Comments received on poems by Thoughts-before-dawn
Blue Fire Fly
sylviasearcher said:
I wondered about the idea of a fire fly in particular. That it\'s light makes it more likely to be noticed in the dark.
I wondered if the poem condemned, pitied or felt sadness for the fire fly?
I wondered about the other kinds of flies? The blue bottles most. I wondered whether they were like the people who did not care at all.
I wondered which is worse to care too much or not at all?
I wondered if we demonise flies?
Their sensory systems are very different and perhaps we cannot know what kind of place the world is.
And I got lost wondering so I stopped and wrote \'thought provoking\' and went back to some work.
June 25th, 2018 06:05
sylviasearcher said:
I wondered about the idea of a fire fly in particular. That it\'s light makes it more likely to be noticed in the dark.
I wondered if the poem condemned, pitied or felt sadness for the fire fly?
I wondered about the other kinds of flies? The blue bottles most. I wondered whether they were like the people who did not care at all.
I wondered which is worse to care too much or not at all?
I wondered if we demonise flies?
Their sensory systems are very different and perhaps we cannot know what kind of place the world is.
And I got lost wondering so I stopped and wrote \'thought provoking\' and went back to some work.
June 25th, 2018 06:05