Comments received on poems by paco
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Poetic Dan said:
A powerful first write!
I know a few that took this path
Forever engraved apon my heart
I too made my attempts that never leaves
Gladly I fail and still pulling through.
Thank you for your creation
Look forward to seeing more
May 25th, 2018 02:07
Poetic Dan said:
A powerful first write!
I know a few that took this path
Forever engraved apon my heart
I too made my attempts that never leaves
Gladly I fail and still pulling through.
Thank you for your creation
Look forward to seeing more
May 25th, 2018 02:07
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Buzz Bray said:
Wow. Powerful! I can hear someone reciting this with a band behind him. Lots of mechanical errors, but very serious powerful frightening stuff.
May 25th, 2018 00:35
Buzz Bray said:
Wow. Powerful! I can hear someone reciting this with a band behind him. Lots of mechanical errors, but very serious powerful frightening stuff.
May 25th, 2018 00:35
