Comments received on poems by LAWLIET

form of light
Poetic Dan said:

A fable be the truth!
So brilliantly said I felt every word
Thank you

May 15th, 2019 08:07

we do on our own
Jhe said:

its sad that,
despite being able to use language, art and computers to communicate with eachother,
many people still don\'t hear or see those around them ~
they have their agendas and they think thats enough...

for those of us who think different,
loneliness is tough
★ ☆ ★
nice write

May 9th, 2019 11:44

Suresh said:

\"With information lies seem to sway\"
No truer statement ever made

With every bit and byte of information
We find ourselves more confused and dazed

Keep expressing your ways

April 16th, 2019 12:29

But Really
Jhe said:

great flow and rhymes
you\'ve penned
another fave of mine :-)

June 2nd, 2018 21:39

You know not what\'s good
ForeverJesus6 said:

That is righteous.

May 30th, 2018 23:13

Twist and turns
Jhe said:


May 10th, 2018 15:44

Dreams are real
Jhe said:

think ending is saying the one you love already makes you feel blessed, so even if they not lovin you back its ok coz feels real
which is nice feelin
(for you anyway)
or hav i got that bit wrong?

May 10th, 2018 15:43

The love in the world
Jhe said:

a little love sure goes a long way

May 10th, 2018 15:32

The spark between us
Jhe said:

We can never be destroyed only become something new

love it

May 10th, 2018 15:27

Stuck in Place
Jhe said:

like mood and pace of whole poem but especially like:
your on my mind like we\'re surfing brain waves (excellent!)
let our love fly but never depart

keep at it!

May 10th, 2018 15:23

Jhe said:

really like the \"who ever gave it to me didn\'t say with what it came attached\" part ~ i kno that feelin!

\"please get your trash\" is clever too, altho i\'d hate to imagine what a lack of feeling would do to your spirit...
and your poetry!

do keep it flowin!

May 10th, 2018 15:01

We dare not
Maxine Smith said:

Great read.

April 29th, 2018 17:18

We dare not
onepauly said:

the true meaning of love.
is sacrifice.

April 29th, 2018 16:53

The love in the world
Angel Of Incidence said:

Enjoyed! TY!

April 18th, 2018 08:32

The love in the world
Maxine Smith said:


April 17th, 2018 15:06

The love in the world
sharda92 said:


April 17th, 2018 14:24

Cloud 10
orchidee said:

Ahh how many people are there on cloud 9? How many people can it hold?!

March 14th, 2018 10:05

Cloud 10

Um thanks lol

March 14th, 2018 06:30

Cloud 10
Nicholas Browning said:


March 14th, 2018 06:27

Smile where people frown
marlenawood said:

I really enjoyed this ❤️Love is what we all need now

March 13th, 2018 08:30

When it pass
Ivory said:

This is a very lovely piece.. Thanks for sharing.

March 10th, 2018 18:39

A Date With Pain
yellowrose said:

this seems like a deep piece of writing , full of immense pain .. very well expressed

February 18th, 2018 12:17