Comments received on poems by LAWLIET
form of light
Poetic Dan said:
A fable be the truth!
So brilliantly said I felt every word
Thank you
May 15th, 2019 08:07
Poetic Dan said:
A fable be the truth!
So brilliantly said I felt every word
Thank you
May 15th, 2019 08:07
we do on our own
Jhe said:
its sad that,
despite being able to use language, art and computers to communicate with eachother,
many people still don\'t hear or see those around them ~
they have their agendas and they think thats enough...
for those of us who think different,
loneliness is tough
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nice write
May 9th, 2019 11:44
Jhe said:
its sad that,
despite being able to use language, art and computers to communicate with eachother,
many people still don\'t hear or see those around them ~
they have their agendas and they think thats enough...
for those of us who think different,
loneliness is tough
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nice write
May 9th, 2019 11:44
Embrace
Suresh said:
\"With information lies seem to sway\"
No truer statement ever made
With every bit and byte of information
We find ourselves more confused and dazed
Keep expressing your ways
April 16th, 2019 12:29
Suresh said:
\"With information lies seem to sway\"
No truer statement ever made
With every bit and byte of information
We find ourselves more confused and dazed
Keep expressing your ways
April 16th, 2019 12:29
But Really
Jhe said:
great flow and rhymes
you\'ve penned
another fave of mine :-)
June 2nd, 2018 21:39
Jhe said:
great flow and rhymes
you\'ve penned
another fave of mine :-)
June 2nd, 2018 21:39
Dreams are real
Jhe said:
think ending is saying the one you love already makes you feel blessed, so even if they not lovin you back its ok coz feels real
which is nice feelin
(for you anyway)
or hav i got that bit wrong?
May 10th, 2018 15:43
Jhe said:
think ending is saying the one you love already makes you feel blessed, so even if they not lovin you back its ok coz feels real
which is nice feelin
(for you anyway)
or hav i got that bit wrong?
May 10th, 2018 15:43
The spark between us
Jhe said:
We can never be destroyed only become something new
perfection
love it
May 10th, 2018 15:27
Jhe said:
We can never be destroyed only become something new
perfection
love it
May 10th, 2018 15:27
Stuck in Place
Jhe said:
like mood and pace of whole poem but especially like:
your on my mind like we\'re surfing brain waves (excellent!)
&
let our love fly but never depart
(beautiful)
keep at it!
May 10th, 2018 15:23
Jhe said:
like mood and pace of whole poem but especially like:
your on my mind like we\'re surfing brain waves (excellent!)
&
let our love fly but never depart
(beautiful)
keep at it!
May 10th, 2018 15:23
Trash
Jhe said:
really like the \"who ever gave it to me didn\'t say with what it came attached\" part ~ i kno that feelin!
\"please get your trash\" is clever too, altho i\'d hate to imagine what a lack of feeling would do to your spirit...
and your poetry!
do keep it flowin!
May 10th, 2018 15:01
Jhe said:
really like the \"who ever gave it to me didn\'t say with what it came attached\" part ~ i kno that feelin!
\"please get your trash\" is clever too, altho i\'d hate to imagine what a lack of feeling would do to your spirit...
and your poetry!
do keep it flowin!
May 10th, 2018 15:01
Cloud 10
orchidee said:
Ahh how many people are there on cloud 9? How many people can it hold?!
March 14th, 2018 10:05
orchidee said:
Ahh how many people are there on cloud 9? How many people can it hold?!
March 14th, 2018 10:05
Smile where people frown
marlenawood said:
I really enjoyed this ❤️Love is what we all need now
March 13th, 2018 08:30
marlenawood said:
I really enjoyed this ❤️Love is what we all need now
March 13th, 2018 08:30
A Date With Pain
Caring dove said:
this seems like a deep piece of writing , full of immense pain .. very well expressed
February 18th, 2018 12:17
Caring dove said:
this seems like a deep piece of writing , full of immense pain .. very well expressed
February 18th, 2018 12:17
