018 09:47

Landlubber
Lorna said:

She\'s gotcha! Good one..........

February 7th, 2018 07:06

Strong and Bitter
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 5th, 2018 10:26