Comments received on poems by swishbish57
When I was a child
Frank J III said:
Yes, maybe parents are too protective, but thats what we do
June 6th, 2019 08:23
Frank J III said:
Yes, maybe parents are too protective, but thats what we do
June 6th, 2019 08:23
At Home I\'ve Been
Poetic Dan said:
Nature of natural flow
Some of us are built for a nightly stroll.
Keep writing my friend!
May 11th, 2019 03:59
Poetic Dan said:
Nature of natural flow
Some of us are built for a nightly stroll.
Keep writing my friend!
May 11th, 2019 03:59
Mom Never Told Me
Poetic Dan said:
Loved it could feel a real Beastie Boys kick, keep spitting those lines till you here a click.... Click... No that\'s not a gun it\'s the sound of your own inner drum, knowing you\'ve become as awesome as anyone!
Cheers for the inspiration ;)
Much peace and respect
May 11th, 2019 03:56
Poetic Dan said:
Loved it could feel a real Beastie Boys kick, keep spitting those lines till you here a click.... Click... No that\'s not a gun it\'s the sound of your own inner drum, knowing you\'ve become as awesome as anyone!
Cheers for the inspiration ;)
Much peace and respect
May 11th, 2019 03:56
Poetry In A Hurry
Poetic Dan said:
Poetry in hurry, mine never turns off!
I guess that\'s why we\'re all here
As we just can\'t get enough!
I\'ll definitely second tepos sentiment
With a rhythmic welcome and stuff
May 11th, 2019 03:46
Poetic Dan said:
Poetry in hurry, mine never turns off!
I guess that\'s why we\'re all here
As we just can\'t get enough!
I\'ll definitely second tepos sentiment
With a rhythmic welcome and stuff
May 11th, 2019 03:46
Late Hour
Poetic Dan said:
Express you did with a positive vibe
I hope your next day goes peacefully by
May 11th, 2019 03:42
Poetic Dan said:
Express you did with a positive vibe
I hope your next day goes peacefully by
May 11th, 2019 03:42
