Comments received on poems by colly wally



How Thankful
bernard franklin said:

WOW!!!!! Absolutely brilliant, easily the best poem I have read on this site, and now one of my favourites! Nice work poet! BF

September 8th, 2010 01:19

A Stranger
bernard franklin said:

Very nice Colly, Tender poignancy and beautifully written. BF

September 7th, 2010 06:18

The Smile that lifts me up
bernard franklin said:

Very , very good excellent rhyme and rhythm, the poem flows beautifully and is well metered. I'm keeping this as one of my favourites! Nicely done BF

September 1st, 2010 09:42

Keeping On
bernard franklin said:

Another deeply spiritual poem from you. I loved the line " To buy the church, his bride" Great stuff! Keep it up! BF

August 30th, 2010 06:22

Thank you Lord
bernard franklin said:

First let me welcome you to P & P I hope you enjoy the site. You have written a nice piece of spiritual poetry, its rhyme and rhythm are good and not forced. You obviously have deep religious beliefs and have shared those beliefs well with us. BF

August 29th, 2010 00:01