Comments received on poems by Amerigo
Nameless
Amerigo said:
Ha ha. This is later. The original has no structure at all.
http://www.asexuality.org/en/topic/166871-untitled-poem-maybe-has-potential-to-be-one/
February 2nd, 2018 08:52
Amerigo said:
Ha ha. This is later. The original has no structure at all.
http://www.asexuality.org/en/topic/166871-untitled-poem-maybe-has-potential-to-be-one/
February 2nd, 2018 08:52
Nameless
Lorna said:
Then you are more disciplined than me! I just \"head out\" and smooth it over later! ha ha............
February 2nd, 2018 08:48
Lorna said:
Then you are more disciplined than me! I just \"head out\" and smooth it over later! ha ha............
February 2nd, 2018 08:48
Nameless
Amerigo said:
I tried to maintain a meter of 8 syllables per line, counting internal commas as syllables.
February 2nd, 2018 08:46
Amerigo said:
I tried to maintain a meter of 8 syllables per line, counting internal commas as syllables.
February 2nd, 2018 08:46
Nameless
Lorna said:
Nothing really except maybe a slight change in cadence once in a while - when you read to yourself, let it flow like a song and if you \"hiccup\" at some point, just smooth out the words (or sometimes eliminate one). Does that make sense or help? This hardly had a hiccup.
February 2nd, 2018 08:43
Lorna said:
Nothing really except maybe a slight change in cadence once in a while - when you read to yourself, let it flow like a song and if you \"hiccup\" at some point, just smooth out the words (or sometimes eliminate one). Does that make sense or help? This hardly had a hiccup.
February 2nd, 2018 08:43
