Comments received on poems by scattered_flashes
Troubled Waters
David De La Cruz said:
Nice words and your story is well told.... great write
July 4th, 2018 07:43
David De La Cruz said:
Nice words and your story is well told.... great write
July 4th, 2018 07:43
Troubled Waters
sylviasearcher said:
Hey, I recognise the forlorn feeling evoked in your poem.
I still sometime trick myself into thinking I\'ll find peace in connection with others.
That drive for belonging, connecting, being is so strong.
Everyday I try to look a little more within.
If I cannot be at peace with myself what I am offering to others will never be real.
Hope some light is sleeping in. It is a beautiful day!
July 4th, 2018 01:11
sylviasearcher said:
Hey, I recognise the forlorn feeling evoked in your poem.
I still sometime trick myself into thinking I\'ll find peace in connection with others.
That drive for belonging, connecting, being is so strong.
Everyday I try to look a little more within.
If I cannot be at peace with myself what I am offering to others will never be real.
Hope some light is sleeping in. It is a beautiful day!
July 4th, 2018 01:11
Being Us on my own
sylviasearcher said:
Your name is a prisoner in my mouth, lest I cry out for you?
Sounds like you did?
I like it, but it\'s sad. Somehow sad us always more relatable.
May 8th, 2018 02:05
sylviasearcher said:
Your name is a prisoner in my mouth, lest I cry out for you?
Sounds like you did?
I like it, but it\'s sad. Somehow sad us always more relatable.
May 8th, 2018 02:05
