Comments received on poems by Unsub



Decay
Goldfinch60 said:

That early grave may well be there but as the earth covers you you could look up and see the blink of light looking down on you showing that there will be life ahead of you.

I don\'t have a fake god any more!

Andy

April 3rd, 2020 00:59

Decay
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

An interesting riposte UNSUB ~ but I try to teach my Students the scientific facts as I (and many others) see it. Prior to the Industrial Revolution the level of CO2 was fairly constant @ 250 ppm. The euqilibrium between the production & absorption of CO2 produced an ambient Global Temperature of about 15C. The rise in CO2 from 250 ppm to 418 pm (67%) is due to human activity such as deforestation and burning fossil fuels. This is NOT a natural increase ! Because CO2 is a greenhouse gas it has caused the ambient temperature to exceed 16C and rising with dire consequences. That is the accepted Scientific explanation for Global Warming and why Man has the technological capacity (and Responsibility ?) to reverse it !

Yours ~ BRIAN

April 2nd, 2020 18:51

Decay
MendedFences27 said:

The only certainty in life is death. Every star dies. Every planet dies also.
All things decay. Eventually there will be nothing but a black hole.
In the meantime, enjoy life. Live it to its fullest. Love, laugh, and be happy.
They say,
\"Wine, women and song will be the ruination of Man.\"
So, I gave up singing.
Your poem encapsulates all the greatest fears of mankind. The never ending march to the cliff of non-existence. Try not to depress, try a smile, a laugh, a love, and of course Hope. - Phil A.

April 2nd, 2020 16:37

Decay
orchidee said:

Yes, decaying, yet \'green\' groups, etc, do what they can to save the planet.

April 2nd, 2020 11:31

Decay
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thnaks UNSUB for another CHALLENGING POEM ! In our comments on Global Warming etc ~ The point we are trying to make is the fact that although MANKIND (7.8 billion & rising) is a minute minority in the Biosphere ~ HIS effect is well in excess of HIS NUMBERS. Just as ONE MAN (Adolf Hitler) could make a mess of EUROPE in just 12 Years (1933 - 45). Our theme is that Technological Man has opted out of the Natural World and its Equilibrium restoring Cycles. The main thing he has done is disturbed the Carbon Cycle by Deforestation & increased output of CO2 by the use of Fossil Fuels for Transport & Mechanisation & Electricity etc. Thereby hastening his own end ! Man made Global Warming is responsible for High Tides & Coastal Erosion (V 6) and Hurricanes (V 7) and we could stop Global Warming if we chose to ! One positive outcome of COVID 19 is that due to LOCKDOWN CO2 production in China has dropped by 25% & NO2 by 37% and Atmospheric CO2 has reduced globally ! BUT it is a big price to pay ! Thanks for sharing & scaring !

Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙

April 2nd, 2020 11:27

Calamity
Sanjana Varma said:

I am in love with this piece. There is anguish and murkiness. Just great!

April 2nd, 2020 11:18

Decay
The Uneducated O.A.P said:

For some time will never restart
Leaving behind only broken hearts
Did God exist back in time
Or is he only alive in some people\'s minds.
Great words Unsub, thought you were working? Bill

April 2nd, 2020 10:14

Decay
Poetic Dan said:

Tingles Down my spine, this had a beautiful bassline.. I\'m out and still doing my job, I avoided people long before this kicked off, never go to the shop unnecessarily. Me and merry Jane are in hills with a looking glass at world of insane, nothing new!

Absolutely needed all of this!

April 2nd, 2020 09:40

Decay
dusk arising said:

Never stop playing i say. Never stop laughing at yourself.
So much truth in your words today though uncomfortable for many a reader. Good to see both the ying and the yang here though.

April 2nd, 2020 09:33

Decay
Joe Dawson said:

The arrow of time, pointing inexorably towards the future. Space-time, clock time, pastimes. so many times - so little time and always the same destination – decay. A super read and a timely reminder. Joe

April 2nd, 2020 08:18

Decay
Dove said:

Nicely written song of gloom and doom
Liked it a lot!

Let not time steal our youth away
Lets go outside and play
The earth will erode, move and sway
So go let’s go out and reshape its clay





April 2nd, 2020 08:03

Excitement
Goldfinch60 said:

Wow Unsub, what a brilliant poem full of light and love.

I cannot find a dark thought in it so even I cannot bring more light to it.

