Comments received on poems by An Abstract View of Life
Searching
dusk arising said:
You long for love and you ain\'t dead yet. Are you near death? I hope not.
So git fella. Get off yer ass and go seek what you long for because:- \"it ain\'t in the saying - it\'s in the doing\".
Nicely written stuff.
June 11th, 2019 16:28
dusk arising said:
You long for love and you ain\'t dead yet. Are you near death? I hope not.
So git fella. Get off yer ass and go seek what you long for because:- \"it ain\'t in the saying - it\'s in the doing\".
Nicely written stuff.
June 11th, 2019 16:28
Campfire
dusk arising said:
I really enjoyed your clever analogy with flames/fire and your passion in this piece.
Looks like you are left with burning embers.... will the flames arise again?
Worry not.... tis the season of wildfires!
Please comment on something of mine.
August 22nd, 2018 03:29
dusk arising said:
I really enjoyed your clever analogy with flames/fire and your passion in this piece.
Looks like you are left with burning embers.... will the flames arise again?
Worry not.... tis the season of wildfires!
Please comment on something of mine.
August 22nd, 2018 03:29
