Comments received on poems by Step-hen



Spyglass
sylviasearcher said:

I hear lots of folk are born with this spy glass affliction... It\'s called I\'ll see it when I believe it....

Silly folk who don\'t see
What they think shapes
What they see!
And what they see
Is what we will be
To them at least.
But what about to me?

Damn those spy glasses!
I want to be free!

If I hide in a Forest
Where no one can see
Released from their thinking
I can be me






April 6th, 2018 04:45

Siren Memory
Lorna said:

Wonderful mix of nostalgia, salty sea air and wisdom...... There\'s no THERE on the horizon is brilliant...... love it.

April 4th, 2018 05:56

Spyglass
Lorna said:

Just found this Stephen...... am loving its composition and wisdom ....

April 4th, 2018 05:55

Spyglass
kitcat said:

I really enjoyed your poem, It was a really good read, so true in a lot of ways Well done you wrote it well

April 3rd, 2018 14:45