Keep Well

Andy

April 1st, 2020 01:37

Excitement
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Thanks UNSUB - For a very Romantic Poem with an elegant rhythm ! Lovely to recite - one of the hallmarks of an excellent Poem ! Love the photo - good complement.

Love - Joy & Peace
Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙

March 31st, 2020 17:17

Excitement
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

An okay poem Dan. Good to see you writing like this. Well done.

Ex animo, Alan

March 31st, 2020 14:05

Excitement
orchidee said:

A fine write Unsub.
Aww, why you not want to know when the cat\'s moving in?! It\'s got it\'s bags packed ready to move in. heehee.

March 31st, 2020 11:00

Excitement
Dove said:

These are the type of poems I love! Excellent work! It’s nice to see the tender
Side of you flow! Definitely my favorite poem on here so far!

Thanks for sharing

March 31st, 2020 10:31

Excitement
Laura said:

Unsub,

Super!
This is truly to my liking. The only request I have is that the next time you use one of my photos, please ask me if it’s ok. I’ll let it go this time because it does complement your lyrics exquisitely!
Now I have a second request. Please record the lyrics and send me a copy of it.

Stay safe & be well.

As always...

~Laura~🌻

March 31st, 2020 10:02

Excitement
LAWLESS said:

Excellent love poem! Too bad you have that picture of someone else with your lady. I don’t blame her, you’re one ugly dude!

Stay safe, I don’t have the money to go to your funeral just yet.




March 31st, 2020 09:39

Excitement
The Uneducated O.A.P said:

Together we are Light and sound, are you now known as the disco duo? Great words Unsub, like this, stay safe, Bill, ref your heading in red you forgot to end it with AMEN, OK.

March 31st, 2020 08:31

CyberPunk
Santita said:

What an atmosphere you\'ve created. Thick with the punk-club vibe, vivid and engrossing scene. Great cadence.
I truly enjoyed reading a unique theme like this. Refreshing!

March 23rd, 2020 09:42

Glass I & II
Dove said:

glass is see through, so you never
Know when you’re walking into it
Life is stressful at points ! Anyhow
Great description of daily chaos

I only break glass when doing the
Dishes !

March 22nd, 2020 05:36

Glass I & II
Goldfinch60 said:

Glass 1:
The pace of life creating havoc within us but there are some whose pace can be slower and will look upon the others with disdain.

Glass 11:
One day that strobe light will come to a halt and the light will shine on us in harmony. (Is this a song on you new album or is it an old one from 2010 as it says on your copyright line)

Andy

March 22nd, 2020 02:11

Glass I & II
anonymousblue said:

This tense, anxiously flowing poem depicts with plenty of eloquent imagery the madness and futility of modern life. Well done.

March 21st, 2020 11:48

CyberPunk
LAWLESS said:

Even though the thought of you having a tryst with a cool punk chick makes me want to hurl, I do believe this one would be a fucking kick-ass song.

March 20th, 2020 15:20

CyberPunk
tundrol said:

Strong rhythms and imagery, but personally, I would vary the tone. But that\'s just me, of course. Blue is more blue against orange and so on.

March 20th, 2020 10:55

CyberPunk
The Uneducated O.A.P said:

Nice one Unsub, got to the second verse and had to go for a lie down, ime at a funny age you know! , Bill

March 20th, 2020 07:17

CyberPunk
Dove said:

Intense and provocative,
Woman after my own heart, of course
I’m too shy for such encounters!

Great Write!!!!

March 19th, 2020 21:01

CyberPunk
Saxon Crow said:

Good write my friend. Maaaaan i was into that scene as well. Memories are a stirring!

March 19th, 2020 13:22

CyberPunk
Laura said:

Unsub,

Wow! Vivid and engaging !
Strangely enough, I really liked this one very much! My imagination took me places where perhaps I shouldn’t go! These lyrics truly captivated my attention.


Some of my favorites phrases that enhanced the reading of your lyrics...

‘seductive lips’
‘her vampire style eyes’
‘The bass pounds & increases our tight caress’

She’s like a drug.

‘I need to have her, I know I shouldn’t, but I must’

Once she’s done, she moves on to her next victim.

‘High tech, low life’

Now just imagine...
HIGH LIFE, LOW TECH

~Laura~🌻

March 19th, 2020 12:41

CyberPunk
orchidee said:

Oohh, should I meet her too? Will it be too much for me?! lol.

March 19th, 2020 11:12

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