Comments received on poems by Iyanna Carroll
A Rhyme of Time
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME IYANNA : ANGELA HERE : Thanks for your first poem ! An excellent Structure of (roughly) 11 rhyming couplets which facilitates reading & reciting. The subject is enigmatic : TIME or the FUNCTION of the BRAIN or both. Time moves foorward at the same pace everywhere : always has always will ! When I started this comment it was 12 noon (Friday) in New Zealand : 11pm (Thursday) in UK & 7 pm (Thursday) in New York USA. Im in NZ : Brian is in UK wherever we are on Earth we might be in different TIME ZONES but we all get 24 hours Thursday & Friday and have done every day of my 30 years ! Is thought (as you suggest) cyclic & repetitive ? We can all think back in TIME (in my case 30 years) and in Human History back thousands of Years ! We can also think into the future ! That is the basis of Science Fiction where DR WHO & other SF Programmes travel backwards & forwards in Space & Time. At the moment that is Scientifically impossible. SANITY enables us to live in present time and think backwards (FACT) and forwards (FICTION & SPECULATION !). Time : by its very nature can never be static and if it is or appears to be : then we are INSANE !
This is a complex SUBJECT nd Im still thinking it out !
Thanks for caring & sharing
Blessings & Peace
Yours through poetry ANGELA 🧡
March 21st, 2019 18:41
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME IYANNA : ANGELA HERE : Thanks for your first poem ! An excellent Structure of (roughly) 11 rhyming couplets which facilitates reading & reciting. The subject is enigmatic : TIME or the FUNCTION of the BRAIN or both. Time moves foorward at the same pace everywhere : always has always will ! When I started this comment it was 12 noon (Friday) in New Zealand : 11pm (Thursday) in UK & 7 pm (Thursday) in New York USA. Im in NZ : Brian is in UK wherever we are on Earth we might be in different TIME ZONES but we all get 24 hours Thursday & Friday and have done every day of my 30 years ! Is thought (as you suggest) cyclic & repetitive ? We can all think back in TIME (in my case 30 years) and in Human History back thousands of Years ! We can also think into the future ! That is the basis of Science Fiction where DR WHO & other SF Programmes travel backwards & forwards in Space & Time. At the moment that is Scientifically impossible. SANITY enables us to live in present time and think backwards (FACT) and forwards (FICTION & SPECULATION !). Time : by its very nature can never be static and if it is or appears to be : then we are INSANE !
This is a complex SUBJECT nd Im still thinking it out !
Thanks for caring & sharing
Blessings & Peace
Yours through poetry ANGELA 🧡
March 21st, 2019 18:41
A Rhyme of Time
Mil57Man said:
Time, what do we really know. Sometimes it go by fast, sometimes slow. Time is forever and this is without a doubt, time is here to work things out.
Very well done lyanna and the rhyme, right on time.
March 21st, 2019 17:36
Mil57Man said:
Time, what do we really know. Sometimes it go by fast, sometimes slow. Time is forever and this is without a doubt, time is here to work things out.
Very well done lyanna and the rhyme, right on time.
March 21st, 2019 17:36
A Rhyme of Time
Poetic Dan said:
That was Incredible! I mean my brain is still chatting and taking off in so many directions! Love finding a treasure like you, thanks for being so amazingly you!
Just went to read more but now I\'ll add welcome too.
Much peace and respect
March 21st, 2019 17:33
Poetic Dan said:
That was Incredible! I mean my brain is still chatting and taking off in so many directions! Love finding a treasure like you, thanks for being so amazingly you!
Just went to read more but now I\'ll add welcome too.
Much peace and respect
March 21st, 2019 17:33
