Comments received on poems by rainbirdroots
The Mountain
orchidee said:
Good write Rain. If at first you don\'t succeed - give up! Ooh no, I went a bit wrong there! lol.
February 2nd, 2019 08:34
orchidee said:
Good write Rain. If at first you don\'t succeed - give up! Ooh no, I went a bit wrong there! lol.
February 2nd, 2019 08:34
The Mountain
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening LAURA ~ Thanks for your opening Poem on MPS ~ EXCELLENT ! I love its OPTIMISM and practical advice ! Hills not Mountains ~ Stay in Bed not Sad ~ Weighed down ? Rearrange ! ~ Showers Baths Shampoos : Dont Worry ~ RETREAT from ANGST ! REALIGN ~ Take your time & love (and value) YOURSELF ~ AMEN
You don\'t have to try & move Mountains ~ just tackle them at the right time and in the right orden Scafell Pike then Snowden then Ben Nevis and THEN EVEREST ! Im a Performance Poet and this Poem is perfect for recitation ~ Rhyme ~ Rhythm ~ Reason !
Thanks for caring & Sharing ~ more please
YOURS BRIAN ~ Please check our site ~ Thanks !
February 1st, 2019 19:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening LAURA ~ Thanks for your opening Poem on MPS ~ EXCELLENT ! I love its OPTIMISM and practical advice ! Hills not Mountains ~ Stay in Bed not Sad ~ Weighed down ? Rearrange ! ~ Showers Baths Shampoos : Dont Worry ~ RETREAT from ANGST ! REALIGN ~ Take your time & love (and value) YOURSELF ~ AMEN
You don\'t have to try & move Mountains ~ just tackle them at the right time and in the right orden Scafell Pike then Snowden then Ben Nevis and THEN EVEREST ! Im a Performance Poet and this Poem is perfect for recitation ~ Rhyme ~ Rhythm ~ Reason !
Thanks for caring & Sharing ~ more please
YOURS BRIAN ~ Please check our site ~ Thanks !
February 1st, 2019 19:07
